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-AarYaholic- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
The text in bold is the updated version...suggest changes if any
Summary so far :

Its SP and G3's marriage anniversary, the venue has been decided to be a famous star hotel in Bhopal...the family have invited the Dubeys to join them in their celebration

Yash and Aarti have not been accepted wholeheartedly as a part of the family yet, but they are invited to the party since the Scindias cannot afford to answer the questions that might arise in the minds of the curious outsiders

The G3-SP,Pankaj-Vidhi & Paridhi-Prateek scenes in the hotel (beofre the party) will be written...

Yash and Aarti are set to leave for the venue with the kids(after everyone has left)We show their romantic moments here..they later overhear a strange self talk
They overhear Akaash saying that he is soon going to fool Cas and his family about him being his father...

AarYa keep this a secret only to be revealed at the right time

Later at the Hotel...we write about the performances and how RD and Bua find their soulmates in each other...

The day ends here and the scene shifts to SM, where Bua and RD are caught by SP redhanded (they are dancing and merrying around in the garden late at night, but are caught since Bua's deadly singing wakes him up)...He drags Bua to the main area of the house RD follows) and starts reprimanding her act...the volumes rise and make all the other members wake up and gather at the scene...Cas is also seen slapping Bua hard...G3 says she cannot believe what she has seen, the younger couples too are as numb as a statue, Bua asks Cas as to why he did not consider her remarriage and now that she has found someone, why is he acting as an obstacle for the two...she adds that she wants to marry RD, everyone is shocked for the second time...
The two ghosts are still harrowing Akaash since all they want is revenge from Cas and Akaash is the only one at the moment who'll readily help them (Akaash has his own selfish reasons)

ksfan2 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ miti bye..take care..

@froz..well since u told me aakash will be harrassed by the ghosts he will lead the ghosts to the aarya's room..so after S.p still not accepting bua..leaves her alone in the hall..were RD consoles her..everybody goes to their respective room..aarthi when entering the room she will be holding yash's hand..this will anger the ghosts and the light will be on and off by itself and the windows will be making sounds and the tv will be on and off thus yash gives aarthi a protective arm..and aarthi hugs him back in fear..aakash in the mean time who came to take ...give some suggesions guys
-AarYaholic- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG..Bye Miti..take care, do not strain yourself for this thing

GN Bye
Thabassum19 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: miti16295


nice but why ghost in aarya's room?😕



Nice 😆
-AarYaholic- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
OK...I liked the Bedroom horror scene...but before that, lets make AarYa convince Cas for Bua's PV...I know they haven't been accepted as yet, but still...
ksfan2 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Frozen007

The text in bold is the updated version...suggest changes if any
Summary so far :

Its SP and G3's marriage anniversary, the venue has been decided to be a famous star hotel in Bhopal...the family have invited the Dubeys to join them in their celebration

Yash and Aarti have not been accepted wholeheartedly as a part of the family yet, but they are invited to the party since the Scindias cannot afford to answer the questions that might arise in the minds of the curious outsiders

The G3-SP,Pankaj-Vidhi & Paridhi-Prateek scenes in the hotel (beofre the party) will be written...

Yash and Aarti are set to leave for the venue with the kids(after everyone has left)We show their romantic moments here..they later overhear a strange self talk
They overhear Akaash saying that he is soon going to fool Cas and his family about him being his father...

AarYa keep this a secret only to be revealed at the right time

Later at the Hotel...we write about the performances and how RD and Bua find their soulmates in each other...

The day ends here and the scene shifts to SM, where Bua and RD are caught by SP redhanded (they are dancing and merrying around in the garden late at night, but are caught since Bua's deadly singing wakes him up)...He drags Bua to the main area of the house RD follows) and starts reprimanding her act...the volumes rise and make all the other members wake up and gather at the scene...Cas is also seen slapping Bua hard...G3 says she cannot believe what she has seen, the younger couples too are as numb as a statue, Bua asks Cas as to why he did not consider her remarriage and now that she has found someone, why is he acting as an obstacle for the two...she adds that she wants to marry RD, everyone is shocked for the second time...
The two ghosts are still harrowing Akaash since all they want is revenge from Cas and Akaash is the only one at the moment who'll readily help them (Akaash has his own selfish reasons)


superb froz ji👏👏
Thabassum19 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay ..so thats new plan !
-AarYaholic- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is that OKay with you too Thabs,

Then can we have

SCENE 13

Bua and RD, the love struck birds are singing and merrying around in the garden of SM in the wee hours of the night when Cas's sleep is disturbed and he fires the two, who are lost in their own world..it is followed by a high-voltage drama where Bua declares that she wants to remarry and that too with RD

SCENE 14

AarYa give their first shot at convincing Cas for Bua's PV

SCENE 15

Neelam arrives at the SM with an aim to help out AarYa in their mission to teach Akaash a lesson??

Neelam gets to know about Akaash and his weird tactics in the party and her doubts are further deepened when AarYa tell her that they've heard something from his mouth??

Add these scenes if everyone agrees (as usual) 😆

Edited by Frozen007 - 12 years ago
ksfan2 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
im stuck froz di..i mean what does aakash take from aarya's room..??..aarthi who is scare screams so loudly that pari pratiek comes and will ask what happend..everythis goes back to normal with their arrival..akash jumps off from the balcony somehow...

the next day bua and RD will be in each others arms...bua will be crying and RD comforting her..aarya will be coming down from the stairs to leave paypal and ansh to school..they see this romance and realize that they are really in love with each other..then they will plan to unite them...and can we have neelam's entry here??
ksfan2 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
ACT 3

SCENE 11 :

The ghosts are harrowing Aakash

SCENE 12 :

S.P..catches bua and RD red handed

SCENE 13

Bua and RD, the love struck birds are singing and merrying around in the garden of SM in the wee hours of the night when Cas's sleep is disturbed and he fires the two, who are lost in their own world
SCENE 14

AarYa give their first shot at convincing Cas for Bua's PV

SCENE 15

Neelam arrives at the SM with an aim to help out AarYa in their mission to teach Akaash a lesson??

Neelam gets to know about Akaash and his weird tactics in the party and her doubts are further deepened when AarYa tell her that they've heard something from his mouth??




Edited by ksfan2 - 12 years ago

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