SS - DARE ME 2 LUV U! LAST CHAPTER pg. 36

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AvNeil123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

thanks for the PM Enid, loved update!!!

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vidya29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

The idea's quite fresh on aarti-yash.Me likey:).
What I loved in this story is as follows:
# The narration is quite fresh,easy to grasp and lovely.You write well.
# Pari is Yash's sister.I like Pari's character as you've depicted.she's naughty but her intentions are good.I like that your suraj gayatri aren't that high on tradition and archaic notions.Can prateek be seen as more than timid,lovable?
# Aakash is Yash's bestfriend.I like this positive take on him.
# AarYa (as much of him as I've seen ).

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Shalini barman roy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

wow lovely part enid.

waiting for more😳

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Chitra_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Looking forward to their first conversation and their respective thoughts on impression they have created.

Eagerly waiting for your next update.

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

that was nice soo yash and aarti not willing neither they did ut will mer or we shud say destiny is plannie for them

love the way you potrait each charcter.. will look forward to aaya first meetin..nice one dear😃

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alinaza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

This was such a cute update:). Wow, Aakash is nice here?? Well, Ishi baby is still mean. I'm wondering what Aarti's back story is, her life seems to have been quite difficult and complicated. Also wondering what on earth Paridhi is doing with a camera lol. Loved how Yashji thinks Aarti is beatiful hehe. Cant wait tor read what happens next!

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MelodiousDreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Enid!

This is such a fabulous, fun story! I'm loving it so far! And Yash's first glimpse of a certain woman has already got him noting certain things about her appearance and how tall she is...Aarti, on the other hand..."Immune to men" is a little phrase that made me wonder how this "adventure" is going to change her...Really liked the hints about her past, her career motivations, and that other person whose name starts with "A" in Aarti's part of the world...

Update soon, hun! Enjoying this thoroughly already!

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Enid - you started a fiction and i didn't know!! Gasp - horror-of-horrors! Why? Why this kolaveri-di?? 😆

Loved the prologue. The brother-sister bonding is sooo cute - very life-like. Waise, is Pratik a ghar-jamai here? Seems he is all settled in.

Interesting premise - and Paridhi dropped her bro into boiling hot water, didn't she? 😆

Do let me know when you update - would love to read more.

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Enid - why are you making my life difficult? Huh? I am asking nicely - u do not want a mad-Kat at you😡. I had to go through all these pages to find your updates. Hey - don't pm, i don't care. But at least put the page numbers down for the updates somewhere on page 1. Grrr...

Bechari Pari. Lol - poor thing, really. Yash will be fine, will land on his feet eventually. But poor kid - if he is a typical brother, he will tarpaofy-her.

Will wait till you unfold the details about Arti...

Waiting for more

Edited by kdsubs1 - 12 years ago