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-Srishty-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

First😃

I'm soo confused Sheetal!!! I'm reading every part twice or thrice to see if things make sense in my head.. How did Sarita lose her husband? And how is it Sheela's fault in it?

Sarita seems to be just a living body with no desire to live😕 and why isn't she able to see Vikrant? And I don't like Sheela

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Amazing Update😊

OMG Nisha you're killing me with curiosity😭. I'd read thrice to get the sense of the update😡...hate u for the extra work U made me to do... Just Kidding😆

This is absolutely brilliant, I am loving the story...keep posting😊

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Nisha Gera

@--Nisha--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
Sheetal what a freaking interesting story! You got me all hooked after the introduction and now reading the first part I'm even more curious to know how the story develops. I might like this more than P.S- I Love You since I don't have a clue about which movies you were inspired to create this.. Do continue soon😃

i will quote that book and those movies in the end of my story ;)

and you would love it hopefully, because the story idevelops interestingly ;)

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Nisha Gera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: anjalijiji
Wow what an intriguing story!! Loving it👍🏼 Hope Sarita becomes friends with invisible Vikrant, she seems so sad.

she will ;) thats why vikrant is here because sarita is lonely ;)

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-Srishty-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: --Nisha--

i will quote that book and those movies in the end of my story ;)
and you would love it hopefully, because the story idevelops interestingly ;)

Edited my comment.

I really, really want to know! Hope it has a happy ending 😳

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Nisha Gera

@--Nisha--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
First😃

I'm soo confused Sheetal!!! I'm reading every part twice or thrice to see if things make sense in my head.. How did Sarita lose her husband? And how is it Sheela's fault in it?

Sarita seems to be just a living body with no desire to live😕 and why isn't she able to see Vikrant? And I don't like Sheela

you dint ask how can shiela see vikrant?? 😲

i cant answer you the first two questions because they will be answered in part 6 to be exact.

and yess about the last question, vikrant is an angel came to sort out the life of sarita. how is abhi able to see him and not sarita, because abhi believes in angels and as to enter in the life of sarita he came through the route abhi. and why isnt sarita being able to see him, because vikrant doesnt want himself to show to sarita. see, he is confused whether sarita needs him or abhi. but in the next part...

(god i was about to reveal my next part 😲😉)

dont worry will post tnext part tomm ;)

Edited by --Nisha-- - 11 years ago