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pal_maan

@pal_maan

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Posted: 12 years ago

BORING!!! You got to be kidding me Zahra...

This piece was sooo touching and truly soul Searing' I felt so heavy at heart when Yash was continuously saying that he will not leave her anticipating that the reason of Aarti's loneliness would definitely be his death and nothing else.

God!!! That was a tremendous work of emotional writing yaar. Simple yet intriguing. You cannot leave it midway for ANY reason, it just keeps you engross with every word and with every unsaid emotion.

Loved it to the core topper' Great work

BTW, which song is it, I mean from which movie. I would love to listen it... That's really beautiful...

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing work, Zahra dear! 👏👏👏

Oh.. I'm craving for hug now.. 😆😳 You made me cry.. 😭😭😭 The emotions are very well written and perfect dialogues! Love the song too! ❤️

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!!!! So emotional!!! 😭 Beautifully written dear!!!! 👏

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Priyasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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LOVELY work Zahra...

Loved it totaly

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Mula

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very touching😭 well done dear it was amazing 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

Zahra I don't know what to say, as right now I'm too emotional after reading this 😭

That's a very touching and heart wrenching story. 😭

But so beautifully written that you can feel every emotion and pain in it 👏

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Tahitien-moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved you update dear

betty boop winks

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Gosh this was just so touching and beautiful. Loved it

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

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Posted: 12 years ago

What a beautiful OS yet so heart wrenching. I was literally crying while reading your work. Thank you for the pm.

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow dear u made me cry with ur emotional touching story dear !!!

hats off to u !!!

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