Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 2: Ch 21 (Pg 134) - Page 68

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Res!!

Reserved 😉

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Great update Kat !

Loved the progress as we finally got to know the Arpita side of the story. You had given vague hints here and there but it was good to have it out in the open. Tragic though it was but her untimely death left a whole family in chaos with Yash facing the worst of it.

On the bright side like how AarYa have started becoming more aware of one another. Loved the bit of jealous-Aarti and more than that I liked the fact that Yash enjoyed her jealousy just as much.

As usual great writing. Waiting for the next update to see how you take this forward.

Ah Deepti 🤗 - i missed you!! Your comments, feedback, suggestions always give me a - call it push, or perhaps peg? A point, a thought to mull over and voila - i get an epiphany. Any wonder i love you as i do??? 🤗

Arpita has been the most difficult character in this story for me. I would have found her impossible to live with too... As for the back-story - it was bound to come but i was planning it for later. With pv ending though <shrugs>

Lol -- you didn't think the jealousy bit came too early? 😆

Originally posted by: caller123

Lovely...⭐️

Thanks for the pm dear.

Thank you 😳.

Originally posted by: elanpremi

It was painful to imagine the guiltiness Yash had to go through after Arpita's death.

U make me feel the characters emotions and imagine the whole scene with GC n KS acting in it dear.

Thank you Elanpremi - that is tremendous encouragement for a fledgling writer like me.

Arpita's death - yes... i didn't want to go the usual route of death at childbirth or accident. The aftermath on a family after someone commits suicide opens so many avenues to explore...and i would have explored at least some of those if PV had continued. Now... i am just moving the story along.

Originally posted by: aman93

awww... emotional prt...

Aww - thank you Aman.

Already Missing Them 😭

Congrats Kat for crossing page 100😃😃

Originally posted by: lulujjj

A very touching update dear beautifully written waiting for next part. thanks for the PM.

Thank you Naeema. This was a difficult part to write - not so much because of the content, but more because i wasn't sure if i could convey what i wanted to...