OS: Payal beta you are dyslexic!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Payal beta you are dyslexic!
Aarti had rushed to Bhopal the same day that Satyendra Dubey had suffered a massive heart attack. Today was the 3rd day that she was gone and he was still in ICU. Aarti had taken Aayu with her.

In Mumbai Yash was taking care of Ansh and PayPal. Ansh and Palak were pretty much independent in doing their homework. Payal however needed her mumma to guide her while she worked on her homework. Today as Yash worked with her, tears of frustration were forming in 7.5 year old Payal's eyes. Yash had read the question twice to her.

Yash: Seven plus nine minus five equals what?

Payal (all flustered): Seven plus nine, papa?

Yash nodded a yes. Payal, quickly looked down at her fingers and began counting them, unfisting her hand finger by finger.

Payal (in a hesitant voice): Fifteen, papa.

Yash (in a distressed voice): Payal beta, its sixteen.

Payal: Papa, I did count sixteen. But when I was going to say it, I... I... thought it is wrong... and so, I did not say it.

Yash hugged Payal wordlessly while hiding his frustration. He realized Payal was losing her self-confidence. They had been at it for almost 2 hours now. It was just a series of incorrect answers or correct answer with the wrong steps. Now her brain was starting to fry and he was at the end of his tether.

Yash: Payal beta let us take a ten minute break and then we will do some reading. OK my rajkumari?

Payal nodded a yes.

They both went outside to the front patio area. Payal took her skipping rope and skipped for some time and then started playing hopscotch by herself while Yash watched her.

Yash was perplexed. He wondered what made it so hard for his little rajkumari to understand simple addition and subtraction. She had written down her homework for the day. He had seen her notebook. Her notes were clear – she had written the tricks to keep the counting straight. But there were several spelling errors and sometimes she would write the same word four, five or six times.

He had noticed that she often misinterpreted numbers when he said:

68, or

24.

In her mind she would interpret it as

48, and

26.

Yash had noticed that Payal's problems with numbers extended to history as well. Her dates were all messed up. So instead of saying that "We achieved independence in 1947" she would say "in 1497". When he told her she was saying it wrong, she just looked at him with eyebrows knit and all perplexed … as if asking 'huh?'.

Yash sighed – next was reading. He had no idea what was going on and hoped that her reading would be better.

Yash: Chalo beta back to work; ten minutes are up sweetheart.

Payal unenthusiastically nodded her head and walked with him back upstairs. Picking up the English Reader he turned to the assignment page and handed the book to her.

Yash: Read it out loud to me.

Payal struggled. Ten minutes had gone by and she was still working through the first paragraph. She labored to read the words and often skipped words and parts of sentences. It was clearly frustrating her.

Yash: Payal beta can we try something different?

Payal nodded a yes.

Yash: Beta why don't you read silently to yourself. And, after you are done I will read you the questions?

Payal: Papa, you do not understand. The letters are all jumbled because they keep floating around!! It takes me so long to read because it is like… like... the letters are walking. I really have to think very hard to figure out what word is written.

Yash took the book from her and looked at the pages. Everything looked fine to him. There were no misspells and the font was of medium size. Did she need glasses or was it because it was English and not Hindi? Anyways he decided he needed to make sure if she understood the words first.

Yash: Beta I will read out loud, and then ask you the questions? Is that OK?

Payal nodded a silent yes.

After reading the assignment passage, Yash asked Payal the homework questions. Payal answered all the questions correctly with ease. Her reading of the Hindi primer was no better, Yash wondered what is going on inside Payal's mind.

This was the third day of homework 'problems' he had with her. At first he thought it was Aarti's absence that was bothering her but now he was sure it was something else.

He asked Payal how Aarti worked with her during homework time. She told him mumma always made a game of it. They would sit by the beach and she would let her do lettering on the sand, sing, or playact the math and other assignments. Yash began to get an inkling of what Aarti was doing with Payal, in any event he decided to consult a physician.

Two days after the above homework problems Yash had taken Payal to a doctor to see what was going on in Payal's brain. The doctor had a notion of what was wrong however he decided to talk with Yash after the test results were made available.

Later that week, a nurse from the doctor's office had phoned and asked him and Payal to pay the doctor a visit as the test scores had come in. Now they were back in the Mumbai beach house after the visit to the doctor.

Payal had remained silent through the ride back home and even now was silently sitting holding on to her teddy bear.

Yash: Sweetheart, what's up?

Yash was gently trying to break the ice.

Payal: The doctor said I was different. He said I have dys… dys… whatever!

Yash: Dyslexia.

Payal: Yeah, so maybe I should drop out of school?

Payal had a resigned expression on her face.

Yash: I do not think so, my sweet Rajkumari. You are different because you have an amazing brain. Do you know what dyslexia is beta?

Yash held her (teddy bear and all) in a tight hug for a moment and then kissed the top of her forehead.

Payal: Really papa, am I smart? What is dys…lek..sia?

Yash: Yes beta, you are smart. It is just that right now you need help from mumma and me for doing gannit (math) and reading. I will get you a special computer game to help you read and do math. And do you know what else the doctor said?

Payal (now beaming with the knowledge that she is smart): Nah, tell me.

Yash: The doctor said you are a linguistic learner. That means if I read out aloud you would understand.

Payal nodded that she understood.

Yash: Beta you are good with words and have a terrific memory. See how quickly you learnt to speak Marathi and how well you remember all the words of songs?

Again, Payal nodded and smiled confidently.

Yash: Beta, you are very talented musically. I am very proud that you taught yourself to play the piano and can even play a few songs!

Now Payal turned and hugged Yash and softly said: I love you papa.

Yash heaved a sigh. Paridhi had turned on her CD player and Payal began singing along not missing a word.

Yash ruffled her head and let her run out to play. He was proud of Payal's endeavors and how Aarti had instinctively been working on her strengths. He knew that they would work through this and set up a new study plan for Payal. He sent a silent prayer thanking God that Payal had taken after Aarti in that she never gave up; when something got in her way she either thought it out or just pushed her way through until she was on the other side.

Yash reached out to his cell phone to call Aarthi all the while smiling at the sounds of Payal's sing-along.

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Shashi1984 thumbnail
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Hi! You told no peeking, but I can't stop myself from peeking. Waiting for the OS. Update soon.
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HEY U ASKED NOT TO PEEK BUT I COULDNT WAIT NICE START WAITING FOR AN UPDATE UPDATE SOON
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i can't help..so peek😆.
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Shashi, Roserosey and kratzyfan - the OS is done. Sorry to have kept you waiting while I completed it!
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meena, loved it👍🏼..on seeing payal's condition..u reminded of tare jameen par movie...
yash's and payal's bond which we didn't find in pv...found here😛
thank u ...aarti is really a great mother❤️

thanks for the pm too🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kratzyfan

meena, loved it👍🏼..on seeing payal's condition..u reminded of tare jameen par movie...

yash's and payal's bond which we didn't find in pv...found here😛
thank u ...aarti is really a great mother❤️

thanks for the pm too🤗

Thank you Kratzyfan 😊
Yes, Payal's situation is like the one seen in Taare Zameen Pe ⭐️
Here I wanted to Yash to pick up on Payal's problems and want to deal with them in a healthy manner because I wanted to show a Payal-Yash bonding. I also wanted Yash to realize how precious Aarti is 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is a beautifuly written heart warming story love the bonding of yash and payal, after finding out about her dyslexia his response to the situation by giving resurance to his child that she is smart and talented, and she will always have her parents love her and support. Aarti understanding patience and love in helping her daughter with her home work by using alternative
methods to teach her
this would of been an excelent tract in Pv had they not cancelled
it Anyhow congrats to you for comming up with this idea 👏
Edited by sb1410 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sb1410

This is a beautifuly written heart warming story love the bonding of yash and payal, after finding out about her dyslexia his response to the situation by giving resurance to his child that she is smart and talented, and she will always have her parents love her and support. Aarti understanding patience and love in helping her daughter with her home work by using alternative
methods to teach her
this would of been an excelent tract in Pv had they not cancelled
it Anyhow congrats to you for comming up with this idea 👏

SB you have conveyed very nicely the gist of Yash and Payal's interaction post-discovery of dyslexia.
Breaking the news to the child is important so that the child is aware that there is a problem. However the child also needs to know that she is loved and that she is talented. And that she will be learning ways to cope with the problem that is confronting her!
I wanted to see a track with Payal - however we never had one. So, I just made this up.
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Hey! It's superb and very beautifully written. You fabulously carved out the talent. Despite Payal having dyslexia, she is talented,had sharp memory. It means Aarti known of her problem and tackled her. And the way Yash handled her, encourages her, that's awesome.

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