Punar Vivah FF My Version AarYa's story49 Page 102 UPDATE 12/5/18 - Page 9

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Still waiting for your master piece dear
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Chapter eight
Scindhia Mansion

As Yash entered his home his father came towards him " Beta I hope you remember that we are leaving in the morning for Delhi by train for our annual visit to baba's shrine [ sorry buddies don't know the name used in the show but it is the same place] so make sure you are packed" "Ji bau ji I will ensure Ramdulare do the packing of the girl's and mine's luggage" answered Yash excused himself and walked with a quick stride towards his room, he had something important to discuss with his Aripita. Walking directly to his favourite photo of his dear wife Yash places the single rose he brought beneath her picture. Aripta you are my best friend nah, even when you were here you listened to my ramblings, I knew you did not understand about my work or the business, but your smile give me the feelings of peace and made me relax, your gentle massage on my neck and shoulders relaxed me.
Today I saw her again who you asked rose petal girl the one I told you about from thr resent wedding I organizes, well I went to the mall to buy gifts for the girls, and I saw her with an older couple her parents I guess, she looked so sad on the verge of tears; you know what your Yashu did I followed her home just to make sure that she is safe. Aripi she looked so hurt and lost I felt her pain by looking at her, and I don't understand why I feel so close to her as if I know her maybe in a past life we were related or maybe friends, but I can't shake this feeling that I know her strange right?
Aripi don't feel bad because I am talking about her it just that I can't speak of this with the family they will want to marry immediately me to her, and you know I will not marry anyone give your place in this family to anyone, after all ma choose you she loved you not like a bahu but as her daughter, I am awear Vidhi bhabhi tried not to be jealous or angry because ma treated you both so differently she allowed you to wear what you wanted thoes anarkali dresses, salwar suits, and allowed you to keep your head uncovered in front of them where as bhabhi have to only wear sarees, and keep her head covered in the presence of the elders. Ma showered you with so much love and affection; and with bhabhi she is more strick and controlling, we both know no one can take your place so why should I remarry, I am happy with your memories all round me you are the wife they choose for me, they told me I are supose to love my wife, have one wife that she is my best friend, my lover, my life partner, commit my life to one woman, my wife the mother of my children; this is what my parents taught me, now they want me to have a second wife why should I go against what I belive??

Dubey House

" Aarti beta have you finished packing" enquired Shoba ma " Ji ma" answered Aarti "Mumma we are going on the train to Delhi yeah!" said an excited Ansh jumping on the bed " Ansh be careful you will fall." scolded Aarti "but mumma i like jumping" continued naughty boy " And when you fall and hurt yourself you will enjoy crying too by yourself because mumma will not hug you or give you kissy." stated Aarti in mock anger Ansh stopped his game he suspected his mumma was fooling him but just in case she is indeed serious he stoped no huggy or kissy noway his is a good boy who listens to his mumma. Aarti give a smile when her naughty baby was not looking at her, and a stern face when he looked ith his puppy eyes and smile.

On the Train

The Scindhia family settled them self in first class, while the Dubeys were in second class.
Vidhi was serving the family lunch and they were having a friendly chat, Vidhi mention that it is a year that they found out about Prateek's girlfriend Pariadhi, and with baba's blessings maybe there will be two bahu entering the family, saying this she looked at Yash so did G3 and bau ji, Yash was not impressed Prateek said bhayia I love you but I won't marry before you, same time his phone ring it was Paridhi, G3 was not pleased " These modern girls are so shameless three/ four time she rings in a day you are not married yet can't she have patience." Vidhi signal for Prateek to take the call he made his excuse and left.

Ansh was playing with his toys Aarti tried to get him to eat but naughty boy wanted to play, suddenly she said I want to pee use the toilet please, so hid mumma took him to the toilet. Yash on the other side he too had a sudden urge to use the toilet made his way there. Aarti was at the sink and Yash was out of the washroom on the way to use the sink when his noticed, felt and got a odour of something familiar it was a lady he said " excuse me are you done using the wash basin ?" "Ji I am" Aarti turned both facing each other shocked "Rose petal girl" "Arrogant Man" both addressed each other simultaneous "What did you say?" again simultaneous they both smile then again simultaneous "You first" Aarti raised her right hand indicating to stop "You first" she said " Hello how are you my name is Yash Scindhia not arrogant man" Yash smiled Aarti returned his smile "and my name is Aarti Dubey not rose petal girl, How do you do" "Mr Scindhia I know this is not the right place to be thanking you for your understanding of the situation with the lights but I am saying thank you for your co-operation, and full payment." expounded Aarti she noticed the look of surprise followed by disappointment on his face and wondered about it Yash self thought so this is the hockey gundi so the pocket size gunda is her son damn she is married why god, he realized that he was just stearing and Aarti was waiting for an answer he said " no problem it was just a miscommunication all sought out now, it was nice meeting you Aartiji maybe we will speak again for business purpose." " Sure may be Mr, Scindhia" replied Aarti with a smile both sais excuse and went their respective way.
Ansh "mumma who is that uncle?" while washing his hands "Some one badi papa does business with" she responded "Mumma what is over there ?" pointing to the first class compartment " That is the AC compartment Ansh" said Aarti naughty boy Ansh escaped his mother's hold ran into the AC compartment and bumped into the ticket collector, Aarti who had followed her son into the compartment was shocked,nervous, and a bit fearful when the man asked for their tickets, Aarti tried to explain that her son ran here by mistake and that they are seated in second class, but the man became angry and was about to fine her after a scolding about reaping the benifits of Ac with out paying, and how that is a crime; Prateek who had entered when the scolding begun heard everything, he recognize Aarti, and Ansh and came to their rescue " Sir here is their ticket see this is my bhabhi Vidhi Scindhia" he gestured to Aarti to shush that he will handle the situation. The ticket collector left satisfied. Aarti "How can a ruffian like you be travelling first class?" Prateek "You were the captain of your collage hockey team so you have manners so say thank you" Aarti "Thank you You surname is Scindhia your are Mr Yash Scindhia's brother?" Prateek "Yes" "Well your brother is nice, and understanding he payed us the money for the lights" explained Aarti " Where are you going" asked a curious Prateek , too which Ansh replied "to baba's shrine in Delhi" Aarti tried covering her son's mouth but to late Prateek heard their destination "excuse us " said Aarti and took Ansh's hand leading back to their seats scolding him along the way.Prateek looked at them walking away, he smiled and self talk strange one day scolding Yash bhayia another day praising him. Maybe could she be the one.

Yash returned to his seat leaning his head on the window glass lost in his own world hi thoughts Aarti a nice name, so she plays hockey, and is active in her father's business, so she has a son, oh god she is married, she belong to some one else. Why god why did you allow another man to met her before me?? But where is he? I wonder if he is on board with them of course he is, If she was mine I won't let her out of my sight and my son would be with me at my side. Aarti Dubey a beautiful name but Aarti Yash Scindhia would be the best smiling to himself. So lost in his private world he did not notice the looks his family give him G3 was so worried she had tears in her eyes "Ji we have to do something about Yash soon look at him he is lost in his memories he miss Aripta bahu so much we have to convince him some how for this remarriage if not we my loose our son." "Gayatri I understand but how are we going to force him to accept someone else and move on in life?" answered Suraj ji

Prateek came up with a brilliant plan there was a guy selling fries he took a plate went to his Yash bhayia waved his hand to gain his attention a couple of times, then placed the plate in front of his nose "bhayia i want some money to pay for this plate " when Yash looked at him with an angry glare Prateek repeated "Money bhayia" this time snapping his fingers Yash who was irate at his chote for disturbing him from his dream world give him the money and said " Where is your wallet chote??" "In my luggage I am saving my money to buy Paridhi a gift " he answered with a cute little boy smile this smile always melts his Yash bhayia heart.

Prateek said loud enough for his family to hear Paridhi father is threaten to marry her to someone else, he says that I am taking to long to marry her and she is becoming older that it is time for us to marry or move on. Bhayia you know how much I love her and she loves me but I made a promise that I will get married only after you do. I don't want to loose Paridhi Bhayia if her father marries her to someone else I don't know what I will do she is my life.Please bhayia for your chote sake agree to marry, I know you love Bhayia and you will do the right thing said a sad Prateek "Paridhi called to say that her father wants an answer by tomorrow if I dont agree then it is bye bye pari " he expounded with tears in his eyes.
G3 wanted to interject in their conversation but Suraj held her hand to stop he because he realized what his youngest son was up too, he also signaled to Pankaj, and Vidhi to keep quiet. Maya just looked and listened mumbling to herself MBKK and rolled her eyes.
Yash did not respond he loved his family so much, and he loved Aripta but if Paridhi father is serious and marry his daughter to some one else chote may try to hurt himself or do something equally stupid no I can't take that risk I love you Aripita but I love my family more.
"OKay Chote I agree, you can tell your Paradhi to start planning for your wedding." Yash said hugging his chote. The Scindhia family was shocked by the turn of events.

The train made it stop at a station for a few minutes Aarti, Shoba ma, and Ansh came out Prateek who wanted to talk to Paradhi in private left his seat; he noticed Aarti, and Ansh an idea came to him "Ma and bhabhi come with me let me show you something please" " What is it beta?" asked G3 "Come nah Ma Bhabhi " he insisted they followed him to the door "Look there Ma, Bhabhi the lady with the girl, and little boy at the toy stall see them she has on a brown, and blue saiwar suit, her mother the blue saree you see" he pointed to Aarti, Shoba and Ansh "Ji beta why are you showing us these people and why are you so excited???" asked G3 " Ma she is perfect for Yash bhayia so she has a son ans he is a bit naughty but i like them very much she is Mr. Dubey's daughter the one I spoke about with the hockey stick" G3 was shocked at this suggestion " You want you brother to marry a woman with a child?? Are you mad??" Vidhi interject "Mamiji Bauji wants a mature woman for Yash bhayia who can understand him and the girls, she has a son therefore she knows how to handle children, she is what twenty seven or eight she seems mature enough lets give it a thought speak to bauji." Vidhi liked the look of Aarti.

The train's whistle blew signalling time to get on board Aarti, Ansh, and Shoba returned to their compartment, Prateek, G3, and Vidhi to their seats.
G3 whispered to Suraj about Prateek suggestion for Aarti, that she had a son Suraj give his consent for G3 to move with a propasal to the Dubeys for their daughter hand for their son Yash.
"Vidhi it's time let us go" said G3 Pankaj wanted to know where were they going Vidhi told him in time he would know and give him a loving smile before accompany her sas to the second class compartment.

They met Shoba in the washroom area, introduced them self asked to meet her husband, and if they could speak in private. They inquired about Aarti,and Ansh told about Yash, and his daughters, made their proposal for the marriage of Aarti to Yash. {Juat Like In The Show]
They found out that Aarti is the Dubeys bahu not their daughter the lied was said about her being a widow instead of her true marital status of a divorcee.{Just Like In The Show] Decisions to contact each other and exchange photos of AarYa made telephone numbers exchanged, horoscope to be sent for checking.

Hi Buddies sorry for the mistakes 😆 I will update again after I update my FF Relationships 😆 Thanks all for your support [A very big hug to you all] 🤗
Edited by Sharlene1410 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
part 1
just superb
yash showered petals on aarti much to aarti's aanoyance loll
its fun to read this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update. Brought all the scenes from the show back. Thank you,
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow this was my fav update of this ff by far! "rose petal girl" "arrogant man" had me laughing hard! that and Yash's self-thoughts were my fav! can't wait for the proposals and their reactions to them!

update soon pretty please Sharlene!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2&3

amazing
aarti blasted at yash and he is in his dreamland
god he is thinking if he had met her earlier she could be his wife
not bad yash
yash is still in arpita but he needs to get out pretty soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fab parts
loving the flow of the story
prashant as usual good for nothing
yash is concerned for his daughters but still wants t live in past
his and aarti's talks were too good and prateek's meeting with gundi's loll

pocket size gundi lolll
it was too good
ragu is a rogue good aarti slapped that good for nothing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful Update Dear 👏
Eagerly waiting for AarYa's reaction, what will be there reaction
Can't wait continue soon dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 8
amazing
I love prateeks little scheming and making aarti his bhabhi
that's so cute yr
loving this version a lot

I was thing what is MBKK now I get it its mere bhagwan Ki kasam right

thanks for all the PMS
I hope u don't mind me getting late in readimg
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update dear. A am speechless a cat caught my tongue and my stomach still hurt from laughing. I feel like am watching married again the second time.

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