MY FIRST STORY ON AARYA: last chapter updated pg30

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Gr8 parts buddy.

But I loved the first part more.The description about the ancient ritual attrackted me so much.Tho there was no AarYa but that part didnt need any protaganist,its complete in itself.

And the second part explained SP's and Dubey's relation and how they arranged AarYa wedding.

Now waiting for AarYa entry.

Thanx for d PM buddy.

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charmi

@princess121993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

read both the chapters in one go...

omg...awesome yaar..amazing idea...

i must say...the way u have described abt the past...the way people use to decide abt their kids marraige once they were born..its very beautifully written...this thing reminded me of my nani...as her wedding was fixed in the same way...

i loved it...omg.yash n aarti will be forced into this marraige for their suraj and dubeys selfish reasons...omg..

the precap seems interesting...cannot wait for the next update...do continue soon

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hello dearies,😊 being out since morning was not able to update the next part but will soon. sorry for the dissappointment, i will give surprising updates,

so an appetizer before posting the next chapter here we go enjoy... it a joke guyz not a part of the story😊

A millionaire.

major singh(rtd) has been monitoring the movement of his only daughter kalpana recently. in fact, he picks her calls to confirm the identity of the caller before handing the phone over to her after thorough screening.

one faithful day, her boyfriend called and major picked the phone as usual, then the following conversation ensued

Major: hello! may i know who is speaking?

Caller: sorry i want to speak with kalpana sir.

Major: i said who re u nd what for?

caller: (senseing the situation at hand said) Okay sir i am Anil kapoor from who wants to be a millionaire. 😉😆kalpana's friend is presently on a hot seat and needs her help to answer a question for Rs.2million. so the next voice you hear is hers, your time starts now.

Major: oh no! i am sorry!!! kalpana! kalpana!!

please take the phone, your friend needs your help...

caller: the question is; when are you coming tomorrow?

(a) morning

(b) afternoon

(d) night

kalpana: C

Caller: how sure are u?

kalpana: 100% sure😉😆

note: don't know about indian currency so i wrote Rs.2million, am not sure if that is huge sum but i intended to write a huge sum of money

...so enjoy and hit the like button please😊

Edited by billieberry - 12 years ago

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Billie finally I was able to read all chapters. 👏

The story sounds interesting. OMG how can parents treat their children's marriage as a business deal? 😡. Are their kids some kind of a commodity? 😡

And regarding that special treat, I hope the caller is not Yash? I hope that he's not in love with Kalpanan. If he is, then he'll be completely heart broken.

Waiting for the next chapter.

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Billie finally I was able to read all chapters. 👏

The story sounds interesting. OMG how can parents treat their children's marriage as a business deal? 😡. Are their kids some kind of a commodity? 😡

And regarding that special treat, I hope the caller is not Yash? I hope that he's not in love with Kalpanan. If he is, then he'll be completely heart broken.

Waiting for the next chapter.

thank u so much for such lovely comment.😊 as for the special treat it a joke😆