Visa FF- Karwa Chowth UPDATED Part 2.. page 1 - Page 3

yar!! Sweet sweet Vikrant n Natkhat Sarita n our darling Abhi... lovely part 2 I say!! I loved every bit of it!! ❤️

Jaldi update karo.. intezar nahi hota.. uff would love to see this happening in the show

Your scenes are really very cute 😳

it was wonderful..loved the continuation 😃..I had always imagined a situation when Vikrant would be in a romantic mood and our little cutie pie who has been their biggest cupid would interrupt them and Vikrant would be highly annoyed😆 great part 😊

oh god.. this was awesome...

1) She tried touching his feet but Vikrant stopped her..

Vikrant- ye kya kar rahi ho??

Sarita- bina payr chuuye ye puja puri nahi hogi...

Vikrant too bowed down to touch Sarita's feet...

Sarita(moving back)- ye kya kar rahe hain aap?

Vikrant- tumhi ne to kaha ki bina payr chhuye ye puja puri nahi hogi...

Sarita (smiling)- aap bhi na...

2) Abhi woke up...

Abhi- daddy aap aa gaye...?

Sarita Vikrant hurriedly drew apart...

Vikrant (trying to control his anger)- han beta... aa gaye aapke daddy...tum soye kyun nahi ab tak han?? Acche bacche itni der tak nahi jagte...

Abhi- main toh so gaya tha daddy.. abhi neend khul gayi...

Vikrant- bahut acche time par neend khuli hai aapki...

Sarita (smiling)- bacche par kyun gussa ho rahe hai... Abhi... so jao beta... bahut late ho gaya hai...

these are my two favorite scene in this play

loved it

Vikrant - pareshan wo karta hai ya tum karti ho sabko??😆😆

naah,... this one is completed...will write a new one someday

This is so cool

Too good...was imagining this ViSa knok-jhok while reading...thoroughly enjoyed it. Do continue to write more...pls don't stop.👍🏼