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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: negha
Superb Part...Nice Update..

Thanks Negha 😛

Originally posted by: Anuraksha
wow...superbbb dear...loved it...

Thanks Anuraksha 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik
Nice update :) You write amazingly well :)
What was it Aarti wanted to tell him? I have a feeling it may cause a separation or something like that.
Thanks for the PM :)
Please update soon :)

Thanks Avina for the compliments 😛

Avina, if I really convert this OS into and SS, then you'll know what Aarti wants to tell him and the whole SS will be based on that 😛

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: saf24
Amazing update Nikki. Fantastic job with it. Yash wants Aarti so much that within a week they get married. Loved their wedding night moments where he explained to her why he chose to get married so early on in their relationship, letting her know that he respects her values/virtues. Looking forward to what is in store next and sooo glad you decided to convert it.

Thanks Saf

Yes Yash is so attracted to her and wants her so badly that he got married to her in week. But before marriage he controlled himself and didn't do anything that were against her wish or ethics. Which he clearly mentioned on their wedding night. And that's why she succumbed so easily into his passion.

Hopefully I'll really convert it into an SS, when time permits me.

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prachidalmia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

lovely update

looking forward to know what aarti was trying to say but was not able to

looking forward for the next update

please do update soon

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Folla
thanks for the PM dear nice update so excited to know what the scrate that aarti went to tell him waiting the next update

Thanks Folla 😛

If I convert it into an SS, you'll know the secret that Aarti is hiding from her BOSS 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Leevi05
awesome update
OHOH aarti hide something from yash

Thanks Leevi

Oh yeah Aarti is hiding something big from Yash 😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Ken309
Heyy so glad that u decided to turn it into an SS 😛
It was an awesome update :)

Thank Ken, for reading and commenting. 😛

And I'll convert it into an SS only when I'll be able to give it time and do justice with it 😛

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: poonamgarg
awesum update nikki darlz👏

Thanks Poo 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: ns1970
Awesome update
can't wait to hear the secret hoping for the best outcome

Thanks NS for reading and commenting.

I'm sorry dear but you'll have to wait to know the secret, as I don't have enough time, right now to work on it.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: sb1410
Love it!! Beautiful update so some of the employees were green with envy at aarti good fortune 😆, and she proved all wrong by looking stunning, beautiful on her wedding day 😆. I am happy you decided to convert this into a SS 😃 now waiting to find out what is the secret

Thanks Sharlene.

Oh yeah, all the female employees were RED AND GREEN with envy 😆

And Aarti proved them all wrong, when they saw her real beauty. When they saw what Yash saw in his cabin that day ☺️

Sharlene dear you'll have to wait for few weeks to know about the secret, as I won't be working on it anytime soon. 😕