'FOR YOU ONLY' epilogue UPDATED - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Jhil, first of all, don't you ever talk about on quitting to write.
Actually every writer in this forum is facing the same problem and that is that they are loosing readers. The reason is not writers writing, but the fact that not many people visit this forum, like they did earlier.
But there are still people like me and others, who likes to read. So please don't stop writing for their sake.
Like I said in my previous comment (the one above the 15th chapter) that though I might be late in reading and commenting, but I'll definitely read and comment.

Now coming to the update.

Yash was not wrong for getting angry with her for giving up on her dream, but his behavior was wrong. But I can't blame him also, as he was angry and is not aware of the whole truth. But sadly it was too late, as now Aarti is fighting for her life.

I'll wait for Aarti's reason to give up on her dreams. Initially I thought that it was her father who forced her to do something else, but now I feel that she's fulfilling Shobha's dream, of which Yash is not aware of.

Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

I'm so so so sorry Jhil. Though I had read the remaining updates, I couldn't comment on them immediately.

First of all Thank You So Much for such a beautiful Valentines Day gift/ Treat.

I'm loving how the story is moving ahead. They've been in love for last five years and day by day their love is increasing. Yash is so possessive of her. I love this side of Yash. But this is what will make him angry with her.
Now that he's going away for two months, I'm sure Aarti's father will do something while he's gone. Maybe that's when he'll fix Aarti's marriage and will force her to marry someone else, just like he forced her to give up on her dreams, and choose the subject of his choice.

Jhil, though I'll be able late in reading and commenting, but I'll definitely read and comment 😳


thanx di, i know you are reading.. thanx for liking.. hmm, all the doubts will clr soon. till now aarti's father not responsible but for the next he is. you'll come to know everything soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: roserosey

hey jhil ...where r u ? hope u r doing well...šŸ˜•


i am ok rosey di, just was busy with daily stuffs..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Jhil, first of all, don't you ever talk about on quitting to write.

Actually every writer in this forum is facing the same problem and that is that they are loosing readers. The reason is not writers writing, but the fact that not many people visit this forum, like they did earlier.
But there are still people like me and others, who likes to read. So please don't stop writing for their sake.
Like I said in my previous comment (the one above the 15th chapter) that though I might be late in reading and commenting, but I'll definitely read and comment.

Now coming to the update.

Yash was not wrong for getting angry with her for giving up on her dream, but his behavior was wrong. But I can't blame him also, as he was angry and is not aware of the whole truth. But sadly it was too late, as now Aarti is fighting for her life.

I'll wait for Aarti's reason to give up on her dreams. Initially I thought that it was her father who forced her to do something else, but now I feel that she's fulfilling Shobha's dream, of which Yash is not aware of.


actualy i was upset with some other reason also. but i wont stop it, can promise this dffntly..

and and, i know thr still some confusn but cant bring everything in one part. in next part rest questions will be cover.. tahnk you for commenting..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved readin d update,i like yash's sincere affection but not at d cost of insultin Aathi's dadšŸ˜”...hmm don know wat to say abt commentin,actually i am late in reading d last 4 chapters,wish u continue and enjoy ur workšŸ¤—...
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh jhil i m happy that u r fine and got busy with ur stuffs u know congrats for thatšŸ˜ƒšŸ¤—
coming to the update:
really a emotional stressed updatešŸ‘...
u know u had written so many lighthearted moments andso many lovely moments but this emotional update was so good jhilšŸ‘šŸ‘...aarya conversation said how much yash loves aarthi and wt her dreams mean to him...though aarthi didnt yeet said entire truth i wonder what is holding her back in confessing evrything to yash ...her yash...why is she scared to share that truth to yash??
we r yet to know all this and i m waiting so excitedly to know the reason behind aarthi leaving behind her dream...

yes yash anger overpowered him today ...hmm...he shouldnt have talked that rudely with her father but then ...all happened ...and that slap😭😭...more than the slap i felt pain when aarthi said that it was her life and she would make the decision😭😭...how can she say such things to yash????...but then i understand that noone r actually responsible for wt happened today b/n aarya...but yet ...it caused a rift in their lovely relationship😭😭...

wonderful job jhilā­ļø

ok take ur time to update but never stop writing jhil😃
will be waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor yash...i dont understand aarti...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic chapters - Wow is the word...the story is finally taking its shape and heating up. Felt sad for Yash as well as Arti - the time chosen for them for argument was wrong since Yash will be away for a month or more -- the parting has become more emotional . Beautiful writeup. Am waiting for your next dear.

A request Jhil -- please PM me -- 'cause I missed your earlier two chapters in a row --Thank U.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi dear...
I don't know you as well as I know the others here..

but having said that ever since you have have sent me the PMs I am reading and commenting too...

Regarding having readers or no...I've always written because it gives me pleasure...One should always do things that makes one happy not to see the number of likes or comments...at least that's what I do...

There have been so many posts of mine for which I've had no like...but that does not stop me from voicing my opinion on what I feel...

Anyway please continue your writings is what I wish to suggest if I may...

This update was fabulous...very emotional but to be frank the one thing that upset me was the slap...but I guess you needed to write that...

Physical aggression puts me off ...even though I know sometimes the verbal ones leave a greater scar...

Otherwise each one was right in his/her own perspective...excellent job!!!!

All the best!
Sorry for the long comment...
Edited by kmfan_2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Hi dear...

I don't know you as well as I know the others here..

but having said that ever since you have have sent me the PMs I am reading and commenting too...

Regarding having readers or no...I've always written because it gives me pleasure...One should always do things that makes one happy not to see the number of likes or comments...at least that's what I do...

There have been so many posts of mine for which I've had no like...but that does not stop me from voicing my opinion on what I feel...

Anyway please continue your writings is what I wish to suggest if I may...

This update was fabulous...very emotional but to be frank the one thing that upset me was the slap...but I guess you needed to write that...

Physical aggression puts me off ...even though I know sometimes the verbal ones leave a greater scar...

Otherwise each one was right in his/her own perspective...excellent job!!!!

All the best!
Sorry for the long comment...


well shanti di at first so thanx for liking it, really glad you commented..😊
and i wanted to stop this not for less reader, i become suddenly busy with my works so thats the reason. decided ltr i wont stop this coz i think you know this is gift for someone spcl so i cant. . suddenly i started write and as all liked so i continued, thanx to all of you. i know some ppl alws with me.

and about the update yeah, i know all will upset with this part but seriously i didnt have any other way expect this, i think as a writter you understood that,

ant dont bother to comeent long, i'll love to read tht.😊

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