As Long As I Live Thread 1 - Page 83

waw waw waw what a wonderful update ...very well described aarti's feelings...now i think aarya are forever...plz continue soon👏👍🏼

Saffi each line just pulls me deeper into ur fantasy land. The way u put Aarti's emotion and feeling into words were outstanding. The pain is just amazing. Each and every update of urs is sumething that i always look forward too. Am waiting for ur next mind blowing update. Thank u Saffi for giving me the oppurtinity to be apart of this fantasy land. Thank u.

Great update

Superb dear, it was so beautiful yash nd Aarti soulmate forever<3 update soon anytime u re free me waiting. thanx for d PM

superb update dear👏loved it.😃thanx for update and pm😊.

nice part dear take your own time to update

Loved the chapter Saffi 👏
Aarti was in a dilemma of cheating P becoz she still loved him despite of his betrayel to her ! poor girl was so confused as to move on in lyf or not ! A part of her asked her to give in to the feelings for Yash n other corner of her mind coaxing her to not move on otherwise she'll b the one betraying her first love ! 😃
Loved it absolutely , esp when Yash asked her, "Aarti will you let me show you off to the world as mine?" ❤️
Thanx for the chapter !
Waiting for more 😊
Em very happie reading the chapter, finally she succumbed to her feelings for Yash 😃

Originally posted by: elanpremi

wow, it is getting really hot to handle dear

loved every word of it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: --Iqra--

Great job! Thanks for the PM! I was sort of expecting Aarti to do something like that, as well as Prashant, but the way Yash took in everything and how patient he was surprised me. Thank you for doing it the way you did, I loved it. Another thing that through me completely off guard was the, "I like me too." Rofl, they were having a moment. Lovely update! Excellent work! Eagerly waiting for the next update!

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. =) Yash is a playful guy!

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Hey! It's fabulous. AarYa so close, and be in relationship. Pls. don't make Aarti go back to Prashant again, Yash will shatter again.

Thank you so much! Yeah, they're in a relationship now. Sorry, I can't guarantee that she won't go back to him. =(

Originally posted by: ForeverAarYan

Saffi I can't tell you my feelings when I started reading the update. With every initial lines I was expecting some disaster to happen.But as I kept reading I realised that more and more you are becoming unpredictable like our CV. So glad you took this route.

I can understand that why she felt like she betrayed P. Yash made me so proud...the way he handled the whole situation.

Trust me when I say this, the way you wrote these two characters it felt like they real persons not some fictional characters. You made us so emotionally attached with them that we smile with their joy, swears at their stupidity.

The ending made me uneasy again. Now I'm dreading to read the next update.

I don't have enough words to praise the update. So not going to try just let you know that this story is very close to my heart. Thanks for the pm.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! <3 <3 <3

The disaster will come up soon, muahaha don't worry! 😆 I like being unpredictable. In fact... the next part might be more unpredictable, and the one that follows it will be unpredictable beyond limits!

Yeah, Yash handled her very maturely. 😛

That means the world to me! Thank you so much for saying that! I wanted to make them as realistic as possible, and I wasn't sure whether I was succeeding, but now I know that their characterization is on the right track!

Good luck with the next update is all I have to say. It's already written... I wonder if I should post it now or if I should wait. 😛

Aww, that's so sweet of you. Thank youuu! I have a huge smile on my face. Your comment is very close to my heart. Thank you for reading it and taking your time to comment! ❤️