CONSEQUENCES (a fiction)-updt Chapter 16 (pg 51) - Page 31

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

OMG what is this.. I love the series revenge but now I'm scared..😆..
He would show her what suffering exactly is..
This line is kinda freaky.. hopefully it's some hot scene...🤣

Fantastic updates Sarah

BOLD: Sweety, looks like I'll have to fulfil your wish in my next update, even if I don't intend to, I'll do it for you . I can see that you're hopelessly hooked to Yash-Aarti's "hot" scenes . Let's hope Yash's revenge is a sweet, sweaty and hot revenge...much to your liking!! 😆😆

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Sarah: I just went through the four chapters. What can I say my friend...simply mindblowing!!! I love your style of narration, and I am simply in awe of your detailing that leads to a build up...Wow!! The passion that those two have for each other is pulsating...Passionate love always touches extremes...and you have brought that out beautifully...👏

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Whoa! I know I haven't commented here in ages, but I've been following along regularly (rushing here every time there's an update, that is) and I love, love, love how this is shaping up! It's such a treat seeing Aarti's angst and Yash's boiling bitterness and tremendous jealousy...Adding Aman to the mix just made that fight scene in this chapter intense yet hilarious. Sarah, you have a wonderful talent of infusing tiny sprinkles of humor into even the most emotional scenes. I love that. And don't even get me started on the way you bring out Yash and Aarti's thoughts in every chapter. Fantastic writing style. Damn, I love this story!

P.S. I love how you update so quickly...Can't wait for the next chapter!

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Damn it! Just when I was sucked into it, the update was finished again. 😭😭😭

Originally posted by: RA17

Awww that was a roller coaster ride babe' first of all a big thanks ofr 2 updates and PM..😃😃😃😃

U know the magic of this story which made me additcted and then a break ( don't feel bad I understand completely)
😆😆😳 Its like holding a glass for long time but then this really makes you worth it' the way you write I can imagine each and every expreesions of each charcter' you define them so well and then redefine and polish it further in each next part that words lose its importance..

All I can say I can feel the emotion of AARYA jealousy insecurity to ' AMan & mansi genuine concern for her friend.. tocute fight if sameer and mansi tooo power pact fight for the lady' well both of your updates are so much in sync' that all I can say a small word thanks..thanks a ton⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️

you dont know excited i am for your next when they fnally come face to face

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Awesome update dear last two parts read in one go, poor aarti and yash their pain made me feel so emotional and loved the part of sameer feeling jealous about his crazy woman mansi, aman and yash fight it was a manly fight loved that scene too, and the last part aman plan cant wait ...please update next part soon. yesterday i read all the previous update in one go crazily.

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

so wht I reading here Yash and Aarti gonna hav make up sex hmmm...I can just imagine it now...ewww look at wht I'm imagining 😆😆