ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 62

Originally posted by: *Maleena*

Wonderful update. Yash going to Dehli, hopeful he will run into Aarti soon.

Thank you, Maleena. Yes, ArYa will meet in Delhi - after all Yash is going to Delhi because Arti called him there.

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

Zoya is getting married...👏😳

I love this update.❤️

Can't wait to see more of Yash😳

Great...waiting for another!!👏⭐️

Lol - hi Carissa - my impatient friend 😆. Thank you, thank you. You will get a surfeit of Yash in the next part - worry not!

Originally posted by: rutu83

ok just came back and still catching up

love love love this one👏⭐️

I like the details and emotions described when aarti's coming to grips with her grief. a nd the gradual healing process. beautifully done👍🏼

and while i want yash i also like the pace of the story 😳

Hi Rutu - welcome back. Hope your trip went well.

Thank you! Arti's healing process was difficult to write - i am so glad you liked it.

As for the pace - yes, this is a slow moving story. Much as i would like to rush it, it refuses to be rushed 😆. So thank you for liking and adjusting to the pace.

Originally posted by: Sunrio80

So Aarti is recovering from her past. Hope Yash will be able to do also

Yes, Arti is on her way to recovery. And as for Yash, once we know what it is that really ails him his recovery-path will be clear too - i hope.

Thank you for reading and commenting Sunrio.

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Marvelous update!

I love how Aarti channels her energy into doing something positive and something that fulfills her. And Poor Yash! His pain brings his family pain and he is unable to do more for Ansh because he's too busy wallowing in his sorrow. None of the Scindias seem to have a handle on Ansh and it's only when father and son are sleeping together, wrapped up in each other's embrace, that there is a semblance of peace for them both.

I can't wait until the next update!

Thank you, Nina.

I have always thought it would be very natural for Arti to help care for orphans in some way. And here when she lost her baby and then lost her child again with Ansh going back home, the only unalloyed way for her to give love to a child was through an orphanage. Thank you for liking that part of her.

@bold - you put that so beautifully. Yes, father-son have only each other to turn to, and as you said, find peace only in each others' arms - even if its only in sleep. (so many onlys...).

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Loved it. It was awesome.

It's good for Aarti that she started going to orphanage .

And that Vidhi is surely upto match making 😉

So glad that Aarti remembered Yash wedding planning event. Waiting for the day they come in front of each other

Please update soon 😊

Thank you Nikki.

I don't think Vidhi is match-making - not yet anyway. The loss on both sides is too recent, the pain too raw for her to think of a possible re-marriage. However, worry for Arti is never far from Vidhi's mind, and she sees Yash daily, takes care of Ansh in lieu of a mother - so eventually the idea will enter her head.

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

😃 I saw the first line of your reply and rushed off to figure out the last time I posted, because I had forgotten that I didn't review 2 consecutive updates in a row...And I loved those parts, too! I was like, "Welcome back? How long have I been gone?" 🤗 But you should know how much I love your story anyway! Excessively so! 😳 The emotions linger long after I've finished reading (every time you post a part, if I don't catch it before the PM, I rush here to read it) and I don't know if it's a good thing or not that I tend to get so involved in stories that touch my heart. It happened with only a few shows, including this one, and that extends to stories as well. Can't help it! Holding on, holding on tight! 😊

If Yash's tapasya is going to be a surprise, I am even more eager to know the raaz! Waiting as patiently as possible! I realized while I was writing out my quick reactions to Chapter 7A that I hadn't written about how much I was moved by Aarti's interactions with Ansh and later with the orphaned children, so I mentioned it in one sweeping stroke. Chapter 6B was such a beautiful part (agree with Kadeen about it being a favorite part of mine, too) and I think 7A just kept that beauty flowing from one update to the next, from Aarti to Yash in their interactions with Ansh. *happy sigh*

P.S. This is rather late in the day, but I finally (accidentally) read that reply of yours on page 60, and it made me smile. BB/SS we are, Didi! 😳 (The BB acronym isn't a Bangla counterpart to "bichdi (hui) behnein" or something, is it? *sigh* Hindi handicap, did I get that phrase right? LOL!) Anyways, you're right. Eki kotha *nods*

Character development - you do such a fantastic job, and I really loved reading that last part of your response regarding the crafting of literary figures who come to life and make places in our hearts. Hugs to you for all that effort and love! Is it any wonder why we're all loving this story?

Borna!! Naa re, its not compulsory you post a comment. Its just very nice when you do - so it was a really pleasant surprise for me. Thank you.

Yash's "tapasya" - me and my big mouth. I have had this idea since the beginning of this story. And since that time i have been wondering if i can pen it down properly. Well, i guess i will find out when the time comes.

I ha to go back and re-read - had forgotten what reply you alluded to. You know the reason i like to get your comments? You take my words, add your own spin and then portray them so very beautifully - re the bold above. Crafting of literary figures?? Borna - don't do this to me. I am a novice, still teaching myself how to write fiction without making myself and others gag.

I am just so very thankful that you and so many others have liked this story. It pushes me to finish it.

Oh and your Hindi translation was spot on.

Originally posted by: villager00

Kat, and you leave us wanting for more again😔

Okay, i'll be patient..promise! thanks a lot for the update👏👏👏..

Enid - thank you! And my apologies for the delay - work's been so crazy that Arti and Yash have been stuck at the dining table for a couple of days now. I have to find the time to go and rescue them very soon 😆.

Originally posted by: PuvZ

Great one girl... And Thanks for the pm... 🤗

PUVZ!!!! You are back!! You made my day (night, actually, but whatever!). How are you??

Thank you so so much. And i can't tell you how very glad i am to see you again. I have been worried sick about you. Take care and loads of love to you.

Originally posted by: Popo.

lovely FF , keep it up ad thnquu fr the pm 😃

Thank you, Popo.