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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: kmfan_2
Dear Nikki,
Welcome back...😃

The promo was absolutely lovely...and it had to end...there... where I did not want it to!😛

The update was emotional but fabulously written...

Excellent...I still can't understand the Dubeys...

Keep up with your amazing work dear...Loved it!

Thanks Shanti for the warm welcome 🤗

So sorry to end the promo at the cliffhanger 😆

Dubey's are very orthodox, backwards type of people who are gender biased. Their story has much more to be shown in the upcoming chapters 😕

Thanks once again for such beautiful comment 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: saf24
Nikki this was such a heartbreaking update. The Dubeys are the worst parents as instead of supporting their daughter who is going through a hard time, they are busy trying to push her away and make her realise the place she has in their life. I so loved that Gayatri insisted that she had to go to Aarti immediately and since she got there she has only been taking care of Aarti and showering her with care which is something she really needs. Fab job as always and can't wait to see what is in store next.

Saf the sad thing is that people like Dubey's still exists in this world, who threats their own daughter like slave or doormat, just because she's a girl.

But on the other hand people like Gayatri are also there, who's ready to go against her own family to be there for Aarti. And that's what Gayatri did also. Because of her Aarti is alive or she'd have died under that shower or by some other way.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
awesome promo
emotional update
poor arrti she had to bear so much ...
prashant n dubey 😡

Thanks Dona for loving the promo

And yes Aarti suffered so much at the hands of her own parents and Prashant and Ammaji 😡

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: aman93
nice update

Thanks Aman 😛

Originally posted by: ksen
very nice update.thanks for pm

Your welcome and thanks for reading and commenting 😳

Originally posted by: Leevi05
awesome update
when will the flashback end?

Thanks Leevi.

And I'm sorry the flashback won't end anytime soon, as I've to cover almost two year period in the flashback

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Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: pvejani
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Once again thanks Pooja for such a beautiful comment. ❤️

And thanks for loving the promo 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: kratzyfan
Regarding the promo

Nikki, this promo left me hyperventillating☺️☺️...i'm 🤢🤢...
really, aarti n pink are deadly combo😆😆...it's the pink saree that made them one☺️😳( in pv)...

but my doubt is...if it's in FB..when all this scene happened or it's the dream of aarti😕...anyways i'm eagerly waiting for it...

Regarding the Special note

Plz don't say sorry dear🤗..as we all knew that u have gonna on a vacation😛...and it really takes a lot of time to write an effective story like MTB, which will play with our emotions along with the story😉👏...

And a very big thanks to ur hubby for pestering u😆😆...👍🏼...

we obey n always like whatever decision u make...so go ahead😃👍🏼...

Charmi, don't worry dear...we can understand u...n i wish u ALL THE VERY BEST👍🏼...

Regarding the update...😉...

Now i'm feeling very bad for yash😭😭...he has been kept in darkness all this while and now it really becomes unbearable to listen to the sufferings of his love😭🥺...

what yash n we all feared had happened...Aarti tried to kill herself💔...😭.😭😭...
what type of person is this ammaji😡😡...she don't even feel anything for an innocent girl..n fearing what they've to go through becoz of her...
anyways..i thought of not mentioning the names of amma n prashant...but couldn't stop control myself from using those 🤬 names...

well, the scene that greeted gayatri n kiran ...aarti under the running shower reminded me of the trailer of "READ MY SILENCE"...a very pitiable n 🥺 condition of a girl😭...

i really wonder what would have been aarti's condition if g3 n kiran were not there💔...she would have died long back..no😲..i can't imagine it😭😭...

There comes another victim of a biased societn biased people like dubeys...Sarita bua..a helpless lady who have been deprived of all her rights n happiness...

i really wanted to reach out to aarti ...when she said that she wanted to talk with Yash..n again gathered herself n feared to face him in this situation😭😭...oh my girl...she trusts n loves him so much😳😳...

" Till yesterday morning my life was full of beautiful dreams. I was in love with a wonderful man, with whom I was dreaming to start a new life. And the same afternoon, that very life was ruined by his own brother"- these lines broke my heart💔...😭.😭.😭.😭.

when asked for anyone else...aarti mentioned aakash's name...this itself shows that he's the second person after yash who is so close to her heart❤️...love their bonding...heart bonding...

i really don't know what to say about that stupid, biased dubeys..let them rot in hell..

i just loved Kiran's answer to them.😃😃...very gud kiran very gud👏👏...this is the way to go with dubeys😡😡..

drug test ..very interesting..he would have caught😡..but unfortunately ...dubeys poured water on it😡.😡..

what a proposition dubeys brought👏😡...what else can we expect from such people...

don't want to say more about that amma, prashant n dubeys😡😡...my blood is boiling...

very gud g3...she's very much confident on her son👏👏... yash...

once again an update...full of emotions😭.👏👏...

i don't know how many times ..i've to say this to u😉😆... ... Great job my dear Nikki👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏..👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.

oops..i forgot to say...congo for 18000th post dear🥳.🤗... u rock👏...

Anu I'm so lucky that I saw this AarYa pic that you posted in CCC. Thanks so much 🤗. The idea of the promo came to me after seeing this pic. And I was 🤢

And then I remembered that in MTB when Yash saw Aarti for the first time, she was in pink. And that's why I wrote that Aarti in pink is a deadly combo for Yash 🤢

And how and when will the promo scene come, well you'll find it in chapter 23 😉

Now coming to the update...

Anu why and how Yash was kept in the dark will be revealed slowly and then you'll feel bad for someone else also. My heart goes out for Aarti, Yash and Gayatri in MTB. 🥺 They all had to suffer so much because Prashant. 😡

Anu I don't know anything about "READ MY SILENCE". Don't even know whether it's a movie or a series. And I've no idea how this scene came into my mind. I wanted to write on the condition in which Gayatri finds Aarti. And when this scene came into my mind, I felt that it'll be perfect to show Aarti's plight 😭. She'd have died if Gayatri and Kiran had not reached there on time 😕

Anu not only Sarita, but you'll feel bad when I'll write on Aakash's mother Latika, Aarti's other Bua. She too suffered a lot at the hands of Dubey 😡

After Yash if Aarti trust anyone, then that is Aakash. And their bonding will also be shown in the upcoming chapters.

Even I loved he way Kiran shuts up Dubey 👏. He got the dose of his own medicine.

Gayatri has full confidence in Yash but what's the point, Aarti ended up marrying that python 😭

Thank you thank you thank you so much for your wishes ❤️ 🤗 ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Delayed update that squeezes and pushes the other updates to get the prime importance - successfully.

The emotional feel continues but what drained me was the scene where we see Arti under the shower. When a person is choked with emotion and remains silent for the action taken and experienced - the first words expressed are meaningful - the wishes - that she would like to share with a person of her trauma ... Yash - Aakash...that speaks the character of these two...the words may be incoherent but to feel safe with the person your mind speaks - and - with prashant - her body spoke...(shivers) ..we see Arti doing it.

Dubeys : They only understand the language of Swati/Dr.Kiran - the only current that can immobilise them is - blackmailing/threatening...as said before...the lesser we talk of them - the chances of our mind being pure is more,

Nikki - I will continue to keep my shower open to keep my emotion in check...till the flashes of past - said and laid to rest.

Promo : Was as interesting as the couple ARYA... a color 'pink' that spoke romance and felt by the audience. Am patient with this for 'step to step' is very important and you are dealing with this beautifully.

Congrats 👏 on your 18000th post...R u sure ???? can't believe dear...shows your contribution...keep doing and keep us entertained.

Thanks for mentioning me - which is not necessary - 'cause you are doing good job...with/without suggestion.

My best wishes to Charmi.

All in all - Nikki ...emotions beautifully written...take care ! 🤗

Truth be told, I needed some relaxed time to concentrate on this update, as I was working on it after a month. Because of the long gap, I was not getting the feel of it. Plus I was not getting the spirit to write also.

And that new OS was also bothering me. So I decided to first work on the new OS and get it out of my system. Then I worked on YAMR and it helped me relax and these both brought back the writing spirit. The end result was this update. 😆

OMG Chitra when Aarti's scene came into my mind and when I finally penned it down, I could literally visualize it and my heart was breaking to even write it.

Yash and Aakash were the only two persons whom she trusted more than her life. And why she trusted Yash so much, will be shown in the next or maybe the next chapter after it.

And you are so right when you say that only Swati and Kiran can shut people like Dubey.

Regarding the promo, well I visualized the scene after watching that pic which Anu posted in our chat thread. I rarely go there nowadays as I'm busy during that time. But it was my luck that I was there when she posted it. And it tempted me to use it. At first I wanted to use it for YAMR. But suddenly felt that it'll be better if I use it to show AarYa romance scene in flashback. And while posting it the whole scene and words came to me. Believe me it's my first impromptu promo.

And I mentioned your name, cause our advice really helped me. And I strongly believe in giving the credit to the one who deserves it.

Chitra I can't thank you enough for showering me with all your, love, support and warm wishes ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: Tanvi.narula

It was an awsome update di..
Emotions expressed very well..
How can someone's own parents behave line this.. 😡
Ammaji.. 😡
How bad Yash must hav felt hearing all this bout his love.. 😭
Promo..
Just mesmirising..

Tanvi 🤗

First of all I'm so sorry that I couldn't wish you on your color change, despite reserving the post 😭

And thanks for liking the emotional update.

Tanvi parents like Dubey's are really There in this world and they are the result of ruining their own daughters life and future 😡

Yash doesn't know the whole truth. He'll completely break after that 😭

And yes I know that the promo is 🤢

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: Surish

Thanks Surish 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

#510

Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik
Thanks for the PM 😊
As usual, amazing writing. (The chapter looked short though)😕
Poor Aarti 😭 What she must have gone through because of that Prashanth.😡
I hate Prashanth😡 I still wish he could be punished by Aarya.
Love Gayatri in this FF👍🏼. She loves the right people and supports them.
Once again, amazing. Hats off for portraying so many emotions so well.👏
Pleas update soon and please PM me.
Best wishes

Thanks for appreciating and praising my work ☺️

Ans sorry if the chapter felt short. I was really busy. So I thought, instead of keeping you all to wait for the update, why not to post whatever I've written so far, so I posted it.

That's the only regret in this story that AarYa were not able to punish Prashant 😭

And thanks for loving Gayatri. You'll love her more as the story will progress further. 😳

And I tried my best to portray all the emotions. Everyone's comments gives me the relief that it all came well. 😳

Don't know when I'll update next. But I'll try not to delay it. 😳

And thanks for your wishes ❤️