ARYA OS WANT HER BACK updt prt 7 pg 34 last part - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thx a lots guys for supporting me to cont my os an for your lovely comments who give me courage to cont a big thx to all of you 😊 .


part 3

the kids and yash enter in the room . why you enter in , shhh we have come to wake her ok if you have a problem then leave here ok . the kids go close to arti even yash . artiji wake up see our kids has come to see you please open your eyes .

mama mama open your eyes and look at us , mama you said we will always be with us then why you are not waking up , mama please talk to us na , we will always be good in every thing we cant leave without you please wake up 😭 😭 😭 .

artiji im sure you can hear us you can hear our kids voices please dont punish them for my deeds to you , if you want punish me dont talk to me but at least wake up for our kids sake and for the new baby too please 😭 . forgive me artiji i promise i will not be rude with you again .

mama you use to say im your strong son na , why you want to leave me mama did i hurt you if i did then im sorry i will be a good boy i promise , you know i cant leave with out you mama please wake up na you always give me what i want , i want you to wake up now dont leave us 😭.

mama you said im your princess na because im the youngest , you love me , mama if you will leave us who will tell us a story , mama since you come as our mother our life has change , you teach us how to leave happily then why you want to leave us now mama if you love your payal wake up na mama please 😭 .

mama you teach me how to talk with people , how to keep in touch with friend , how to make friend , if you know you will leave us then why you teach me all this thing when you know it will be hurt me , mama i have accept you from my heart not just by words , now i cant leave without you , you are my mama my lovey mama you are the beat mother in the world , if you will go then i will never love any one because every person i love they leave me , first my arpita mum , and now you no i will not accept it i will not talk or do a good girl you know na when i said some thing i do it , mama please wake up na if you are angry with papa we will go to stay in barima house but dont leave us mama please wake up you love us na then wake up mama wake up please 😭 for us .

artiji you heard what the kids has says please i will agree if you will want to go in your mother house for some days , but not leave us not me i will not be able to forgive me if you leave me , i lost arpita due to to in rain , if you too will leave me due to my bad behavior then i will not be able to see me in the mirror , i know i was rude i promise i will not do it again , im missing your voice the way you call , your look , you love our kids so much then how can you decided to go like this no i will not accept it , i have faith in my love , yes artiji love my love for you , i love more then my life , i will die if you leave me and this time i will be like a died body only which will have nothing in life , i know i said what ever happen between us was a sin a paap , you are right it was only love the love which i never thought i will fall in , see that why god has give us our symbol of our love the baby which is in your womb our love my blood our baby , he also want to leave want to be a part of our family , to be with his brother and sister to be in your lap and in my hug , then how can you let him go like this he is fighting in side you im sure , he too want you to leave for him too he should get the love too , if you love you all your kids i know you will be happy to know you are going to have my child , your dream to give birth my child has come artiji wake up now please , i beg of you , dont punish me like this i will not bear the pain for loosing you 😭 please .

mama we got to know we will soon have another bro or sis we are happy on hearing this we want the baby to be alive and to stay with us we will love the baby very much , mama let the baby come with you we will always protect him or her , we will love him very much please mama open your eyes now listen to us 😭 😭 😭 . when they were talking they were holding her hand payal in one side , palak and ansh in other side .

yash was close to her too his hand was on her too . artiji i talk politely you cant get it na you wanted me be angry now then you will wake up . im talking to you it enough now of your sleep i want you to wake up right now , do you hear me artiji i want to see the machine work again like it was before 😡 . he drop the vase , what are you doing this is a hospital , you shut up ok . it better you leave i will call ward boy . the nurse was going to open the door when the kids stop her saying if you dare to open it we will hurt you stay quiet here ok . they do sign with yash to cont they know there mother will respond on his angry voice . the other was looking from the window even the doctor .

what they are doing it not good ask them to stop this nonsense you are the elder na , no doctor if my nephew decided to do some thing it better let him do im sure he will bring her back said bua . yes doctor their love is so strong that god will accept their request pankaj said . and there is no greater than god and love so he will bring my love love back to him i faith on him prateik said . ok let see how strong there relation is .

yash cont talking with anger just to make her react . i want you back in my life in our family life like you use to be before did you get it , what do you think i will let you like this no ways , you have to respond to my question , first you lie and hid me you are a divorcee , i did not say anything , now you want to leave me that to with my child what do you think it only you who will love the baby , he will not get my love my affection or his bro and sis love how selfish you are you think only for you , yes you are selfish artiji you never fall in love with me you just said it but you dont love me nor the kids , what you said we will grow our kids together then why you are leaving me alone with the kids who never listen to me they are so naughty they just do noise shout , and ansh he dont have any manners how to behave with elders how to respect them you did not teach him good manners. when he was saying this he was hugging 🤗 ansh to make him know it all false he just want to give her the shock .

why he is talking like this on ansh ? dhubai ask . he know arti will never accept to talk like this on the kids specially on ansh ahoba ans . yes aunty is right she will never like this that why yash bhaya is using this to make her react vidhi said .

palak and payal you have spoil them too they use to listen to us but now no they become just like ansh i thought you will love them but no you love only ansh not paya and palak . here to he did the same thing hug them . im ordering you artiji now to wake up , im fed off with this life too you know what it all my fault why you who should get punish why not me it better i kill my self then you will wake up , because you are angry with me so it me who should die not you , i will kill my self if you dont open your eyes , did you hear me i will kill my self , then you will be happy na . no papa not only you we will do too we die with her we are a family we will live all other and die too the kids said . did you hear artiji what the kids are saying they will kill them self for you now open your eyes for god sake .

they come close to her ansh palak in one side payal yash in other side the kids hold her hand , yash put his hand on her tummy and kiss her tummy and then he kiss her forehead and eyes , tears fall on her eye and on her cheek then he put his head on her chest near her heart one hand hand on her tummy and , artiji please for this baby sake open your eyes and listen to him im sure he too want to say something too . in his heart he said this will be my last attempt if you will not wake up i will die for being rude and for all my behavior to artiji .

mama im in your womb the love of both of you , i too want to come in this world to be in this family which will love me a lots from all of you i will get bro and sis to play with me , i want to be in your lap in the hug and in the arms of papa , i want to have a family like yours , it will be possible if you wake up mama im also fighting for you help me to wake you i know you are happy that i will come in the world i can feel your happiness from inside you , i dont want do die please mama .

yash feel a beat from her throat he look at her the machine start to work slowly , yes artiji come on wake up fight artiji i can hear your heart beating , come on mama yes try open your eyes mama , her heart beat the machine work properly she start opening her eyes . every one saw it they enter in with joy . i never see such a miracle i must say your love is very pure and strong that you brought her back to live from dead love is great i saw it today doctor said . yes mama is back artiji thx for listening to us .

yashji , ansh palak payal she call their name , yes we are here near you artiji look at us . they hug her with happiness yash said thx my baby im sure you help us to bring your mama back his hand was still on her tummy .

she will be fine now our med will work but now you all can go home tomorrow you come to see her i will start the treatment . ok we will leave now arti take care come let go kids your mama is safe now shoba said . bhahi call mah and bhauji to announce the good news about coming dada dadi soon . yes i will yash bhaya take care of her . yes im not going to let her alone now by bhacho be good ok tomorrow you come to see her ok go now . ji papa they all go .

im sorry yashji to make you worried , shhh it me who should ask forgiven not you , im sorry to give you so much of pain i will never do it again promise . yashji you were right our baby talk to me on saying he want to be with us in our family he brought me back from dead for you all . i knew it he will that shown how much we and he love you hai na he smile even she do smile , i was missing this smile artiji thx for coming back to me he hug 🤗 her and kiss her .

i hope you will like it .

i stop here next will be last part . i will wait for your lovely comments .

next will be only happiness .

next part have baby birth .




elanpremi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
very touching dear.superbly done👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thx elanpremi i glad you like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's fabulous. It's very touchy, how Yash and kids bring back Aarti to life. Liked the way Ansh, Palak, Payal, Yash talked to Aarti, and their unborn, it was so touchy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thx shashi yes i add the unborn baby too i wanted to get new im happy you love it
saf24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read all three parts in one go. Really nice story. The last part was really touching. Great job
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks sweetie for PM..



Will read all parts..now...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the OS hansa and your PM too..

I loved it so sweet on yash and three musketers...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: saf24

Read all three parts in one go. Really nice story. The last part was really touching. Great job



thx saf im glad you read all part and you so it nice 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anituram

Thanks for the OS hansa and your PM too..


I loved it so sweet on yash and three musketers...



thx anituram for your comment im happy

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