new os :u're my only part 2 added on pg 3

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This is my first os in pv forum. hope u all like it.

U're my only

Introduction:

Yash: 19yrs old.a son of a rich business man. studying at Mumbai university.he wins every girls' eye in college.his best friends are aarti and pratik are his best friends..madly in lv wt aarpita and currently got engaged to her.can do anything for her.

Aarti: studying same university,same age as yash .she lost her parents by car accident.she is best friend of aarpita and yash and very clost to yash.currently she is secretly in lv wt yash.aarpia and aarti are like sisters,they share every small things.Frankly aarti stays in aarpita's house.

Aarpita:studying same university,same age as yash.a daughter of a rich enginner .her best friend is aarti.she is in lv wt yash and got engaged to him.

Pratik:best frd of yash.he is in lv wt aarti,bt aarti doesn't know bt this.but pratik knows that aarti is in lv wt yash,and he doesn't care as yash and aarpita got engaged.pratik can do anything for get his lv. studying same university,same age as yash.

plz read and enjoy

part 1=

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3158186/new-os-ure-my-only-part-2-added-on-pg-3?pn=2😊

Part 2=


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/3158186/new-os-ure-my-only-part-2-added-on-pg-3😊


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rutu83 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please do and pm please?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue, new concept new story are always welcome
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U'RE MY ONLY

Part 1

Aarpi:30 days more for yash and my wedding.after 30 days I will leave u.

Aarti:I miss u so mch aarpi.

Aarpi:miss u too.bt don't worry ,I'llcome and see u with yash often.

Aarti:I know that dude.

Aarpi:bt plz promise me that u'll never leave my parents for any reason.plz?

Aarti:are u mad?i'll never leave them as thy're like gods to me.they are treat me like their own daughter since my childhood. so hw can I leave them?

Aarpi: I lv u so much.after I will miss my sister

Aarti: definitely

(they share a emotional hug)


At university

Yash:good morning aarpi and aarti.

Aarpi and aarti: good morning to u and pratik.

Pratik:aarti hw r u?

Aarti:I'm fine

(pratik secretely''''''''..)

Aarti,u know,we have to go nw bcz aarpi and yash want to spend time together.

(Aarti little bit sad bt hide it)

Aarti:pratik don't u understand that lesson.will I teach u?

Pratik:oh sure.

(Pratik and aarti goes to canteen)

Yash:we're alone nw.there are 29 days more,after that u're mine

Aarpi:hey yash someone will see us.

Yash:let see,entire college know that we're going to marry witin 30 days.i lv u aarpi

Aarpi:plz yash,don't lv so much.if u lost me?

Yash:never say tht.i'll die first.

Aarpi:no we'll die together.

Yash is abt to kiss aarpi's forehead,bt aarpi fainted.

Yash:aarpi,aarpi wake up,

Precap:pratik:i lv u aarti,i lv u so much

aarti:wt r u tell?

hope u like it

Edited by abcdew - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely OS do make more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very Interesting
Please PM me when you do next part
Edited by taahir004 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting..!!looking forward to part II..
Edited by sree.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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short and sweet one !!! the plot itself is very interesting !! 😉
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Part 2

Continuation of part 1

Yash:wake up// aarti,pratik,come here.

Aart:wt happened?

Yash:aarpi fainted.

(suddenly they go with aarpi to the sick room

After a few minutes aarpi regain consciousness

Yash:aarpi are u fine?

Aarpi:fine,don't worry I'm just fainted

Aarti:I think it's for ur weak.let's eat something

Yash:sure.

In library there is only pratik and aarti.

Pratik:plz aarti can explain the yesterday's lesson.

Aarti:ok I'll explain lesson silently as thisi s library.

Aarti explanning lesson to pratik,bt he is nt paying attention to lesson bt enjoying beaty of aarti.bt aarti notices that.

Aarti:hey why are u stare ing at me?

Pratik: nothing u free tonight?

Aarti:ya,

Pratik:would u like to go for a dinner wt me?

Aarti:no problem

Pratik:so,I'll take u at 8 pm,plz get ready

Aarti:ok,I'll be prepared

In evening'aarpi sees that aarti dressed liket o go to a party

Aarpi:aarti where r u going?

Aarti:I'm going to dinner wt pratik.

Aarpi:really,oh u two can enjoy together.

Aarti,in fact that's nt u're saying(aarpi being joke wt aarti telling pratik's name)

7.30pm pratik come and take aarti.

In car

Aarti:wt's the reason for this dinner?

Pratik:just wait and watch.

Suddenly aarti's phone rings

Aarti:hi yash

Yash:r u going to dinner wt pratik.

Aarti:ya,hw did u know?

Yash:pratik told me that.

Aarti:ok yash i'll hang up nw

Yash/:ok,bye,have a nice time with prati.

In the restaurant

Aarti:y r u give me a so much surprise?

Pratik:I want to say something.

Aarti:wt is that?

Pratik:I lv u aarti,I lv u aarti so much since I saw u first time

Aarti:bt I don't lv u and never lv u.

Pratik :plz tell me the reason

Aarti:I don't known

Pratik:bt I know,u can't lv me because u lv yash.

Aarti super duper shocked

Precap:

Aarpi's mom:plz tell me doctor what has written in aarpi's reaport?

Aarti:plz tell me doctor plz.

Note:I edited part 1 precap bcz I haven't know time

Sorry for that.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2 picking up nicely seems like this OS is really gonna be interesting , waiting for the next part whenever its ready
Its really awesome

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