Aarya SS - Everything changed - pt 9 on pg 42

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: AmeTz
Great work...⭐️

Thanks!!!😊

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: suhaaana
Love it dear do cont soon

Thanks a lot for loving it!!! 😊

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Pearl_27
I love this! I like it when something when it does not have a OOT drama.PM me when you update.Continue soon,by the way.

Thanks a lot for the appreciation!!!! 😊 Will try to PM ya...

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: madhaviprathap
nice update

will be waiting for future parts

pls pm me for updates

pls

i will send a buddy req

pls accept

Hey thanks so much for the encouragement...😊Will accept ya buddy req!!!!

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Tejaswini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

hey u wrote it so well ! loved it 😃

do send a pm when u update !! 😳

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

I loved it...very nice...want them to meet and have a chat...but looks like it will be only after they are married!!!!!

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-AarYaholic-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

It was very well written, loved your command over the language...I don't think if I should call it a flaw, but you started from the present right 'he knew something was bothering her...' and suddenly took us to the past...that's a brilliant way of storytelling but I found it difficult to decrypt...Am I complaining?

I am adding you as a buddy so that you PM me whenever you update

Loved it...take your time but DO update it...

And I see someone changed their colour from Blue to God...Congratulations :)

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: kmfan_2
I loved it...very nice...want them to meet and have a chat...but looks like it will be only after they are married!!!!!

Thanks!!! Haha...unfortunately they did not meet before that! 😉

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: freya123
nice one

Thanks!😊

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akui1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Frozen007

It was very well written, loved your command over the language...I don't think if I should call it a flaw, but you started from the present right 'he knew something was bothering her...' and suddenly took us to the past...that's a brilliant way of storytelling but I found it difficult to decrypt...Am I complaining?
I am adding you as a buddy so that you PM me whenever you update
Loved it...take your time but DO update it...

And I see someone changed their colour from Blue to God...Congratulations :)

Hey thanks...and especially for pointing out abt the part on present and past..After you pointed it out, I read part 1 again and realised that it was not very clear ...I will be using quite a fare bit of the present and past way just to fill everyone in on what happened previously...I will be updating part 2 soon so please do read and let me know if it is still confusing ok? I have tried to be more clear for this part...

thanks abt the colour change...the gold is garish honeslty...why cant it turn PINK??? Haha!!! 😉