AarYa OS : you are my princess - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it An Amazing Os please do write others when you have time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Ken,
Absolutely superb way to start your journey in this field of writing!

To me it was hard to think and believe that it is your first attempt.

It had all the elements of a great day in AarYa's life ---- right from the simple need of being with each other, little naughty incidents and of course the love they had and shared.

The kids being a part of their life and acting as a booster to recreate the magic in their relationship was also shown so well by you.

Congratulations and
I am hoping to read a lot more from you.

Sorry for this long comment.
I had to tell you how good your OS was!

Excellent!!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ken this OS is simply marvelous. ⭐️
If you had not mentioned, I would've never guessed that you are writing for the very first time.

It has all the elements of AarYa, their naughtiness, their romance, Yashji's forgetful nature, Aarti getting angry. Their cute banter. Aarti using kids to take sweet revenge from Yashji 😆. I could go on and on and on.

Loved it. And hoping to see and read more such cute AarYa stories from you. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ths is really nice and so lovely dear.. Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chitsri65

<font size="3">K</font>en - Ur thoughts simply flowed and turned into a good simple story - is how this OS looked to me.
You should write more often - for I do find a beautiful writer in you - this OS certainly did not look like your first attempt - Brilliant ⭐️⭐️⭐️


thank you sooo much for the lovely comment 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pankhudi_TiaRa

My god Ken you write so well , actually amazing !😛
Totally loved it ..👏👏👏. Please keep writing , i would love to read your work 😳.

Thanks for PM :)


hey there, thank u for the lovely comment, much appreciated
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Anuraksha

Congratzzz ken...wow awesome os ken..really loved it..


thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sb1410

Love it An Amazing Os please do write others when you have time.


thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

<font color="#0000ff">Hi Ken,</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Absolutely superb way to start your journey in this field of writing!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">To me it was hard to think and believe that it is your first attempt.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">It had all the elements of a great day in AarYa's life ---- right from the simple need of being with each other, little naughty incidents and of course the love they had and shared.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">The kids being a part of their life and acting as a booster to recreate the magic in their relationship was also shown so well by you.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Congratulations and</font>
<font color="#0000ff">I am hoping to read a lot more from you.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Sorry for this long comment.</font>
<font color="#0000ff">I had to tell you how good your OS was!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Excellent!!!!!⭐️⭐️</font>



hey there 😊
thank u for the wonderful comment. It really means a lot coming from such a great writer like yourself
😛
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Ken this OS is simply marvelous.⭐️

If you had not mentioned, I would've never guessed that you are writing for the very first time.

It has all the elements of AarYa, their naughtiness, their romance, Yashji's forgetful nature, Aarti getting angry. Their cute banter. Aarti using kids to take sweet revenge from Yashji😆. I could go on and on and on.

Loved it. And hoping to see and read more such cute AarYa stories from you.😳



Helloo nikki di (hope its ok with u if I call u that) 😛
thank u so much for the lovely comment 😊

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