The Revelation Out of Darkness- An Aarya OS - Page 2

Wow! That's fantastically written. I want the same to be happen in the show where Yash should accept her in his life open-heartedly.

great work indeed👍🏼

Awesome writing dear, feel so happy to read a happy ending

lovely..😛..feeling so good after reading something positive in arti and yash story... otherwise all this negativity,blaming,regret,tears,pain in the show was taking a toll on my senses..keep writing such beautiful piece to make all of us smile...😊
You have written the whole piece amazingly..Writers of the show should consult you i think...

Hey Great Os. One day all every thing that you have pen down will come true. That would be the day to celebrate for AarYa.

zahra so beautiful wow amazing you write hope it happen like this for yash thx foe pm me

I loved it...this was so beautifully written...Superb work!

Awesome OS AT !!

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Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

Doll...Yes, Hunnybunny
🤗 🤗
eee... wht a beautiful OS... n I'm so loving being a contribution to it... 😃 And I so loved making you part of it, waise bhi, I suck at titles😆

I loved the way , u churned the wheels on ur mind n used the current PV track to think of dis reason...
I absolutely love it...So sweet

I loveee the way u write...Thank you * I still say you are the best😛
ur language is absolutely stunning , trust me... I still love yours more😆
honestly, there's sum kind of a divinity in the way u portray the scenes... Well, I never took it that way nor thought about this, so Thank you a lot for this😃

I'm sure wht Mittals will show will be gud...
but Boy! I adore ur interpretation... 😃 Awww
me adored hw u used the Mumbai album thingi n showed Yash tokin to Aarti's foto... Well, I guess that's because I never saw any of Aarti's pic besides that😆
I loved the beginning... Aarti hving tears in her eyes hearing Yash...
wonderfully begun n etched... 👏 Thank you again

den I loved Yash's self-confession , I cud actually visualise GC wd those expressions n omg.. i ws dead... i wud hv shed tears wd him... u hv written so soulfully... 👍🏼 Actually even I was visualising him😉 Zahra ki Meet, Gurmeet😳😆 ZahMeet forever😆

den I loved the thought process of Yash after Aarti tells him dat he shud move on n ol...
previously i thought that ws the end... hehehe... n trust me.. even dat wud hv been amazingly beautifully... Yea, I remember how you were like is there more, I want Yash's POV and later you were like, now this is good, I love the ending and I was like no there's more😆
but then.. d end u brought ws absolutely enchanting... 👏 I know, collars up😆
i ws sooo lost in ur words... whr u mentioned the stars... Awww I loved that too😛
omg... dats y i told u , u hv sum kinda divinity in ur words... Once again, thanks

amazingly beautifully written Doll... Muaaahhh
n u wrote it soo fast... so kudos baby..!! 👍🏼 Thanks for the inspiration...hahahahaha...that was the funniest inspiration ever, if you remember what we were actually talking about, illogical, remember and this led to scenes, my previous OS and what not😆

love u loadsss... 🤗 ❤️ Hellooo, I love you more, haaa