PV SS ' Enough! (LAST PART - PAGE 6)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is the story of Aarti in Hulk mode after returning from Mumbai.

PV SS - Enough!

PART 1 & 2 - PAGE 1
PART 3 - PAGE 2
PART 4 - PAGE 3
PART 5 & 6 - PAGE 4
EPILOGUE - PAGE 6
She was standing in the middle of the living room facing his family after her had shoved her, humiliated her in front of his family, in front of the children, after they had returned from Mumbai. And now they are looking accusingly at her.

Something in Aarti snapped. Ignoring her mother-in-law she ran after Yash. SHE HAS HAD ENOUGH!

"Didn't I tell you to stay away from me? What are still doing here! "He shouted.

"I will leave Yashji, but not before I said what I have to say!" she screamed back.

"Bahu!" shouted her mother-in-law. The whole family had followed her.

"No ma, this is between my husband and I. Today no-one will be able to stop me." Everyone was shocked.

"Are you going to tell me what I did Yashji?"

"Don't pretend you don't know. How can you forget the sin you committed. I said leave", he shouted.

"I don't remember, believe me or don't believe me. I don't care anymore. I agreed to this marriage to give my son a father and to be the mother to your girls. I fell in love with you, when, where, how and why, I don't know but I did. But I will not tolerate this. This is not the first time you shoved me Yashji, but it will be the last. At least when Prashant misbehaved with me, Ma & Bauji stood by me, but here, I have no one but my children. And you might as well know that I am not a widow, I am a divorcee. He left me for another woman." She was oblivious to the reaction of the Scindyia's when she made that statement. She continued, "I have done all I can to be loved and accepted by this family. But it is never enough. I have been humiliated and thrown out of this house, and today I will leave of my own accord. She took off Arpita's bangles and threw them down. These bangles were taken away from me forcefully and today I am giving them back willingly. You don't want me to touch Aarpita's things, right Yashji. There has never been a place for me in this house, in this room and there will never be place for me in your heart. I have accepted this now. I will leave so you can live here in the memories of your dead wife. I will not be second best anymore. I am sick and tired of wasting my time and energy for the love of men who don't deserve it, who don't deserve me. I will grant you your wish, Yashji. Bauji, you are good at getting divorce papers arranged quickly, right. Please arrange for it again. It will be uncontested. The only good thing I have gotten from this house are my girls. You said I am their mother right, Yashji. Today I am taking all my children with me. And make no mistake, I will fight tooth and nail to keep them."

She left the room as the family still stood there in shock. Collected her children and left - for good.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow! wow! wow! this is a nice early morning surprise! I loved that Aarti was passed furious and express all the hurt that she has been keeping inside!
wow she took all three kids with her too! 😲 now I want to see more, please convert it into an SS dear PLEASE!
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Thanks for always giving such great encouragement Tessaloni. Your comments made me think that the story is worth exploring. I have completed the last 2 chapters of First Impressions so I might continue here.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Whoaa...that was an curt n fantastic outburst of our Aarti which was very much needed n I sooo wished to see in d show.
Plz do continue this n fingers crossed to see the reactions of Yash n d Sindhia family.
This is really a wonderful take by u on d Mumbai track.
And plz do teach a gud lesson to Gayatri n Suraj.
So much partiality b/w sons n bahus..worst of in laws species..
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I have decided to continue. Here is part 2 but honestly, I really don't know where I am going with this story.

Part 2

AT SM AFTER AARTI LEFT:

The first one to re-act was of course Bua. "MBK, how dare that girl talk to us like that? She disrespected us in our own home. Who does she think she is? I knew that that low class girl was not good enough for our Yash and look now. She is taking our girls", she said angrily.

"Ji, you have to do something. You have to bring our grandchildren back", said G3.

"Don't worry, I won't let her get away with this. I will destroy her"said, Suraj.

"No", they heard. "No, leave her." Yash finally spoke again.

"Yash..." his mother started.

"I said leave her, ma. She is not wrong. She has just as much right on the girls as we do. It was you who insisted on the Punar Vivah isn't it. You wanted me to get married so my children can have a mother. Well they have a mother that loves them and has every right to keep them with her."

"Yash, you are not thinking clearly his father said.

"Bauji, you trust me to make big decisions concerning this family and the company every day. What make you think that I have lost the ability to make these decisions all of a sudden? Do you think I don't know what is best for my daughters?"

At least tell us what happened yash. Said his father.

That is between my ... between Aartiji and I. I have nothing more to say about this. He turned and went to the bathroom. They were dismissed.

AT DUBEY HOUSE:

"Aarti, why did you do that? Why did you just leave without finding out what has caused Yash to re-act that way? He is your husband. Are you just giving up on your marriage like that", said Shoba.

"Yes ma, I have giving up. I fought for Prashant and where did that get me. I asked Yash repeatedly what I had done, and he wouldn't tell me. How much more, Ma, how much more do you expect me to take? I am done. I don't expect you and bauji to take care of all of us. I will find a place for us soon, but please don't make me go back to that house. I will rather sleep on the streets with my kids.

"Of course you are always welcome to stay here as long as you want. But I still don't understand, you love him, beta."

"Yes, ma. I love him more than anything. More than I even loved Prashant. That is why the pain of his constant rejection is so unbearable." She finally lost control and sobbed in her mother's arms.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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you may not know where you are going but you have started off pretty well. I loved that Yash stood up for her rights to his family! at least he did that right but his rejection hurts her so much, poor Aarti
keep going dear, I know you will come up with something amazing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1 wow!! i love it !1 Aarti behaved like me when I am pissed 😆😃 I enjoyed it LOVE THIS REAL WORLD AARTI 😆😃 she shocked everyone including me 😃 a nice change
thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie

Thanks for always giving such great encouragement Tessaloni. Your comments made me think that the story is worth exploring. I have completed the last 2 chapters of First Impressions so I might continue here.

I am glad to because you have a great talent! ⭐️ I just love the flow of your stories dear. thank you for deciding to continue!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2 Yes I love it!!! Keep going this is fantastic very real now if the show had this many audience members would of related. Yash needs a serious wake up, his family needs to realize and accept that he is a grown man I liked his answer to his family.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb dear.
Keep on writing. I love the way Aarthi burst out. It was needed.

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