ArYa FF: Dil Jaanta Hai - Thread 1 (chapt 1-10)

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@ksfan2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Feeling sad for aarti love the update waiting for more

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Leevi05

@Leevi05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

awesome update

sad part poor aarti

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Wow what an amazing update , Aarti is really torn apart

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Superb update Kat. Beautifully written and emotional. Loved it

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Deepti1808

@Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Wonderfully written.

The disjointed narrative achieved Aarti's POV very well.

So how is Aarti going to handle this double blow?

Is your heroine a broken woman whom the hero going to fix

Is your heroine a brave woman who has already seen a life as orphan so is able to pick up the pieces and move forward remains to be seen.

Option two is more appealing for me though.

How are Zoya and her fiance going to play a role in getting Aarti back on track, what role does Shobha maa play. Oh! your story is getting very very interesting Kat

Eagerly awaiting the next update

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Ashwatha

@ashGC_arja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

That was such an emotional update Kat👏👏. When am i going to get to know about Yash-Arptia???😕

But i really like you story telling and also the way this story is shaping up. Looking forward😃

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Keerthana

@keerthus.9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Hi Kat , I'm new in this thread but am following this story from past 2 parts

The story is really awesome

And as for this part , The last line of Aarti is just heart wrenchng .

I will be waiting to see how Aarti get over this ...

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Great job, kat, it's such a beautiful update, feeling sad for aarti her husband nd her child both died. Update soon

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

what is this dear... prashant and the baby died in the accident ah !!! Poor arthi !!!! how will she take this

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RIYA

@RA17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

Kat, beautiful way you have described a relation of shobha ma how she has been taking care of aarti despite she has lost her son and baby.. n zoya and ahmed truly the friends which remain in you tough time and support you.. Really aarti in his hay wai condition.. try to make sense out of what has happen n will look forward to your next where we will find how she will manage with the truth of her life.. I also like you did not make aarti n prashant relation butter but unexpected event is reason for their separation…

Good one dear.. thanks for pm and update⭐️👏

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