ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10) - Page 38

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

Wonderfully written.

The disjointed narrative achieved Aarti's POV very well.

So how is Aarti going to handle this double blow?

Is your heroine a broken woman whom the hero going to fix

OR

Is your heroine a brave woman who has already seen a life as orphan so is able to pick up the pieces and move forward remains to be seen.

Option two is more appealing for me though.

How are Zoya and her fiance going to play a role in getting Aarti back on track, what role does Shobha maa play. Oh! your story is getting very very interesting Kat

Eagerly awaiting the next update

Deepti - thank you so much!

The disjointed narrative was a first for me and i was so unsure of it. Am really glad it came through.

The next couple of parts are all about how Arti deals with this double-whammy. Like you, i prefer option 2 as well. I see Arti as a fighter so am working on having her fight through this and survive. The "living" will come later...

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

That was such an emotional update Kat👏👏. When am i going to get to know about Yash-Arptia???😕

But i really like you story telling and also the way this story is shaping up. Looking forward😃

Thank you, Ash.

Lol - looks like knowing everything about Arti just isn't enough 😆. Yash-Arpita will come, but i am afraid you will have to wait a while.

Originally posted by: keerthus.9

Hi Kat , I'm new in this thread but am following this story from past 2 parts

The story is really awesome

And as for this part , The last line of Aarti is just heart wrenchng .

I will be waiting to see how Aarti get over this ...

Hi Keerthu - welcome to my fictional world. And thank you so much for coming. I am glad you are enjoying the story.

Arti is going through a very tough time. But hey - every dark cloud has a silver lining - i am just paving the way for sunshine, rainbows and happiness 😊.

Originally posted by: balaraba

Great job, kat, it's such a beautiful update, feeling sad for aarti her husband nd her child both died. Update soon

Thank you so much Bala. Next update is almost ready...

Originally posted by: maha9

what is this dear... prashant and the baby died in the accident ah !!! Poor arthi !!!! how will she take this

Kyun Maha - i have to surprise you all once in a while na? Arti will find a way - don't worry 😊.

Originally posted by: RA17

Kat, beautiful way you have described a relation of shobha ma how she has been taking care of aarti despite she has lost her son and baby.. n zoya and ahmed truly the friends which remain in you tough time and support you.. Really aarti in his hay wai condition.. try to make sense out of what has happen n will look forward to your next where we will find how she will manage with the truth of her life.. I also like you did not make aarti n prashant relation butter but unexpected event is reason for their separation'

Good one dear.. thanks for pm and update⭐️👏

Thank you, Ra.

Arti is such a giving soul that she has surrounded herself with people who love and support her, including her in-laws. This one is straight out of the show. And these same people - her surrogate family, will now help her overcome this tragedy.

Re Prashant - to tell you the truth, i debated whether to kill him or keep him alive, show the divorce, etc. But this is a FF, and everyone is eager to have Yash enter the scene again - so, exit Prashant 😆.

Originally posted by: zahra15

LIKE button is not working for me but I totally loved the update.

It was such a heart-wrenching one.

Felt sooo bad for Aarti :'(

Thanks for the PM.

Thank you, Zahra. The fact that you went to the trouble of leaving a comment means a lot.

Sunrio, Saffi, Mishti, Guru, Sheen, Shashi, Miti, Popo - thank you so much. This was a difficult part to write and frankly, i am amazed i was able to pen down some of what i wanted to convey. And you all wonderful readers picked up from there and filled in the missing pieces. Thank you!

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

jahapanah 6 packs is in this too?😆 I start reading again soon

Hold on - what???? There is a jahapanah 6-packs in my FF and i don't know about it?? What, or rather who are you talking about Kesha-girl? Coz Ahmed certainly aint one.

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Kat I really loved this chapter so much. It was heart wrenching especially the last part when aarti asked why did you save me.
Though I knew that Prashant died from the previous update itself, I didn't even give it the slightest thought that her baby also wouldn't make it.
it's painful enough to loose your better half but to loose your child together is a whole other thing.
Aarti who thought she finally had a family of her own is now an orphan again. This would really hurt.

Fantastic Kat.

Thank you Sheema.

@bold - you hit the nail on the head. For any one something like this is a terrible tragedy. For an orphan like Arti, who has striven her whole life to build her own family - this would feel like the end of the world.

Thank you for really getting into the story, feeling it and leaving your beautiful comments Sheema.