FF PV.Jindegi ki Talash -- Pt 10 Updated on page 136 - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
Mukku i am finally here to appreciate your work 😛

you say i have become a good writer but the truth is it is you who has reached everyone's heart ..😉

so coming to the update...
the relation between yash and g3 even though there is no blood ties cannot be valued.. it is priceless ⭐️⭐️⭐️
a mother's heart cries to know the reason her son is suffering with ... but yash refuses as it could create a storm !!! both love each other so much na.. let this love stay forever without any damage 😊

OMG the flashback 😲 you mixed romance, affection, caring, scared feeling of losing their love...
simply superb sweetu 👏👏👏
when mansi was teasing arthi.. the way she said yash ki diwani was so perfect and filled with love
and i knew yash will be listening to all and take his sweet revenge from her..
i loved the closeness they shared and the feeling of yash's touch .. simply they cannot be expressed in words dear 😳😳😳 but when they hugged out of fear in losing each other my heart cried out for them 😭😭..

if arpita had no problem then by now arya would have lived happily.. but arthi's father and brother are completely selfish fellows 😡😡 they dont care about their daughter's happiness and i am sure they only forced arthi to marry python !!!!

And arthi caring for yash by preparing coffee is so sweet 😛... yash too found it out correctly so their pv is not at much distance with love still alive in their heart

The catching game was so cute dear.. how would have it been for arthi when she saw yash infront of her whom she thought palak 😆
wow the eyelock and next time arthi saving yash from tripping down.. everything has care for yash ..

but what made him suddenly angry to take gun 😲😲😲 i am willing to know that... and eagerly waiting for the promo 😳

continue soon sweety 👏👏 dont ever say its a boring one samjiii 😉

Edited by maha9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res Mukku ! 😳

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Power Is On and Sparks Are Lit !! My god... Fabulous Update, Mukku !! 👏👏👏 As usual, you impressed me with your dialogues and the way you structured your plots for this part.. ⭐️

The starting brought a wide smile on my face... Loved mother-son convo ! ❤️ The care Gay3 showed after so long for Yash says it all.. How much she loves and long for her son ! 😊 And then come the tension, it was actually a part of Gayathri's care for Yash.. She had the full priority to know about Yash's past ! 😊


* Flashback *


LOL.. Maansi ! 🤣 She's impossible everywhere ! 😆 Her dialogues.. Too naughty to make Aarti blush about Yash ! 😳 Ehem.. Looks like someone geared up for giving some romance to your readers.. Oho, Mukku ! Hot Close Romance of Yash-Aarti ! ☺️ Loved it ! ❤️ The Aabshagun Aarti was talking about.. But loved how Yash explained to her that there's nothing big than their love for each other.. ❤️ !!


OMG... Then revealed the biggest storm ever ! Veeraj and SP ! 😡 🥱 No words for them ! Pity Arpita and also Shova ! 😭 OMG.. Where Arpita is heading to ?? 😲


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Ehem.. The Coffee Love Story ! 😳 Oho.. They are playing with our Jodi ! Nice scene ! 😃

And then the blindfold game ! Love that scene the most ! ❤️ I was most glad to see Yash and Ansh's bonding ! That was so much important for me ! Yash... an always a Hero for Ansh ! 😎

Ooh Laa Laa.. 😆 Intense eye-lock !! Awwnn... Strange sensation !! OMG.. And when Aarti caught him, Hailaa.. I felt like their world is alive back !! ❤️

Then.. what happened ?? But in all, I was happy for Aarti's care and concern about Yash ! 😊 But so sad with Yash's statement that he will left the house soon..

Eager to know what Yash gonna do ! 😛 Awesome update, Mukku !! 👏👏👏 Loved it.. Don't ever dare to say it's boring.. Very very enjoyable and nice reading ! ⭐️

Happy Belated Friendship Day, Darling ! 🤗

Edited by IsYaRoCHeR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dude Happy Friendship Day:)
its the best treat u gave us on this special day. Thanx alot for this update.
The update was good but your previous 5 updates were more good than this so do improve i found this short:( because we all have become habitual of your long updates na:p and you unfolded very lil past. So plzzz give next update sooon plzzz. Good luck:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
boring nahi acchi update thi...i imagined every moment of flashback scene as i m seeing dis. everything was fyn. yash's masti in garden...but again the suspense...why, why dis kolaveri???
i like ur writing style but i m thinking about dat suspense...
will wait 4 next update..the MU track and promo scene
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update Dear 👏 👏

Awww AarYa moment in the garden with Ansh and Palak was too cute and the concern in Aarti's attentions shows that she still loves him deeply ❤️

Wow thanks for the back history it helped a lot, I can't wait for Aarti to find out that what she thought was true was nothing but a lie and how much Yash has suffered as much as she did 😔

Patiently awaiting the new track 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the update enjoyed the flashback and garden scenes ❤️
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update Mukti 👏 👏 It's fab seeing Gayatri caring so much for yash. Hmm she wants to know what happened years back that he left Aarti mid way to their wedding. 😕 Lovely Aarya flashback they were so much in love and Aarti felt restless on the upcoming unknown storm 😭 From the convo of Arpita's family it seems they formed an alliance for political gain 😡 but yash rescued Arpita after hearing that convo. Like Palak's way of testing Aarya's hidden feeling and she got both 😆 Love the blindfold game but what sudden call was it that got yash so angry that he took a gun? 😕 Waiting eagerly for next part. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update.good to see caring gayathri.eager to know what yash is hiding.thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi mukti.😃..happy friendship day to you too dear🤗.

👏👏👏awsome update...i loved it.⭐️⭐️⭐️

loved flashback scene of yash and aarti...very cute scene..lovely jodi❤️

loved blindfold game ansh was very good👏👏👏.

loved palak testing whether love still exist b/w them.whether they still care for eachother?passing aarti after coffee scene and yash after tasting coffee.trying to unite them.

shcked😲 to see his anger 😡,yash going with gun to meet whom?😕.

thanx for update and pm.continue soon.😉 very eger for promo scene.😉😳
Edited by pvejani - 12 years ago

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