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@kratzyfan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Nikki, u are the best of the best...👏

👏👏

when i read that update, i couldn't actually comment as i'm completely sunk in ur story...so now i felt that i could comment but still no words...

so now i came out of my hibernation period

the trauma that aarti, G3 n yash are going through is unimaginable ...

as i'm a girl, personally my heart is crying out for aarti for what she had gone throughout this entire period...after that dreadly incident...and just want to her...n assure her that nothing bad gonna happen again...

that prashant😡 n that ammaji.😡...chi ...what persons they are ...i'm sorry..they are not humans...they are most cruel n worst than hyenas which feed on dead bodies...

i can only wish one thing...may god make yash n aarti cry out their hearts😭..comfort each other in each others arms...and start a fresh beginning to their journey where there'll be no prashant😡 ...

i know it would be very difficult😳 to come out of that situation...but nothing is impossible for true love❤️...it has the power to heal any type of wounds...n moreover the bright n blissful future should not be clouded in the shadow of a dark past

P.S.: I'm very sorry for the late comment😭...

Edited by kratzyfan - 12 years ago

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Tanvi Narula

@Tanvi.narula

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

U r such a wonderfull writer... 👏...
I could feel those emotions...
Poor aarti .. 😭 she has to go throgh so much.. 😭
aargh that prashant ... Now I want that when u reveal the
occurings of prashant accident.. It should b brutal... 😡..
Gayatri always had confindence her children vll not question her motherhood but alas... Even she faced what she never expected.. 😔... Nd ammaji's saying came true nd Yash did called her a step-mother... These two have to suffer so much in the hands of prashant.. 😡
eagerly waiting to get the story revealed further..

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aman

@aman93

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

prasant is such aa cheap man... aarti suffred alot

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negha

@negha

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Great Update Dear...Thanks for PM...Continue soon,...

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

great update.please continue soon.thanks for pm

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kmfan_2

@kmfan_2

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Wow Nikki...Finally I can post a bigger comment...

It was as always a fabulous chapter!!

I love the character of Gayatri...an adorable mother/woman indeed...

and the pain of Aarti and more than that as felt by Gayatri has been well written...

Prashant - the lesser I write the better..

Excellent update dear...keep it up!

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Nikki, you are slowly and steadily emerging as a writer⭐️demonstrating the right expression, tone and content with natural conversation that relates to readers.

Involvement of characters, creating an atmosphere to give a flashback is well said. Detailing too is very important and you have worked on this very beautifully without repeating any emotions to get the right flow. Again...well done.

Coming to the story...it is a painful past...Waiting is painful, forgetting is painful but not knowing what to do is the worse kind of suffering...and G3 has gone thru this and continues to (am not applying now for Arti...for it is still worse).

'Anger ventilated often hurries towards forgiveness and concealed often hardens into revenge'. Prashant's anger on Yash and G3 Ma's opinion of him...took the worst side of him. Wish G3 Ma kept the opinion of Prashant to self...for I feel it may not have ended this worst (& more) ...probably a shade less. The less we talk of this character - the better - for even 'The Dictionary' would refuse to add a word to its list.

Thanks for the kind words dear and don't be sorry - just would like to say - your effort has paid off.