AarYa SS, 'Naughty At...' Chapter- 10, Page- 49

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ksen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

wonderful update.loved it

beautifully written.

thanks for the pm

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Zetter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Fabulous update Nikki ❤️

Aww can I tell you how much I love AarYa and Kajal together, tvey aretoo cute 😊

Ansh and Viren are such sweethearts, they understood where AarYa's coming from but Palax and Naina wow what a pair of naysayers opposing our AarYa's marriage proposal 😔 😡

Please let Kajal and Aayu be in the next chapter cause AarYa need all thereinforcements they can get 😉

Good luck with everything and an early Happy Valentine's Day to you also 🤗

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Folla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

thanks for the PM dear amazing update i love aayra romance and so excited to know how palak and naina well accept the marriage and to know aayu reaction

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Sahiba

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

really glad u updated...

lovely part..

kajal is one naughty yet sweet girl...loved her confidence,,,

all their convos were great..loved the little tesings by kajal...

his story we got to know...

but what was the secret he was talking about/// curious to know about that

naina's and palak's reaction was i guess predictable..

lets see how others will react...

cont soon

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roserosey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

commented on page 9 😃

this is my 14000 th post and this post is dedicated for u !!😉😃

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jayshu17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

update!!!👏👏👏 👏👏👏Loved Aarya and Kajal convo.its so lovely❤️❤️❤️Anch and Viran can understand Aarya and support their marriage but Naina and Palak denied it😡Waiting eagerly for the next

for the PM dear😃

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saf24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Superb update. People's mentality deeply influences the way a person reacts to certain things in society. I really loved the way Kaajal stood up for Yash and Aarti's love and by extenstion Viren and Ansh. Fab job as always.

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Surish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Marvellous update! Though Naina and Palaak are utterly disappointed with Arya's marriage. they eventually learn to accept it with time

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: roserosey
a fantastic update di 👏...
the characterization of kajal is excellent ...she is really very mature intelligent funloving girl as yash said...this society i tell u for themevery little thing they make an issue out of it and make the people so low and cheap ...one should never care abt the society when they tru;y trust themselves with what they had chosen with their heart ...
i would love to see kajal as the future daughter in law of aarthi 😉... she is one lovely and vibrant girl ...even she care for the strangers and she stood for the right !!

haha...yash is always so sweet 😳...such a dignified human being i respect him for the way he never wanted to hide his identity or his past from aarthi most importantly he never hide his feelings and gave a chance for his love to grow ...he is so perfect !!...and ofcourse he is romantic ☺️...

aarthi ...and this is how most of the woman are...scared abt the societys views ...and in the way she became a slave to this cruel side of the society ...i m glad that she chose her love above her fear for what people say ...

and as like them their children r wonderful. they r so loving and so supportive especially ansh aayu and viren...i hope palak had a reason why she wouldnt want her father to get married...would like to know their perspective ...and how their love will fight all the odds ...

really a wonderful update 👏...
happy valentines in advance...
love u and take care di 🤗

First of all congrats 👏 . And Thank You so much for dedicating your 14,000th post to your favorite MTB. 🤗

Secondly, happy Valentines Day to you ❤️

Rosey the more I kept writing on Kajal, the more I kept on falling in love with her character. This is what I wanted to show as Aarushi's character in MTB. But since it is all about AarYa in that fiction, I couldn't explore much on Aarushi's character. Here I am happy as Kajal plays a pivotal role in this OS.

After AarYa and Gayatri from MTB, if I loved some other character in my stories than that's Kajal. 😳

She will fight with more people for AarYa. She is pure at heart. Like you said for truth and the right thing, she went and supported and fought for AarYa. But she is naughty also. Let me warn you her first meeting with Aayu will be quite "Dhamakedaar" 😉. Hmm.. Regarding Kajal being AarYa's DIL... Well

I don't know if I will show after AarYa marriage scenes. As I want to end the OS on their marriage. Let's see if I change my mind by the time I reach the end or not?

Yash, my all time favorite . The more naughtier and romantic I show him the more I fall in love with him ☺️. I better not talk about him or I might not stop talking about him 😉

Aarti, can we blame her for being so scared? She raised her kids alone. She's been alone for the past twenty some years. Now happiness is standing at her doorstep and she's scared to open that door. 😭

But our Kajal, Ansh and Viren are there.

Palak's and Naina's reason are valid. You will learn about that later, not so soon. After that you won't feel angry with them. Except for Prashant (who will come for a very small scene) there are no villain in this story 😳

You will love Palak and Naina later, after all, like Ansh and Viren said, their wives are not bad person. They are just hotheaded. They love their wives, as they have good heart. 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Fandu
Nikki what an update, thank you. You left us with such a hanger...I loved the emotions shown by Yash and Arti's dilemma. As always a great job! Take care and take time out for yourself and rest. Have a great Valentine's Day!

Thanks so much Mandy.

So sorry to leave at cliffhanger. The chapter had become too long, so I had to stop it. Next chapter will start with this scene only. Which will be a detaliled one.

In next chapter also AarYa's dilemma will increase. Don't worry, Ansh and Viren and Kajal are there.

Thanks for being so understanding. I will try to give next update as soon as I get time to work on it.

Happy Valentines Day to you too ❤️