Yash-Arti FF: Meri adhoori kahaani - Part 4:pg8

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Tejaswini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

fabulous one !! hoping next one would reveal more of arthi and thanks a lot for pm 🤗

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usha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

superb!!! want to know more abt aarti... updt sooon...

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Aarya4ever...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nice part dear !!!! I have to use much of my mind to understand your writings. Please make it easy !!! It took 30 minutes to study the whole 2nd part. however, it was nice one. please continue soon.

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Kashishangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Another awesume update js loved it.. Will be waiting wht happens next..continue soon

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Buddy,your writing style,its totally different fm wat we generally read.The choice of vocabulary,the way u describe d thoughts,feelings,outstanding.It was like i was reading ' Bankimchandra Chatterjee' in English.you even enhanced my vocab.luved d update & thanks 4 d pm.

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Buddy,ur writing style,its totally diff. fm wat we read generally. Luved d language & d update. (sorry 4 cmntng twice,i thot my 1st cmnt cdnt be posted)

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Sunrio80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Your'e an awesome writer! You really got me in to your story!

I'm so curious and it's intriguing on what happened to Aarti..

Please update soon!

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elanpremi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

love the part, really nice n thanks for the PM

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errrm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: darrish
I must say that your writing style is very nice. I am left very intrigued and wanting to know more, so please update again soon!

Thank you! 😃 I will update as soon as I can!

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
Loved the update! Once again your writing style is intricate and you weave your words elegantly. I'm looking forward to reading the next part!

That's so sweet of you! 😳 Thank you!

Originally posted by: jojo1986
update soon👏

Will do! 😃 Thanks for commenting.

Originally posted by: shah10
wow.love it

😳 Thanks!

Originally posted by: Sandiya90210
wow!! nice way of writing
gr8 job!!👏👏
waiting for your next part!!😃

😃 Thank you. I will update soon!

Originally posted by: SinalRocks
Wow! Your writing skill is facinating.😍
Loved it.⭐️

😳 Aww, thank you!

Originally posted by: cynthiagem
Thank you for the most awaited update. You write very well and your words vividly describe every nuance of emotion likewise the essence of the mood of the place. Am enjoying reading your story and found it a bit short 😉😉. If this is a book, this is something that I won't be able to put down till I finish reading it. Looking forward to your next update!

😳 That is such an amazingy flattering compliment!! Thank you so much!! 😃

Originally posted by: freya123
superb part

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: teju1816
fabulous one !! hoping next one would reveal more of arthi and thanks a lot for pm 🤗

It will 😃 Thanks so much for commenting!!

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
superb!!! want to know more abt aarti... updt sooon...

Yup, I will, and next part will reveal a lot about Arti! 😃 Stay tuned.

Originally posted by: AnupriyaMishra.
Nice part dear !!!! I have to use much of my mind to understand your writings. Please make it easy !!! It took 30 minutes to study the whole 2nd part. however, it was nice one. please continue soon.

Ok, this is definitely one of my fav comments on this part! ⭐️ I thrive on constructive criticism, so thank you so much for suggesting an area where I could improve! Much appreciated!

I will definitely make a conscious effort to make the rest of the story simpler to follow. And sorry for the trouble you've had. Also, thank you for sticking through anyway! If there was a story I was finding difficult to understand, I'd be SO tempted to give up.. 😆

Thanks again for the comment.

Originally posted by: Kashishangel
Another awesume update js loved it.. Will be waiting wht happens next..continue soon

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Shashi1984
Superb! Update soon.

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
Buddy,your writing style,its totally different fm wat we generally read.The choice of vocabulary,the way u describe d thoughts,feelings,outstanding.It was like i was reading ' Bankimchandra Chatterjee' in English.you even enhanced my vocab.luved d update & thanks 4 d pm.

😳 That is incredibly flattering, thank you so much! I am nowhere near Bankimchandra Chatterjee, but your comment plastered a wide smile on my face nevertheless! 😃

Originally posted by: Sunrio80
Your'e an awesome writer! You really got me in to your story!
I'm so curious and it's intriguing on what happened to Aarti..
Please update soon!

Aww, thank you 😳 Glad I managed to hook you in! The next part will reveal a significant chunk of Arti's back story, so stay tuned..