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RIYA

@RA17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Yes AarYa represent the perfect couple... of course with their share of problems but they never give up on each other and stand by each other (as you put it) come what may.

That's why i was inspired by PV to write this FF.

Thx for going through and liking this update.😃

Agree we all our inspired and captured with the depth ofrelatiosnhip is potrayed in the show... n readding AARYA ff wriiten by such creative ppl.. the pleasure is ol mine dear lady😉😉😉

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drmhp

@drmhp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

wow superb update

feeling bad about Pari & Pratik😭

but loving that this family problems are making AarYa more closure 👍🏼

Hope AarYa will succeed to reunite Pari & Pratik soon

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

**Sigh** Deepti, knock the heads of those two dunces together...If you don't, I will. They'd go around taking care of everyone's feelings but their own. Can't they see that when there's a crisis, the only person they think of first is the other? The deeply vaulted feelings are bound to feel so suffocated that one day they will burst out. Anyway, hope that in untangling the brothers' lives, they start taking cognizance of their own tangles and work toward untying them.

Once again, superb storytelling Deepti.👏 That Prateik/Pari fight is so realistic in today's ego-ridden, tolerance-devoid world.

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: miti16295
wow superb update
feeling bad about Pari & Pratik😭
but loving that this family problems are making AarYa more closure 👍🏼
Hope AarYa will succeed to reunite Pari & Pratik soon

Thx for liking the update.😃

I am just showing what could have happened in PV. So its not like totally new or something. Even in PV i felt their(PraDhi) relationship was not as strong as one would like.

Yes they(AarYa) are two brain-less people. They are so full of assumptions about the other that they are denying expressing what they feel for each other. Lets see how long this phase will last.

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Originally posted by: InduG64
**Sigh** Deepti, knock the heads of those two dunces together...If you don't, I will. They'd go around taking care of everyone's feelings but their own. Can't they see that when there's a crisis, the only person they think of first is the other?

The deeply vaulted feelings are bound to feel so suffocated that one day they will burst out. Anyway, hope that in untangling the brothers' lives, they start taking cognizance of their own tangles and work toward untying them.

Once again, superb storytelling Deepti.👏 That Prateik/Pari fight is so realistic in today's ego-ridden, tolerance-devoid world.

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Yes that is the crux of their problems. They are too busy solving problems for others that they are not looking too closely at themselves.

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Time for retrospection will come Indu...believe me. All this is my way of setting the stage for the big bang.(yet to conceive it in my head though...so let's see)

Pratik Pari fight is just an extension to what they showed in PV. So all credit to the CVs.

Thx for your insightful comments...always a pleasure to have them.

Edited by Deepti1808 - 12 years ago

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Aisyah Abdul

@IsYaRoCHeR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

Amazing update, Deepti!!! 👏👏👏

Woah.. Get it easy! I felt like I was watching a movie when they were arguing!!! 😛😆 They were too serious until Aarti couldn't even spoke a word!

Aarti lied to the family and finally got to say it to Yash! Yash was so sweet and caring! 😳 Hmm.. sounds like they are in mission again! 😉

Update soon, Deepti! Thanks for the PM! 😃

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rutu83

@rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

loved it 👍🏼

very true to aarti's charactr in the show

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

am confused with yash's character..he is grate ful to god for aarti but still behaves weirdly...

reading this part i had made a guess bbout his behaviour...that he thought aarti made love with him not willingly but under the pressure of gayatri maa...becoz he mentioned bout being hurt becoz of her in mumbai...

awesome part...poor pari and prateik...had to suffer becoz of buaji...

also luved that she doesnt insulted aarti before leaving...

prateik is being irrational...

hope yash aarti will handel all...

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Amazing update, Deepti!!! 👏👏👏

Woah.. Get it easy! I felt like I was watching a movie when they were arguing!!! 😛😆 They were too serious until Aarti couldn't even spoke a word!

Aarti lied to the family and finally got to say it to Yash! Yash was so sweet and caring! 😳 Hmm.. sounds like they are in mission again! 😉

Update soon, Deepti! Thanks for the PM! 😃

Well when a fight gets ugly you tend to say things that have the capacity to hurt the opponent the worst.

Plus most of the conversation was from PV itself.

Yes she was burdened by the facts that she knew and only felt comfortable in sharing it with Yash.

I find Yash sweet and caring too expect during his post-mumbai phase both in PV and in my FF

Thx for the response.😃