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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: gafulu14
very very touchy and i want yash does react this way

Thanx😳!

I hope so too.

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Leevi05

@Leevi05

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hope yash will understand aarti

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nice OS I hope someone other than Aarti will tell Yash abt how Prashant used to treat her but I want Aarti herself to yash tht she is a divorcee and not a widower😊

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Tahitien-moon

@Tahitien-moon

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nice writing dear👏 for you

Edited by Prasadini - 12 years ago

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PuvZ

@PuvZ

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautifully written sweetheart. Aarti pouring out her bottled feeling was heartwreaking. Truly amazing

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Fatima! 🤗 This is so beautiful.

I love how Yash supported Aarti and didn't say anything to her until they where alone. It is very important in a relationship not only, to trust but also, to keep things private and show everyone you are strong. "Yash(In anger):That's it bua jee!! No one can talk to my wife like this.If anyone has problem with her...We will leave this house along with our children.

He hold aarti's wrist and took her to their room.He closed the door of the room."

and You incorporated the lyrics of Yeh Dil Hai !! :

"Kabhi tum bhi ye kha do na tum ko hai mere zarurat

Har pal mujhe chahte ho tum tum ko hai mujhse mohabbat"

and Yash gave Aarti a chance to speak, even if it was after a while, but he did!

Excellent Work!!! Please write more stories soon. 😳

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poojdc87

@poojdc87

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

It's not pathetic at all! I liked your portrayal of the Aarti-Dubey relationship. I agree that she gives so much power to them because she herself is an orphan. They would have been in their rights to ask Aarti to leave after the divorce - then where would she have gone? And how would she have taken care of Ansh? Her life would have become so much harder. Anyways - I liked your story!