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neha

@salmankhanrulz

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

dat was really nice
plz continue

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DMKJ_VB

@DMKJ_VB

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: salmankhanrulz
dat was really nice
plz continue

thanks a lot.will try to update the next part soon😛

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M_n_h

@M_n_h

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

too gud
if possible please do continue

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Ammu

@-ProudGCian-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: DMKJ_VB

thanks a ton.i was really apprehensive u know...
well, i will try to continue.not sure about turining it into a fanfic though...but i will try to continue with the next part soon😛

not at all sis...😛
its really nis..👏eagerly waiting 4 ur next part..😃.

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DMKJ_VB

@DMKJ_VB

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: M_n_h
too gud
if possible please do continue

thank you so much...by the way, i just read urs.its great!😛

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M_n_h

@M_n_h

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: DMKJ_VB

thank you so much...by the way, i just read urs.its great!😛

thanks

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Aditi Bhatnagar

@adigaag

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Yup Ria the pillow scene in the second promo... How about a second part with a pilllow scene and children as well😛...that will be something to watch out for in the serial as well

Edited by adigaag - 13 years ago

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DMKJ_VB

@DMKJ_VB

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: adigaag
Yup Ria the pillow scene in the second promo... How about a second part with a pilllow scene and children as well😛...that will be something to watch out for in the serial as well

i will surely come up with the second part...but i am confused..Does aarti reveal her divorce truth just now? or not?😆...suggestions please😉

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Shradha Jhanjee

@VersatileStar

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

1st attempt is good Ria

I'm not fond of reading, but ya reading all this has increased my excitement for coming Tuesday's episode 😍

And ya the truth of Aarti's divorce won't come out so early. At least not till the time she makes a strong impact on Yash, an impact strong enough that he has reasons to support her, some feelings for her, I'm not saying love but still a soft corner

Edited by VersatileStar - 13 years ago

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veena

@VEENAGOPAL

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

wow ria jaanu.u too became OS writer😆.Great script from u .if possible continue Aarti talking with Yash😊.Loved the part when Aarti realized when she saw Arpita pictures on wall. keep it up dear

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