Originally posted by: jhillyarya
Oh thank you so much for keeping my request..
yet I don't know what you are planning as i am feeling something fishy (i don't know the reason of such feeling)
but I so hope it is just my wrong feeling..
I understand the reaction of the family. Aarti was positive but the position of the family also was in such that trusting anyone or any situation not so easy..
Specially Pankaj. I liked that you showed his condition, his helplessness. he loves his young brother, he saw him to suffer so his outburst was natural..
But yet the family is supportive, to Aarti's attempts otherwise Yash would have to bear many dangerous therapies..
My heart cried at the moment when you gave me the part of Yash.. i could feel his helplessness.. Poor guy even if he tried he couldn't come out from the grip of darkness.. How much it can be hurt when he can understand something, he want to react but can't..
Aarti had used the girls as that was needed.. it was sure that he react when his close ones in trouble or in sadness, it tried to bring him out but again there was a limit..
It become possible only then when She was near, so near.. the fear he has to loose her that bring her out.. I am glad that they gave up to their argues at last in the form of making love.. the separation of years made it way into the reunion..
Thank you very much for this emotional but beautiful part, at least the smile come after the tears..
and now again my same request.. you know what.. i am not using my red emo because you kept my request.. Thank you once again..
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