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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Res.

I'm dying to read this OS. Will read it soon and comment 😳

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ksen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

amazing

beautifully written

perfect ending

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Taahir

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Aarti went Yash's grandparents home , remembering moments spend with him
I was amazed that even Yash came there but his determination to have her in his life even when he knew his parents were against Aarti and she too felt that her shadow would befall him , but he did not deter Aarti accepted to marry him with the blessing of his parents and they also had to eventually accept Aarti

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Oh Jhillu that was so beautiful! AarYa are together, happy and complete; they have his parent's blessings and they have their little one!

out of such a tragic event something beautiful came about; two souls that are meant to be found their way to each other. Aarti tried to run away yet even in that decision she could not be strong because deep down her soul was calling for Yash and he found her. Just like she did he must have gone there to relive their memories but got one better when he found her there.

he gave her no chance to refuse him and his love overpowered her conviction to leave him. he then gave her the ammunition to win his parents over by telling her things about them; finally she had the love of parents. Gayatri was concerned about her during childbirth.

I loved how he supported her and enabled her to let go of her fears until finally she saw that those who truly love us see beyond our flaws, to what really matters, our heart, our love for them. Her daughter smiled at her because all she sees is her loving mother, beautiful to her for the love she shows her; reflecting back that same love, that same heart in it's perfect imperfection.

once again thank you for such a wonderful treat Jhilly. The subject was sensitive but you handled it with the care that it required and gave us a heartwarming, beautiful tale! ❤️

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caller123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

I really loved this story Jhil.

It was really different. We need people like Yash in this society.

I agree with you it's not sympathy people need but love.

Thank you so much for giving us this story dear. I have no words for this.

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annirogc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

emotional part..its a wonderful story

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roserosey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

jhil its just beautiful dear 👏

i had tears in my eyes u see not everyone is lucky to Yash kind of person in their life especially as a life partner i know aarti is also a gem of a person but i can surely say that she is blessed to have Yash in her life ...

wow !!! Yash family loves her so much and gave their support and enough confidence to go through this all along !!

and now their their princess and yes as they said she will be a proud daughter and make their parents proud 😃

firstly for ur this brave and beautiful attempt 👏...and a heartfelt thank u that u thought to work on this 👏

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Busi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Beautiful ending Jhill dear. Am so in luv wit the final chptr i cnt get enough of it.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Jhil

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

This has become one of my favorite stories by you 👏. I thought Dreams was the one. But you surpassed it. 👏

The concept ⭐️

Th title ⭐️

The feelings and emotions that you've portrayed ⭐️

You know few weeks back I saw a promo of one of reality shows where they show struggles of ordinary people in India. In that promo they showed a woman who's face was burned with acid, just like Aarti's in this one.

While reading this OS, that woman's face was flashing in front of my eyes snd that made me appreciate your efforts on writing on such a sensitive issue, all the more. 👏

My only regret or take it as a request is that I wish that you had shown the reaction of Arshi when she grew up and her friends made fun of Aarti's face.

Please if possible try to show this, as it will increase the intensity of this beautiful story.

It ok even if you don't show it, I'm just happy with the fact that you have touched such a sensitive issues and that also so brilliantly ⭐️

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Jhil
⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

This has become one of my favorite stories by you 👏. I thought Dreams was the one. But you surpassed it. 👏

The concept ⭐️

Th title ⭐️

The feelings and emotions that you've portrayed ⭐️
You know few weeks back I saw a promo of one of reality shows where they show struggles of ordinary people in India. In that promo they showed a woman who's face was burned with acid, just like Aarti's in this one.
While reading this OS, that woman's face was flashing in front of my eyes snd that made me appreciate your efforts on writing on such a sensitive issue, all the more. 👏

My only regret or take it as a request is that I wish that you had shown the reaction of Arshi when she grew up and her friends made fun of Aarti's face.

Please if possible try to show this, as it will increase the intensity of this beautiful story.
It ok even if you don't show it, I'm just happy with the fact that you have touched such a sensitive issues and that also so brilliantly ⭐️

Jhillu jhu please do consider this! pretty, pretty please; pouting! 😆

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