OUR LIFE--A Trilogy (SS) - Page 3

Wow, such a lovely story. I am such a big fan of your writing. I never leave the Dc without reading your take on the episode which is usually around 10 pm but it is always worth the wait. I hope ypu write an epilogue to this story. I know iam being greedy but what can i say, it just left me wanting more.👏

Beautiful Indu - and like all your writing, a poem in prose. Is this the first time you posted a story here, besides TSR of course? I don't remember reading something else by you. You really should write more fiction my friend.

@Pearl: Thank you. You can definitely take this as your B'day gift. I am really honored with your assertive demand. 🤗


@Fatima, Kholita, Ria, Sonika, Asha, Raveena: Your appreciation is truly humbling, considering this was my maiden venture. Thank you so much.🤗

@Zet & Saf: Thank you for loving it🤗...I know, I know; I'll do my best on the "writing more often" front.😃

@Zan, Rusha, Sunrio, freya, Sudha, maha, gafulu, JM Singh, Iqra : Thank you. Your appreciation means so much, and I am really glad what I wrote appealed to you. 🤗


@Morris & Swag: Awww...your sweet words overwhelm me. I am the mushy kind too...so whenever I write, you can expect "...and they lived happily ever after" kind of ending.😃

Awww, Indu that was beautiful. You know the fact that our Aarti is an orphan kills me every time and when I am able to get past the sadness, I feel such pride in her for the way she has turned out. And what better way for destiny to gift her with Yash's love. 😳 And you went one step ahead to capture the beauty of that love.

@Vanny: Thank you. So glad you liked it.🤗

@Shubhi: Thank you, kiddoji!!!...Sowwy!!! I'll try to behave henceforth...pwomeeese!!!😃

Aww...Love you back.🤗


@Kadeen: I knew you'd do this...see what I hold back and expect the other eye to sense. Can't help it...the abstract in me gets untamable at times. Thank you. Love you.🤗


@Borna: Thanks my friend. I'll be waiting. Your thoughts and opinions are always special, and I have a lot of respect for them.😊


@Nina & Darrish: Thank you. Gosh, I really don't know what to say to that...it's much too overwhelming for me.🤗 Honestly, I never thought of an Epilogue, till you both and Pearl mentioned. Ummm...food for thought...that's for sure.😛



@Kat: Thank you. Yeah...I am a rookie in this genre. Credit has to go to Kadeen for coaxing this side out of me. I'll try my best, my friend...promise.


@Miti: Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: angake

Awww, Indu that was beautiful. You know the fact that our Aarti is an orphan kills me every time and when I am able to get past the sadness, I feel such pride in her for the way she has turned out. And what better way for destiny to gift her with Yash's love. 😳 And you went one step ahead to capture the beauty of that love.

@Kirthi: Thanks, pal. We are two peas in a pod where Aarti is concerned.😳 Aarti has never felt safe in any love, barring those of her children's. I just wanted to showcase a scenario wherein whatever tribulations she goes through in life, she has the safety of Yash's love to fall back on...a love that has been with her ever since she remembers the beginning of her life and that has kept her going.😊

Wow, wow, wow, wow Indu! I am completely blown away by the sheer beauty of these words, seriously this tugged at all the right heart strings! You took such an emotional idea and spun into something so heartrending!

I loved how you twisted little details from the story, like Aarti being a widow while Arpita left Yash because he was never emotionally present in their marriage! I can't even imagine what Yash must have gone all these years trying to find a glimpse of the girl he has loved all his life everywhere he went! Their separation as children was heart wrenching and the fact that they finally found each other through their children was the most beautiful loop closure!

And the best part was that I could picture every scene vividly in my mind's eye which just made this all the more poignant! You are truly a gem Indu and the sheer beauty of your words always leave me in awe! Thank you so much for penning this down, and now that you have stepped into the OS world, I hope we see more from you!

very very beautiful os.
Loved it

Indu Indu Indu 😊🤗

Superb!!!! what a brilliant write up dear loved it
Pls continue writing. 👏⭐️❤️