AarYa OS : Loving You Endlessly ! ❤️ Final Part Page 51 !

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: nirmalac99
Thanks for d PM...loved the cute teasing by pratik 😊

You are most welcome ji !! 😃 !!

Hmm glad you loved it !! Now, it's Yash turn !! 😉

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: bmeenuu111
loved it very much 😊

Awwwnnn.. Thank you so much for loving it lots !! 🤗 BTW, I'm feeling happy as you drop a sweet comment !! 😳

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: Folla
thanks for the PM nice update so excited to know how yash well stop aarti waiting the next update

You are most welcome, Folla dear !! 😃 !!

Thank you !! 😃

Hmm.. so the excitement is doubling up !! 😉 I will try to make it soon !! 😳

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: chitsri65
O! dear ISYA - you are so chweet when u say pl..eeease for 'likes' and 'comment'..😆...wish I could hit hundred 'likes' to get hundred display ...ur wish ' sar ankhon par'...granted...and more...🤗

🤗 !! Oh my Chitra Ji.. then I wished there will be a magician to do that for me and you ! 😆 I needed that... As it is important as you know hun !! 😉

Enjoyed and loved the spirit 'Arpita'😆 more for her reality check up...Yash needed someone to push him to a path where his eyes were but his body refused to ...since he felt - he belonged to Arpita and Arpita alone...though his heart belonged to Arti but refused to recognise it and so the confusion. Explanation part by Arpita - was well put dear - and yes - Yash talked and felt Arpita but the spirit looked like Arti - his feelings were seen in vision and the confusion that needed to be solved was done in spirit form...Wow ! ISYA - you chose a different path ...loved the new route😊

Prateek's part was quite enjoyable with the song - my fav ' Tuj mein Rab dikhta hai...' ...waiting for the end part...precap interesting and hope to get it soon dear.

Glad you loved our special appearance's role !! 😆 😉 Well, this Yash as you've describe in your own words, he's like our own Yash ji in PV who is desperately need a guide for his life !! Yes... He was all the way stuck with his beloved Arpita !! 😛 I'm glad she's there to clear that confusion of Yash !! 😃

Thank you so much !! I'm glad I've put the words and sentences well ! 😃 Glad you easily realized that I've chosen a different path.. 😉 If can, I would love to let Aarti in this job.. but since I wanna put it differently.. here I am with a new way ! 😉 Glad you loved it !! ❤️

So, everyone is eagerly waiting for the next !! I will try to make it soon !! 😳

ISYA ...every writer need readers comment to know the progress of one's writing and their vision...would just like to say...u r slowly and steadily moving into the club of writers...made this particular comment 'cause I felt - the need...here. 😃 Hope u r taking care of ur health (Migraine)...Luv U and God bless.

Yes, you are right ! I need their comment just to know my weaknesses as well as improvements and strength !! I'm glad I have all of you for that !! ❤️

I'm glad I'm slowly entering into the club.. I really want to be one good writer and hopefully, I'll achieve the target soon !! 😳 Even I felt that is needed !! 😃 It's kinda motivating me !! 😳

Yes, I'm taking care of it but I really need enough sleep to avoid my migraine to return !! 😊 Love you too and God bless you too !

Thank you so much for your care and love plus your always additional supports and wonderful comment ! Appreciate it !! 🤗

Replies are in blue !! 😉

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: GuruTheBest
awesome

Thank you dear !! 😃

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Will continue replying others tomorrow or the next following day !! 😃 😳

Anyway, Thanks for all your wonderful comments !! I couldn't do more but to appreciate them !! 🤗 ❤️

Replies are from page 46 onwards !! 😃

Take care , people !! ❤️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Read part 2 & 3

Loved both of them.

The flashback scene was so dreamy, with Yash's proposing her and Aarti accepting it

And Mr. DDD (I know that's the name in FOV 😆) was the reason behind the silence on the railway station 👏

And naughty Prateek, loved him in both chapters. The way he sang for his "Bhabhi" 😉

And Arpita's soul (I won't call it Bhoot) was very important for Yash to realize his true feelings for Aarti and now he'll finally stop her from boarding that train.

Waiting for the next part, but take your time, as I know that you are very busy with your studies and FOV also.

All the best with your exams 👍🏼 ❤️

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Choko Baby this was your expression when you asked to like your posts and leave comments also...😈...😆😆😆
Now you tell me what you have decided to do if I dont like and dont give comments also..😈😉😈
Ok now come to the update.OMG you have started with a bang ...I just opend the post and met the Bhootni of Arpita...😲😲...but kasam se mujhe uss bhutni se behaad pyaar hain...😆😆😆.ANd my Yashu is the same...she also loves the Bhootni Arpita a lot and that's why crying to meet her...🤣
Okk it's enough to make fun now.Come to some serious notes.Ishu you already know that I am a great fan of your capability of writing romantic aspects .In fact for me you are one of those best writers who can bring havoc in my mind and heart without using any bold and wild remarks and for this I really appreciate you...(And it;s a secret that I try to be like u but every time fail very badly but still keep trying..😆😆😆).But in this update what grab my all attention is the way you have covered up Yash's emotion.The way you have used words to express the expression of your characters was beyond any praise and I swear that I am not faking.What I am saying each and every word of it is 1000% true...so from my side for you...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

"Arpita..." his voice echoed, his tears were like drops of molten lead, with torrents which could burn the passage of anyone's heart. Yash switched into a small baby who keeps crying in his mom's arms and soon, his head rested on Arpita's lap.

Indeed you are right .COz of your brilliant writing all the emotion of Yash has touched my heart and soul...😳😳

"Take an exit from your world which is full with ME , Yash ! Enough of loving me endlessly in each seconds of your lifetime... You can't deny that you and Aarti love each other endlessly ! Bagwaan ji had showed you a clear signal, Yash... And that is the current absence of myself in your life ! The reason why he took me away from you could be only this... You and Aarti were born for each other and that's what written in the book of fortune ! Please.. Please give yourself another chance to be immersed in a world which is full of LOVE and LIFE... ! Go and Stop Aarti before everything becomes too late ! Goo..." Arpita motivates him while he keep on staring at her, still sticking at the same place he was from just now ...

And for me it was the soul part of this update.You have written this part in such a way that I can read it 100 times ...so what to say madam ji ..tussi great ho...toufa kobul karo...

Arti and Prateek scene is very well written.I really loved the fun loving nature of Prateek...😳😳but poor soul faild to stop Arti...😕😕 per koi baat nahi...Yashu hain na wo saab samhaal lega...after all he has met the super Bhootni Arpita and got her mystic blessings also...😉😉😉

Very nice update Ishu .I really reallly really loved it a lot...sachchi...😳😳😳