SS~Sweet Poison~(AARYA)(UPDATING(TEASER-PG11))

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey buddies, its "ANGELWORDS'
i like PV ...
so here is a small piece of work from my side...



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Sweet Poison~


"arti ji please stop.."
"why yash ji, why you want me to stop...isn't it enough what you have already done..."
"arti ji please don't say this..look i am really sorry.."
"your sorry will have no effect on me now yash ji...because of old arti is dead"
"arti ji i know i was wrong..but please try to understand me..."
"i am sorry yashi ji..i have made my decision..i am leaving.."
"no arti ji you can't leave palak and payal and our family...and and me..."
"yash ji please don't make it difficult for me..."
"please arti, don't take such a decision.."
"ok yash ji, i will change my decision if you sign these paper.."
"which paper.."
"without asking what this it.."
"but...ok i will..."

yash take the paper and sign it...tears were flowing from arti's eye
"i am sorry yash ji...i trapped you, but i don't have choice.."
and took her bag and ansh to the room..
totally ignoring yash..
who was totally confused with the event...
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hope you like this
do comment and hit like button
waiting for your response..
hope you like it??
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PART1-PG1

PART2-PG6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ur work reminded me of Yash's anger scene where all fans were left to guess what happened between arya. Same is he case here. Hope u will update soon.

nicely written. hoping to see some more posts from you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wish it was longer!!! Awesome work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice prologue
cont soon
and dont frgt to pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prologue, pls update soon. can u pls PM me?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-1

"HAIN bauji, arti ji yahin hain.."

"hain thiek hain.." yash talked on the phone

he moved towards him room and saw arti busy seeing out of the window

he came near arti

"arti ji, past mein jo bhi hua..."

"i have to go yash ji, i have to see if ansh has set all the things.."

ignoring yash...

yash was shocked with such cold behavior of arti...

"why is arti ji behaving like this.."

arti came out of the room and leaned on the wall

" i am sorry yash ji, i Know you are hurt with my behaviour...but i have to do it..."

she moved towards ansh room

"mamma, i ma set everything.."

"arre vah, my ansh is very good boy.."

and kissed his forehead...

yash came out of the room, arti saw him coming

"mamma please tell me a story.."

"ansh you are big boy now, learn to be like that...do you get it.." shouted arti..

yash was shocked with the anger of arti, arti never scolded children, than why sudden

"mamma, i am katti, i am going to papa..he is good, you are bad.."

and ran to yash and hugged him

"papa dekh nah mamma ko..." and cried

yash wiped his tears...

arti was crying...

"i am sorry ansh, apni mamma ko kaaf kar digiya ga..plzz..."

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hope you like it

do comment and tell me your views...

Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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why is Aarti so angry on Yash...

pata hai whenever I was about to write Yash I start writing Maan then I correct it...

which papers were those which Yash signed...

are they divorce papers...

very interesting start...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




why is Aarti so angry on Yash...

pata hai whenever I was about to write Yash I start writing Maan then I correct it...

which papers were those which Yash signed...

are they divorce papers...

very interesting start...

thanx for pm...




di you won't believe..inplace of yash i was writing maan and maan...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u r write on current track

i wish zee bhi aise hi karta

arri trapped yash

i know why aarti doing all this

she want every one hate her😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: BULBUL.A

u r write on current track


i wish zee bhi aise hi karta

arri trapped yash

i know why aarti doing all this

she want every one hate her😭




yup writing on the current track..i way i wanted it to be...but let see what happen in real...😊

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