AarYa SS 'Ek Ladki Bheegi Bhaagi Si'- Chapter-4, Pg-16 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Zetter

Happy New Year to you and yours as well, Nikki 🤗 ❤️

Great start...Liked the little drama between Yash, Aarti, Prateek and Paradhi haha

Aarti and Yash are so into each other, they were hit by the love at first sight bug 😉

I'm looking forward to the next installment 😊

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

what are you talking about Nikki? I loved it from the first line! this is awesome!!! I loved Aarti's impulsive nature, I loved Yash's smugness, I loved the stirrings of desire, I loved the self-thoughts, the descriptions of appearance entailed in their lusty thoughts. It's sensual, it's funny, it is pure romance!

as for the title, the first part is a good hint, she is drenched, he finds her appearance alluring and her attitude fascinating because of it! he does not even seem to feel that he is getting drenched himself drawn so much by her, yet while he is getting wet he still thirst for her, desires her, a taste of her: I really loved the use of gustatory imagery there, even that droplet that she licks which at first disgust him yet lures him. in addition the movement of her tongue and the droplets, of her hands -she gesticulates and draws his attention to them, and plaid bouncing with her movements: a very good use of kinesthetic imagery to indicate how those movements increase his growing attraction to her. then there is tactile imagery just with the touch of their hands; the current that goes through them with just that simple touch, his rubbing of her hand without conscious thought to linger that touch.

I also love how they look out for their sibling's best interest. hmmm just beautifully written!!!!! very eager for the next already!

Originally posted by: ksen

that was an interesting start

loved it

enjoyed reading aarya's self thoughts

precap is exciting

curious to read the next part

thanks for the pm