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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
What an intriguing turn of events!
Filled with suspense...
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res...šŸ˜‰

Will un-res tomorrow!...Psst...TODAY!šŸ˜‰
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So I wanna cry because of many reasons...

1. I have 2 essays to write for you.
2. Yash is being mean to Aarti ( but the next chapter is over-powering that)
3. I wanna write the other chapter first but I go in order
4. You are too awesome for giving this suspense.

So point 1, I will kick Mansi in her fr**ing a*s if she tells Yash about the pregnancy as I kinda wanted to see Aarti seducing Yash. I know! I think I'm the only person who wanted that to happen but I might end up giving some of you a dose of that.šŸ˜‰

Point 2, What did Prashant tell Mansi?????? Did he tell her that Yash had told Aarti all that years ago because he asked him to? Because Arpita was feeling wronged as she really did convince her family?

SO here I come back with my predictions...WHY DID YASH TELL AARTI ALL OF THAT??

1. He loved Arpita and well Prashant ended up brainwashing him telling him that he had a chance to get back to her and well he would take care of Aarti.
2. He made love with Arpita that night right? Why? Why did Arpita finally agree to it that night? Is it because her family agreed because they knew of that night? Is it because Yash was feeling betrayed at the fact that Aarti still loved Aarti and he actually loved her? There has to be a reason for this.
3. Prashant convinced him that they would both get their lives back?
4. Are these stupid?

Now, next thing, point 3 the Scindiya family and their orthodox thinking? Can they stop! Ugghh!

Point 4, Buaji and RD?? Please no CON for them! Please!

Point 5, I loved Aarti's response to Yash! So that kick isn't coming up any time soon huh? But I loved the way she answered him!

Point 6, Gayatri, Bua , I have some advice for them. You have your lovers! Sleep with them and please DO NOT poke your nose in my Aarya's life! Please!!!

Point 7, Yash you sh**ing LOVE her and your marriage with Arpita was the compromise right? If you weren't acting like a male b**ch,...meaning...a...DOG...years ago due to reasons my dear Saffi might answer above, you may have had a better life right now! Blame yourslef, no one else! Or maybe it's Prashant's fault! Urrggghh!

Point 8, So Aarti said no to abortion, NICE!

Point 9, Loving SP in your FF man! Loving him!!!!

Yash...FINALLY GET A LIFE!!!

So I loved this chapter, this reply may be short but the next one ( for chapter 17 that's already up) WILL be longer!! I promise!!

BTW- I can't say continue soon as the next one is up so I will say Keep up the great work and I loved your comment in MHS also.

Roll up your gloves, you have another comment to write as well, the next chapter will be up soon-ish. I left some hints in this comment as to what will happen as I felt nice today,

Edited by guruandkratz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow a very unexpected twist at the end. Maybe we will find out why Yass left Aarti when they were in a relationship.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Saffi you nearly gave me a heart attack with the ending. When Mansi called Yash, I got this feeling that she will tell Yash about Aarti's secret, which I kinda want to happen as it'll help Aarti out of her predicament.

But when she said " Prashant told me everything" now I'm sacred, what if she tell some kind of a lie about Aarti, that it was Aarti who tricked Prashant šŸ˜•

Psst. Saffi when Vidhi says to Maya Bua that RD is looking for you, it reminded me of Bua's and RD's scene drom your OS, " Tonight I Went To Heaven" šŸ˜‰ 🤣
Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Saffi!

So Yash is forcing himself to hate Aarti and be rude to her, interesting!

I can't believe you left this cliffhanger! I am dying to know what Mansi is going to say to Yash!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Saffi. Glad Aarti didn't go for an abortion. Mansi calling Yash at the end was really a surprise. Beautifully written as usual.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Part Saffi 😳
U r a Wonderful Writer 😃
Portraying each character very well šŸ‘
Now m confused in last line šŸ˜•
What prashant told Mansi šŸ˜•
Jo usay Yashu ko batana hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saffi, I'm loving it! Don't take too long to update again! curious to find out how Yashji will react to what Mansi will tell him!!!! will he flip out even more?, after all Prashant was the antagonist in his and Aarti's love story before as well. Or will he be surprisingly understanding for Aarti's sake? 😊
btw reading the your reply to Deepti's comment about Aarya's CON, I highly doubt Yashji will think it's Arpita since clearly he's still in love with Aarti. He's just desperately trying to hate her for supposedly betraying him long time ago and now destroying what he settled for after her betrayal by marring Arpita.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is so. Gripping.
Eeehhh can't you update soon šŸ˜†
I mean I'm really excited and curious to know what will Yash and Maansi tell each other unless you decide to put it in mute like in the serialšŸ˜”šŸ˜†

RamDulare and BuaJi...finally ā¤ļøšŸ¤£

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Promo for Chapter Seventeen is here!

By the way, I'm planning on making promos for chapter 18 , 19 and 20 too. 😊

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MNFbWjCpY9M[/YOUTUBE]

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MNFbWjCpY9M

Dailymotion Link: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xylf65_as-long-as-i-live-chapter-seventeen-promo_shortfilms#.UVZpNVecHJg
Edited by ilovepyaar - 12 years ago

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