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Posted: 12 years ago


Ohhh Thread 3???? Wow!!!!

Congrats dear! Hats off to ur writing skills
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh dear what a long chapter😃
i really loved it superb di❤️
the kitchen scene was hilarious; tomatoes on d wall, ketchup and nangu papa hehehehe!!! ansh has really become naughty and he is helping his mumma😛
shakespare=bedtime story for aarti😆
so aarti design jewelry, great👍🏼
can't wait for their trip to delhi😉
lovely as always dear👏
update soon and thanx for d PM😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohoho.. 😆 Heya Kat... 🤗 Continuing on Chapter 19 and 20 of Dil Jaanta Hai..



Chapter 19


After she knew the truth of Arpita, I can feel her feeling sorry and pity towards Scindia's family and especially towards the little one, Ansh ! She knew well he was abandoned even though he had everything with him!

No one knows better way to heal Yash's pain other than Aarti..! She took care of Yash in a proper manner it seemed.. Asking him to take shower and feed him his dinner as well.. 😆 😳 I'm glad Yash didn't ignore her totally.. In fact he started to share about his and Arpita's story! 😊

Oh my.. Lovely studio scene! ❤️ Yash made Arpita's clay figure and couldn't held his tears anymore and so he poured all his heart on Aarti.. He found peace in her arms it seemed.. 😳 Loved Aarti's thought in taking care of Yash.. Yes, he indeed is same as Ansh! 😛

Morning scene.. again.. too cute! 😳 Aarti broke the ice by speaking about her garden's topic till sweetoo Ansh came in ! 😛 Beautiful Part, Kat ! 👏👏






Chapter 20 (1st part) 😛

Ahaan.. Silent Yashji had a little care for our Aartiji.. 😉 He approached Aarti on how she will take care of the house alone.. 😛

Yay.. The little one is growing and hence they are heading for shopping! 😉

LOL.. Expensive VS The Best for his son.. 😆 A very cute battle between our AarYa! 😳 Oh, it seemed our Aartiji leading.. 😆 😉 Yashji finally gave up! But oh my.. this is something very sweet and cute! 😳


Oh no.. 😲 Aarti sprained her ankle.. and the scene was a bit panic and shocking! 😲 Our Yashji started his work.. 😳 He began to take care his Aartiji.. 😳 Maggi.. 😆 Oh god.. Pity Aarti.. 😆 She is even hard to go to the bathroom and asking Yash for help.. Pity him too! 😛

Convert game.. 😆 Now that's too good! Yash get ready a cute simple breakfast for Aarti.. and here our girl praising Yash for his coffee! 😉 Ansh is so cute with his Coopee.. 😆





Oh, I'm sure they are much closer to each other now! 😳 Will have to stop here.. Continuing soon! 😆😉 Chapter 20 B and Chapter 21 pending.. 😉 Good Job, Kat.. 👏👏
Edited by IsYaRoCHeR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Kat, welcome back with my 2longish chapter comment

So, coming to ch20 . deepti is great gal n the dedication suits her as its ssmes like deepti ishtile which i call when i read her ff

So , sab gayab, hero n heroine akele tht too no servants hmm sounds interesting

So aarya busy with chote nawab in daly chores n (gharelu) homely convo

Yash ji you don't forget she is gundi did aka JKR so she can manage it all be it you or ansh

Yashji its not all about teh best wah kya msterniji hai yash ki we love her kyun hai naa

N it between you touched yash childhood thts so sweet which showcase their comfort

Loud crash waht aartiji as always clums but waht she did hmm i am hoping to have fund aarya ride kat n yes it is

Wow yashji put her in her embrace n then her foor balle balle.. pyar toh hona hi tha.. ( sorry long way to go) but this is just beginning right kat as life parners not lovers but better status then parents right

N again their convo on daily chores n yash detailing at work wondering ghar ka kya hoga

Aarya n bathroom hmm coffee naa world famous coffee or i shud say coppeee

Deal woh mronig se leke sham tak booking done

Bath ab samjha aaya nurse kahein chiye this even i am surprised with this obvious element let me see where you wil take them

U know kat i love you bring small things be it yash childhood, aarti accident, yash hurt on aarti word of she dont care or the face she don't have much clothes also how yash observes n understand her comfort n discomfort

Yash is such sweetheart wow skirts she must look fab n the portray is just perfect maar hi daala... love the vision Kat

Omg wow wow i just loved it n really forget how many n the times i have read n re read it n honestly it has hidden wish from my side too always want yash to care for aarti like se did to him before her pregnancy.. cant wait to jump on ch21

ps i stiill feel my comment is too short on what you gave us🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Kat welcome back so hoz your vacation

I am impatient so posted my comment as soon as saw you back so that you can revert to me

Longish. Aaryaish chapter I will say

So Aarti fianly make aarya dance in her tunes I mean yash cooking serious wala no Maggie n toast this time

N wow fb of wo weeks cannot sound so sweet that yash become incharge n taking care of Aarti which s one f my dream to be shown n thanks for fulfilling it

N comfort can be felt despite aarya dint go vacation for the same reasn that they are not

Shakespeare n more I like is how easily now they speak their heart out be Aarti talking of P n unborn or yash of arpita with her

Weird but fun to imagine yash in white ( wink) n red red on his shirt ( tomatoes n sauce, I thot to clarify before your thot process runs into)

Alu se lag jayega yaar …. Papa nangu!"… awww cho chweeettt

Yash and Aarti become frnz not yet partners n lovers is long way to go so elders took wise decision I must say n aarti hidden talents or making both so creative now making them again unite now hopefully in eternal bond which we know but they yet to realize

N delhi I know you are ringing as you want you doc to be around too hai naa I don't know anything but seems somebody is impressed n in awe with him

N now your note that you want to foucs on aarya will be focused n now will see how they grew as person, partners , parent n Pyarwale ( using lovers as p3 ho gaya that so y not another P for aarya)

You know you rock but still will say thanks girlie for beautiful work n sharing with us .. thanks for regular pms.. heading soon fro you os tooo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

*****Reserved*****


Wanted to squeeze in my comment before you start the new thread.

Advance congratulations == Thread no 3 on the way soon.


Will edit this for more.



😆 😆 - et tu Deepti? Thank you though.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Continuing my journey today on your Dil Jaanta Hai.. 😃


Wow.. Chapter 17B was awesome! 👏👏 It is nice to see them having tiff sometime.. 😛 Yash took it seriously when Aarti said 'your son' to Yash... It truly hurts.. I understand! But ahaan.. the holi actually made all is well back between them.. 😉 I loved those moments when they are playing together.. 😳

Lol - typical of parents, though. When the child is well-behaved, then "mera" otherwise "tera" 😉. And holi is a festival to bring people closer - so how could it not weave its magic on Yash and Arti??

Another mistake spotted was wearing Prashant's mangalsutra unknowingly.. 😲 Again, this indirectly hurts Yash! I'm glad Yash talked to her about that.. 😛

Yeah - totally unexcusable on Arti's part. Though think about it, given the intentions Yash had (nek toh bilkul bhi nahi the), if this had not happened, then the alternative may well have proved to be way worse for these two 😊.



Chapter 17C brought a tiny smile in my face back! Although Ansh had fallen in sick, but these two had put much efforts to ensure the little one to be fine soon! And they succeeded.. 😃 Basically, Ansh is the main factor causing AarYa to be closer but then again they distanced themselves after Ansh is well.. But I'm happy for the fact that Yash had put on the mangalsutra by himself around Aarti's neck.. 😳 I hope they got closer soon! 😛

I think Arti has a hidden drama-queen streak in her 😆.



Chapter 18: Oh ji.. Yash enjoyed Aarti's jealousy towards him and Anjali.. 😆 😉 As usual, I loved the morning scene.. ❤️ And I'm happy that Aarti allowed Yash for Arpita's barsi...

And during her barsi, Aarti got to know Arpita had committed suicide from Anjali.. And that's went everything turned tensed and emotional... The story was kinda touchy.. I'm feeling bad for Yash and even Ansh for not having his parent's love during the first week of his life..

Well, it wasn't really a question of Arti allowing him to go to the barsi. It was more whether she would support him for it or not. Eventually he would have gone regardless - but without Arti's presence and hence visible support, he may not have been able to participate.

Will have to stop here for now.. Will come back tomorrow reading it.. 😛 🤗

Damn.. 😆 Read your shayari for me.. 😆 Thanks a ton and sorry for not coming on Sunday.. The reason is my Life re.. 😆 Who knows my father would prolonged our vacation? 😆😉

What a lovely reason for being absent. Give your father a jaadu ki jhappi for prolonging your vacation.



Isya 🤗. Thank you my dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

ooohhh baby!

This was really an enjoyable and fun part as u suggested. Had a great time reading this part.

I loved the friendship that is growing between them and the growing care and concern for each other.

The fun part was the entire kitchen fight... tomato, potato and the nangu papa 😆😆

Oh & I also liked Pankaj and Aarti scenes. Glad to see such a comfort level between Aarti and Pankaj. Glad she accepted and Yahs also encouraged her, Good Boy! 😉

now coming to the best part... "I was born to be his mother and he my son" 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Such a beautiful and strong thought. Was very happy to see Yash's reaction to her. 😊

Now waiting for their 2 weeks to get over.

enjoyed the part. thankyou.

loads of love
Vinu




Did i ever tell you how much i enjoy your different coloured commentary Vinu? And for this part, somehow your colour selection seems perfect!

Thank you - glad you enjoyed. The whole kitchen scene was very tongue-in-cheek for me, but i had a blast visualizing it. And that line of Arti's - Yash's reaction - i need to re-work that. It was slightly off. Ah well, phir kabhi.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer



Ohhh Thread 3???? Wow!!!!

Congrats dear! Hats off to ur writing skills



I know, right? Who would have thunk??? No credit to my writing skills re - credit to all you amazing readers.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: billieberry

oh dear what a long chapter😃

i really loved it superb di❤️
the kitchen scene was hilarious; tomatoes on d wall, ketchup and nangu papa hehehehe!!! ansh has really become naughty and he is helping his mumma😛
shakespare=bedtime story for aarti😆
so aarti design jewelry, great👍🏼
can't wait for their trip to delhi😉
lovely as always dear👏
update soon and thanx for d PM😳




Thanks Billie. And my apologies to the Bard for using his Tempest as my Arti's lullaby! Delhi will be more than a trip - more like a move. I am thinking permanent move...let's see.

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