Sparsh (An SS) Epilogue (Thread 2/Page 81) - Page 71

@Smiley: Thank you so much for such lovely words of compliments and for loving Sparsh.😳 It was a simple little story but it touched all of us with one common thread...and that is Love...our belief in love. As such I didn't really do anything except to become the medium to spread some heartfelt love and cheer.

I am sad too that I had to end it...but then I did what I thought was right. You were with me in this journey...so we know how deep their love and understanding is. I wanted the readers to just sit back after this and just imagine how Yash and Mishti will spend their lives together.

Dear dear Barbie Doll...I too will never forget this Sparsh...your words written with so much love after each part...taking time to dwell on the places you loved and just enjoying the read. I am much grateful to you for walking beside me.

Sure we shall be in touch...through DC...the MF...and God willing if I do pen anything else.😊

Take care...Give my love to your little Ansh.🤗

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Indu first of all

👏 ⭐️ 👏 👏 ⭐️ 👏 👏 ⭐️ 👏

For giving us such a BEAUTIFUL STORY OF ETERNAL LOVE AND BONDING. 👏 ⭐️ 👏

What to say. There are no words left for me to describe my feelings towards such a beautiful journey of SPARSH. Earlier I was sad when I felt that it will end soon. But not anymore, cause I know that it will always remain in my heart. ❤️

I've read so many romantic novels. Some have left their mark in my heart. SPARSH is definitely among them.

The last part was just dreamy . Their first official romantic date was out of this world. And their wedding 👏. Loved the part where though so tired Ansh and Palak attended the whole wedding. How could they miss such a fairy tale ending ( or rather beginning ) of their parents amazing love story.

And your epilogue. WOW. Once again 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Mishti's realization was so right that they both were just meant to be. Their union was already blessed with lord. So they were meant to come together. And the ending . So simple yet so sensuous 😳

" YOUR SPARSH HAS COMPLETED ME". The last line touched me and left me speechless once again.

I wish that continue and write more. So that we will get more of such beautiful stories.

Once again 👏 ⭐️ 👏 👏 ⭐️ 👏

And this is for you ❤️ 🤗 ❤️

Nikki..my friend...you overwhelm me completely with such words. I don't know what to say really. I am glad that Sparsh touched the romantic in you and for a while I could give you some moments of happiness. I am taking back a lot more from this experience. It's been really a fulfilling and learning journey for me.

How can I not try to respond to everyone who took time off to write a few lines for Sparsh? They didn't have to...you didn't have to. You could have just read it and and passed on, but you didn't. You gave more time to Sparsh than a mere read...As such the least I could do is try to convey my gratitude.😳


Thank you so much Nikki. I shall definitely write again if I get a theme that inspires me enough. Take care ...and stay smiling.


Thanks for the hug...here's one for you...🤗

Originally posted by: freya123

superb

Thanks freya.😊

Originally posted by: lulujjj

awesome epilogue dear i have to read the last three chapters again then Insha Allah i would comment.

Thanks Naeema...I shall await your comments.😊

Originally posted by: pvejani

just read last three part and epilogue update in one go... as i was busy last week due to some personal reasons

loved itdear.beautifully written.

you are a superb writer

loved your story a lot

thanx for updates and pm

feeling sad also as story ended😭

Thanks pvejani...

I just adore those emos...I am going to steal one from you to give back to you the love you showered on Sparsh...

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Awesum epilogue,Indu

Loved the conversation between Yash n Mishti

It was very touching

Indu u r a wonderful writer

Take a Bow

Thanx for creating such a lovely story Sparsh

Waiting eagerly for ur new story

Thank you Rachna...Let's see if something tugs my heartstrings again...till then, take care.🤗

Originally posted by: doratalk

Indu- that was a beautiful epilogue! And what a start to the valentine's week for me- to read your Sparsh! I can honestly tell you that I will miss this story. You are an incredible writer- able to create romance, suspense, tension- and blend it all in so seamlessly! If you do write another SS, and I so hope you do- please include me in your mailing list!

Have a lovely Valentines!

Thanks Dora...I have always looked forward to your sweet words. 😳I shall definitely let you know if I write another story again.


Happy Valentine's for you too...🤗

Originally posted by: sia221

I wish I could write more elaborately.. in some really deep..flowery..philosophical.. style abt how I felt abt this story...But I can't... and better not...!! 😆

I will just say...This has been a wonderful story.. a real treat..a real pleasure to read...!! 😊

Each and every character were simply beautiful...!! 😊

U are one amazingly talented writer...!! ⭐️

Thank u so much.. Indu for sharing this...!! 😊

Sia...I need to thank you for being there for me...for Sparsh...for all that you had to say for the story.😳 I only did what I loved to do...something that I started so hesitantly and then realized that I loved doing it...writing the story, that is. You and the others here helped me learn a lot. I am definitely the much richer person at the end of this experience.

Thank you once again...🤗

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Indu - very sweet ending to a very sweet tale. However, i found something missing. Really.

How about an epilogue - part 2 that includes the children? Palak and Ansh were the catalysts, the driving force, the excuse for separation as well as the "proclaimed" reason for the milap. So how could you leave them out?? Now that the family is officially, legally, socially complete - how about a small scene with the kids?

Kat...thanks pal. Aww...I missed the kids too in the Epilogue. However, like I told someone a few pages back, I had a few options for Epilogue. I settled for this because this was the ending of what began...and the beginning of what is to come. The journey that began on that dargah road had to culminate in its realization and then kickstarted again with the talk of a future...the future they are going to have with the family...They had to realize what made them wait for each other...it was their destiny...a destiny that caused the detours and that had effected the convergence now.

Originally posted by: custodian75

I am bit sad to see the story end, but it was done at the right point. The way you went about the story was very good. You stuck to the story and did not deviate from it, no unnecessary plots, or scenes. Very nice😊. The best part was you did not expect anything from anyone, no threats for the no of likes or comments. U really touched my heart and I do not say it often. Thank you for a beautiful story written by a beautiful person.👏😊

Hi dear friend...Thank you for the thumbs up. Your terse appreciation really gladdened me, simply because the ares that you pointed were the very areas that used to make me nervous. The "What if..." never left me...Yet, somehow I ended up doing what my heart dictated at that moment. None of the parts were preplanned...They came out as I would sit down to write.

As for expectations from the readers...do people really do that? I don't understand why, so won't judge those who do. My understanding is very simple: If I write something out of the sheer love of it and if someone reads it, then I am the one enriched because of that. How can I force someone to appreciate something they may not have liked or found not up to their taste or for whatever reason they don't actively participate? What I mean is you are doing me the favor by taking time to read my words...you are giving me the honor by loving what I penned...and not the other way round. I am not bestowing any favors so how can I demand?😕


I touched your heart, pal...that's my reward. It doesn't matter whether you gave regular comments or not...clicked on the Like or not...as long as my words brought few moments of happiness to your life, I am at peace. Thank you once again...Take care.🤗