ViSa OS: Unexpected Office Meetings.

I am Madara. I am Kira.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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-Srishty-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Pein you're a marvellous writer! I've always wanted to see office scenes, like those where the wife takes lunch to hubby, feeding each other and so on but this was also a beautiful scene.

Thank you for another great piece of writing👏

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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wow...I totally loved this, I can actually see this happening. Yeah with stubble...he is more in demand, limited edition😆

I started writing one on these lines n you pleasantly surprised me. Thanks for sharing a beautiful OS😊

Keep Posting

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Nisha Gera

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome awesome, just simply amazing :D

but what were the other sounds actually ;)

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gmjervis

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thank you for brightening up my visa deprived day. Do plz continue!

The other noises were????😳

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MidnightMusings

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Posted: 11 years ago

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My Goodness, this is amazing!! :D

A treat to my senses, as i felt and visualised everything ;) Hehehe

Keep writing, looking forward for more from you dear :)

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Nisha Gera

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Liashna
My Goodness, this is amazing!! :D

A treat to my senses, as i felt and visualised everything ;) Hehehe

Keep writing, looking forward for more from you dear :)

sorry to spam your os pein

but liashna, you were actually visualizing everything, even the last part ;)

*i m running now, i know i will be killed*

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MidnightMusings

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: --Nisha--

sorry to spam your os pein

but liashna, you were actually visualizing everything, even the last part ;)

*i m running now, i know i will be killed*

Look who's talking!!! :p I was half sleepy madam, i went to read the last part again after seeing ur comment 🤣

But yeah *Coughs* i did ;) Hahahaha. Didn't Ary say that she'll leave the rest for our imagination? :P So i listened to her na! ;) 😆

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Nisha Gera

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Liashna

Look who's talking!!! :p I was half sleepy madam, i went to read the last part again after seeing ur comment 🤣

But yeah *Coughs* i did ;) Hahahaha. Didn't Ary say that she'll leave the rest for our imagination? :P So i listened to her na! ;) 😆

ohh so my comment made you realise the real story behind it ;)

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I am Madara. I am Kira.

@Pein

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Srishty-
Pein you're a marvellous writer! I've always wanted to see office scenes, like those where the wife takes lunch to hubby, feeding each other and so on but this was also a beautiful scene.

Thank you for another great piece of writing👏

Thanks you. I love office scenes for a lot of reasons. The red part would be so mushy that I won't ever be able to do it. Sorry. I love my angst.

Glad that I can share with you guys!

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