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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

This was so so nice Shubhi, I havent yet read the happy version, still am sure am gonna love the sad version more. Maybe because I prefer not-so-perfect endings, hihi, they seem more real to me...lol.

It was very nice, but am in a hurry so cannot comment much.

Keep writing more.

Have a nice day XxX

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Aarya4ever...

@Aarya4ever...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

It was nice as usual but you should end it happily !!!!

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Misha123sharma

@Misha123sharma

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

You really touched my heart Shubhi 😔
lovely!

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qwerty012

@qwerty012

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

you made me cry... Hatsoff to you!!

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

I'm definitely going to throw chappals at U!!

Why the hell u killed aarti and on top of it u have written it in such a way that i could not stop my tears😡😭😆!

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

It's so beautiful yet so sad, so emotional and for that you made me cry. Hope it doesn't happen in the serial coz I want AarYa to have a happy ending

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Shubhika

@shubhika124

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan
Shubhi..
Omg omg omg
U made me cry..
Dis is absolutely a piece of brilliant...
I loveeeddd it...

I loved hw Vidhi spoke up..
I loved hw Yash repented...

Absolutely amazing..!!

Love u.. ❤️

Thanks Abby 🤗

Love u ❤️

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Shubhika

@shubhika124

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ketki61
hi no chappals
loved it - brought tears

Awww 🤗

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Shubhika

@shubhika124

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: jojo1986
loved it

Thanks 🤗

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Shubhika

@shubhika124

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen
Nahin!!! Meri Aarti didi!!!!😭A beautiful piece of work Shubhi, absolutely heartrending😭😭. I loved the way that Vidhi stood up to Yash and Gayu. It was also great to see Yash be remorseful- especially when it was too late. Serves him right🤓

Awww Im so glad u liked it dear 🤗

Thanku ☺️

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