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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2:

"Namasthey aunty, namasthey uncle" said aarti folding her hands as she entered the hall and later she bent down to touch their feet. She easily mingled with them as had already met them before.

G3: ha beta kaisi ho, shobha ji kaisi hain?

A: ji aunty main bilkul theek hun, aur ma bhi.

S: journey kaise laga beta?

A: quiet interesting uncle.

Aarti got lost in the house; she was observing each and every corner and was impressed by its presence.

S: hamara ghar kaise hain aarti?

A: beautifully built with perfect 'Vaasthu' , uncle said she still mused.

SP and Gayathri started laughing looking at each other simultaneously. Aarti was surprised by their act and same is the case with everybody else too.

S: that very sentence makes your mark that you are much like your father Raghu chowdhary.

Aarti smiled back. Aarti generally doesn't like anybody cut shorting her papa's name,but she liked this name not sure whether for the reason that SP is a good friend of her father, or for the reason that she liked and respected Scindhia uncle very much.

She is very fond of the couple since she had first met them in her friend Neha's shaadi. However her liking towards them increased as she knew that they too liked her very much and said the same to her parents once. Neha's dad, her dad, and Scindhia ji were mutual friends and partners too, since Neha's family shifted south due to business issues, they both grew best friends.

G3: acha, ab hamari ghar walon se mil lo, Yeh hain Pankaj hamari bada beta, unki patni Vidhi, hamara chota beta Prateik, aur hamari laadly Yash, doosra beta.

A: Hello all.

V: hi Aarti call me bhabhi..

Pa: and me bhaiyya.

Pr: hi Aarti you can call me prateik.

A: all of you can call me Aarti.

Pr: Aarti, you are very beautiful, praised he admiring her one way, while everybody looked a little shocked.

A: "I Know" declared Aarti with pride, everyone else were shocked at her answer.

It was her general way answering any such complement, but for then she immediately got alerted by the presence of elder members there, and she corrected it saying " ermmm, I mean Thankyou". All smiled to themselves, while Yash was calm watching them.

G3: vidhi guest room ready rakha na tumne,

V: ji mummy ji, poori saaph saphayi karvadiya maine.

Buaji entered the hall chanting something, and she stopped staring at Aarti.

B: yeh kaun hain? asked bua, raising one of her eyebrows.

G3: Jiji, yeh Aarti hain, Chowdhary ji aur Shobha ji ki beti.

B: Shobha? Woh andhrawala?

Aarti was taken aback by her words, she said nothing wrong but the way she has taken her mom's name and exclaimed 'andhrawala' she felt it odd and couldn't stand it. She ached to answer back, but still she kept quiet.

V: err, yeh buaji hain, you can call her so.

A: Namasthey buaji. Said Aarti folding her hands, but she didn't bend or take her blessings, which has not went unnoticed by Yash and others too.

B: Meri bhagwaan ki kasam bhabhi, yeh yahaan kyun aayi hain?

She sounded as if it was a crime, Aarti felt very bad. Buaji was given an 'I will kill you' look by Suraj Scindhia, after which she got a little settled.

G3: fresh hokar niche aajavo beta, khana tayyar hain.

A: ji aunty.

Finally Aarti was shown her room (guest room). The room was simple and beautiful, thought aarti standing in front of the mirror " Like me" said she winking at her image.

She sat on the bed remembering buaji's words.." shobha? Woh Aandhrawaala?"as if it's a sin. She got a 'not that good' impression on buaji.

"Anyways I'm gonna move out of here in a day or two so.. why do I bother?..." said she unpacking her things.

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" So, thumhe yahaan ki college pe seat mila hain", inquired Suraj, chewing a piece of roti.

A: ji uncle. Yahaan pe tho main MS ke saath Phd bhi kar sakti hoon, isliye maine iss college par apply ki thi.

Everybody was seated at the dining table, Aarti sat between Gayathri and Prateik, while Yash was opposite to her, between Pankaj and buaji, Vidhi is serving. generally Prateik would sit with his brothers, but that day he was really fond of Aarti...so he shifted his position.

Pr: MS with Phd, That's great to hear Aarti.

A: Thank you. Uncle main aaj ek baar college ho kar aati hun.

G3: ha zaroor, Yash lekar jayega tujhe.. interfered gayathri, and completed without looking up, eating.

A: No, no, aunty. It's ok, main khud chale jaungi.

Y: Aartiji main waise hi bahar ja rahaan hun, I will drop you.

Aarti wanted to resist, but she could just say "Thank You".

Gayathri ji smiled contently, with a kind of satisfaction.

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Yash and Aarti sat in the car and they started.

A: xyz college, 15 Km from here, straight and left.

Y: how do you know all these?

A: as I said earlier I've asked my friend.

Yash was calm and concentrated on the road.

Aarti got down at the gate. Yash asked her to call him after she completed her work. She tried to say something but he continued"you are new to the place, and so let me help you until you get comfortable here". He left from there. Aarti stood there watching as his car moved away.

A: Yeh ladka kuch alag hain.



hi friends. I would stop this part here. please be free to raise any queries or doubts😃. naming in process yet.😉. thanks for your support.👍🏼

Edited by bhuvana90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Its getting really interesting I can't wait to read the next part its just awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loving it totally !! i feel it to different and would love to the update soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really interesting...do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part, aarti is very cool, loved aarti's last line "ye ladka kuch alag hai".
waiting for next update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pla update waiting for it lovelyFF
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting dear. Thanks for the lovely story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear n I really love this Aarti
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3:

Aarti sat in a chair opposite to an elderly man. The table in between them had a name plate, Hari Sadu, Principal. The room was quiet formal, with books arranged neatly in the shelves, shields decorated in the showcase,various photos honoring the principal placed on the walls.

A: yes sir, I would like to get an admission in the college hostel itself.

P: sure?

Aarti nodded her head as a yes.

P: fine then go and get the formalities done and then you will be allotted a room in about a week.

A:Thankyou, sir!

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Yash and Aarti reached home. They got down and Aarti said "thank you yash ji, if you weren't there, it would've been very difficult for me to handle it". He stared at her thoughtfully.

They entered the house as they were greeted by Vidhi and Prateik chit chatting in the hall.

V: how was your day Aarti?

A: it's good bhabhi. Answered Aarti sitting beside her.

Yash got settled in a single chair beside Prateik.

Pr: Aarti, I'm feeling sorry for missing the chance to pick you up today, if only had not that stupid meeting to attend…. Expressed prateik with a flirting expression on his face.

A: Ofcourse Prateik, you should feel sorry,..

Yash looked at her frowning, and Vidhi too. Prateik was still smiling.

"not for missing to pick me up, but for being younger than me!"….. teasing him.

Prateik felt something blocking his throat, he couldn't believe what he just heard , he somehow managed to utter…. "What?!! No!". he was in a shock.

Yash and Vidhi were astonished and couldn't make out as to what they were listening to..

Aarti forwaded her hand and handed something to Prateik. He is just not interested in whatever it is. He stood still and acted like a robot,and took it.

A: your wallet. I found it in the garden yesterday. Your driving license is in it. You are 1 month 10 days younger than me.

Prateik had pools of disappointment in his eyes ans said weakly " oh shit! No!"

Vidhi to herself " bechara Pratiek bhaiyya!" ,with a concerned expression on her face.

A: Prateik, don't worry yaar. What if not me? I'll help you find one, my friend….assured Aarti.

V:or more if possible…interfered Vidhi.

Prateik managed to smile, while Aarti and Vidhi were loud, Yash too had a smile on his lips.

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" No" declared suraj scindhia a little frustrated, "hostel?, thum hostel kyun jana chahti ho Aarti jab hum sab hain yahaan par?" , questioned he as he heard Aarti's decision.

A: woh!!...

G3: haan beta, thume hostel pe rehne ki kya zaroorath hain, hum sab hain na?

Buaji: meri bhagwaan ki kasam bhaiyya, Jaane do na use, shahid unhe hostel mein hi acha lagega.

Another deadly look from papa scindhia made her settle down a little.

V & Pr: haan aarti stay here na. hum sabh milke masti karenge.

Aarti smiled to them and said,

A: aunty, uncle, main jaanthi hun ki aap sab ko bilkul acha nahi lagega meri ye phaisla. Infact main bhi yahin chahti hun ki mein yahin se college jaa kar aavun, par kaash aisa ho saktha hain.

Suraj ji got a little cool, and started concentrating on her words, followed by everyone else. Aarti continued after a deep sigh.

"Aap sab jaanthe hain ki mujhe PG ke saath Phd bhi karne ki offer mila hain,tho isse poori karne keliye mujhe double mehnath karna padtha hain, and agar mujhe combined studies karne milthe hain tho aur bhi acha hoga,aur woh tho hostel mein hi possible hain, phir tho main apni practicals ka schedule achi tarah se manage kar paoongi… and this reason dragged me towards this decision, sorry if I have hurted you, uncle."

S: No, no beta, aisi koi bath nahi hain, thumne tho theek se hi sochaa, bus main thodasa chasbath par aagaya hun. Thumhe jo sahi lagega wahi karo.

G3: tho thumne jaane ka phaisla le chuki ho! Acha tho theek hain, par apna khyaal rakhna, aur jab bhi koi bhi zaroorath pade tho….

"aapke paas aajavungi aunty" interrupted Aarti blushing. Everyone laughed aloud. G3 kept her hand on Aarti's head and blessed her " khush raho".

S & g3 left from there. Buaji too.

V: wow aarti, you were awesome, since the day I have entered this house, I have not seen bavuji change his decision, & get convinced so easily.

Pr: waise Aarti , mujhe bhi sikhavo na Bavuji ko manane ka yeh trick.!

A: trick?.. confused, finally continued " fine then, listen"

Everyone present there listened to her carefully,

A: whatever you want to say, don't rehearsel on it, don't write it and don't even remember it, the only thing you have to do is,…" she paused looking at everyone, and she stopped at prateik and said.." speak spontaneously, not from your lips but from your heart.., then not only uncle however toughest the person is, they will understand and get convinced."

She smiled to everyone and left. Every person there admired her words looking her as she left.

And yash tho soch raha "Kaisi Ladki hain yeh?"


hi frnds..., how r u all?.. i'm very happy seeing ur responses.😃..

and let me inform you ,dont worry about Yash's character in this story, i'm building it up quiet strong and u will recognise it in the upcoming parts. just i'm concentrating on aarti's for now.

so, keep liking it.😉. see you again... bye!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part dear. Loved it 😊

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