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samyuktaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is a continuation to my previous FF: (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivaah-ek-nayi-umeed/3762836/thode-se-achche-ff) Might contain 😉Mature😉 Content!

😳COZY NEST😳

Vandana was in a foul mood. All her plans had failed. Some how- Abhay

did not turn out to be a good idea. Vikrant was even more trusting of

Sarita. but worse still, he refused to believe Vandana's lies about Sarita's

character. This was not what she had expected to happen. It has been a

week already- since the party. With Abhiman determined to bring his

parents close, and Vikrant's change of heart, Vandana knew that she had

to do something. Something quick, to stick on to the race. At that moment,

Kajri had switched on the television and some Jagran was being telecast.

Vandana sighed at Kajri's timing. The anchor was saying, "Mata ke darbar

se koi khaali haat nahi lautega. 2 din 2 ratein, humare saath mata ka

dharshan kariye aur aapka saara jeevan sukh se bhar jayegi..." Vandana

thought, smiling to herself, "May be Kajri's timing wasn't that bad,

afterall..."!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Vikrant, Abhi, Vandana and Kajri were having breakfast, while Sarita was

feeding Abhi. Vikrant kept stealing glances at Sarita as often as he could.

There was something reassuring about looking at Sarita when she was with

Abhi. Although, he admitted to himself, it was good to look at her without

Abhi nearby too. The events at the party had changed it all for him.

Sarita was no longer fighting with him. Although he did miss their fights.

She was polite, a bit shy even, he thought, when she spoke to him. And

that only made him want to look at her, even more.

Vandana: Vikrant beta...

May be Sarita and he could go on a trip, a holiday, then he could ask

her... thought vikrant...

Vandana: Vikrant beta... Kahan kho gaye ho..?

Vikrant realised that he had only been staring at Sarita and not

concentrating on eating.

Vikrant: Kuch nahin mom... Office mein ek meeting hai... Usi ke baare

mein soch raha tha...

Vandana thought to herself: Ab baat yahan tak aa gayi- ki Vikrant

Suryavanshi ho jhoot bolna pad raha hai..? Mujhe jald se jald is love story

ka The End karna hoga..

Vandana: (putting on a fake smile...) Haan woh toh hai. Lekhin main kya

soch rahi thi- pichle kuch dinon mein- humare ghar mein bahut ashanti

phaili hui hai.. Ab dekho na- jab se nayi bahu ghar mein aayi hai- kuch

na kuch hota hi rehta hai... Sarita ke maike mein bhi tension chal rahi

hai- Rajji ke shaadi ko lekhar.. Aur humare ghar mein bhi-- us party wala

hadsa...

Vikrant and Sarita felt uncomfortable hearing about the party once

again...

Vikrant: Mom- saaf saaf kahiye... aap kya kehna chahti hai...

Vandana: Kuch nahin beta... Maine bas apne pandit ji se baat ki. Unhone

bataya ki- aapki aur Sarita bahu ki shaadi ke waqt grah disha kuch khaas

theek nahin thi.. aur isiliye yeh saare problems ho rahi hai...

Vikrant: Oh please mom! Aap jaanti hain main in saare baaton mein

vishwaas nahi karta...

Vandana: Main jaanti hoon beta... Lekhin- kam se kam Abhi ke baare

mein toh socho... Agar is grah dasha kharab hene ke wajah se uski life mein

kuch..

Sarita: Mummyji please.. aap Abhi ke baare main...

Vandana: Arre main thodi na chahungi ki mere Abhimaan ke life mein

koi bhi problem aaye... bas agar Sarita chahe toh sab kuch theek ho sakhta

hai...

Sarita: Main?

Vandana: Haan Sarita bahu. Pandit ji ne kaha hai- ki tumhe Mata ka

vrat rakhna hoga kal poora din aur raat ko- yahaan se 20 km doori pe jo

pahadi wale mata ka mandir hai- usmein diya jalani hogi. Aisa karne se-

Abhi aur hum jab ke jeevan se- saare sankat door ho jayenge...

Vikrant: What nonsense mom.. main..

Sarita: theek hai. Main vrat rakhoongi...

Vikrant: Sarita tumhe koi vrat rakhne ki zaroorat nahi hai...

Sarita: please Mr. Suryavanshi... kam se kam Abhimaan ke liye toh main

yeh vrat rakh hi sakhti hun... Aap mujh se argue mat kariye. Is bare mein

main aap se kuch baat nahin karna chahti...

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samyuktaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

That afternoon- in Vandana's room:

Kajri: Mom- yeh kya baat hui... Yeh vrat... Is se Sarita aur Vikrant ke

beech mein kaise dooriya paida karengi aap...

Vandana: Tum bhi na.. Aare- do din baad Rajji aur Divya ki shaadi hai..

Aur woh dono usi mandir mein jaa rahe hain- mata ka darshan karne--

aur wahan pahunchegi hamari pyaari Sarita bahu raani... baat samajh

mein aayi...

Kajri: nahin...

Vandana: uff... kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki maine tujhe apne bete ke

bahu kaise bana diya...

dimaag naam ki koi cheez hi nahin tumhare paas... Bahut bharosa karne

laga hai na Vikrant apne biwi par... mai bhi dekhti hoon- yeh vishwaas

kitne din thikti hai...

The next evening...

Vikrant calls Vandana from his office:

Mom- mujhe aaj raat aane main

der ho jayegi... aap Sarita se keh dijiye ki Abhi ko raat ko sulaade...

Vandana: Lekhin Vikrant beta- Sarita toh mata ke dharshan ke liye nikal

gayi...

vikrant: What -- mom-- aur appne usey jaane diya akhele?

Vandana: Akhele kahan beta-- ab Raj ji aur Divya bhi toh jaa rahe hain

mata ke dharshan ke liye-- unke saath chali gayi hogi...

Vikrant's silence on the other end assured Vandana that "teer ekdum

nishaane pe laga"

Vikrant kept thinking about his promise to Sarita. but he also thought

about the possibility of his wife meeting Raj ji again... He was not able to

concentrate. He thought he'd call Raj. But he thought better of it and

called Divya instead...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sarita: Aap yahaan?

Sarita was shocked seeing Vikrant getting aboard the bus that she was in.

Vikrant: haan main.. ab bus se neeche utro aur chalo mere saath. us

mandir ke raste mein kuch problem ho gayi hai. wahan se waapis aana

mushkil ho jayega...

sa: nahin vikrant ji. mujhe mata ka dharshan karna hai bas.

bus started suddenly and Vikrant loses balance and falls on Sarita.

(Nainon se yeh milkar naina-- female version...)

ViSa- sit on their seats and don't talk to each other for a few minutes..

Sa: Toh aap bhi chal rahe hai mere saath...

Vikrant: (after an awkward pause)- haan-- aur koi rasta choda hai tum

ne...

Sa: Waise aap ko kaise pata chala ki rasta kharab hai?

Vi: Woh.. mai bas--- Divya se baat ki-- usne bataya... Toh maine socha-

tum akheli jaa rahi hogi... toh...

Sarita looks at Vikrant. Her eyes looked grateful (Yeh dil hai... slow

version..) Vikrant clears his throat... They look away...

They reach the mandir... Attend the arti... Sarita breaks her fast with the

prashad... Vikrant can't help but admire her dedication... Her legs were

tired from climbing up the stairs of the temple... Her eyes looked tired

from not eating for the whole day- yet- she was determined to do that

prayer- for Abhimaan-- his son Abhimaan-- no... their son- Abhimaan...

Vikrant felt proud of Sarita...

While they were trying to return to the bus- the driver informs them that

the road that returns to Mumbai is blocked all night and transportation

would only be available the next morning...

It's already late-- and is about to rain. Vi-Sa walk along the road

nearby- in search of a place to stay for the night... After walking for what

seemed like hours- they reached what seemed like a dimly lit hotel

named...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sa: "Hotel Cozy Nest"... vikrant ji- yeh dekhiye...

Vikrant glances at the name... He sees the dimly lit and dusty hotel. He

also sees the receptionist eying them curiously and smirking at them-

pointing to the other employee...

Vi: Sarita chalo-- hum kahin aur rehlenge-- yeh hotel..

Sa: Nahin Vikrant ji-- ab main bahut thak chuki hum- main aur nahi

chal sakhti...

And Sarita enters the hotel before Vikrant could stop her...

Sa: Bhaiya ek kamra milega...

Receptionist: Haan ji bilkul... Kamre ke saath aur saari "suvidhaayen" bhi

milegi... (he relied smiling mischiviously...)

Vi: Dekho... vaisa kuch nahi chahiye-- bas ek kamra chahiye..

Receptionist: Theek hai... boliye kya dun-- small- medium-- deluxe-

large... (again smiling..)

Vi: Dekho tum..

Sa: bhaiya- bas jo bhi sasta wala hai-- sirf aaj raat ke liye---

vi: Dekho-- mein baat kar rahan hun na...

Sa: uff... dekhiye-- main already bahut thak chuki hun... Aur subah ko bhi

bahut kaam hai mujhe... Bas is ek raat ki baat hai...

Receptionist could not stop smiling... he hands her over the key to the

room...

Sa: Thank you bhaiya... Aap chal rahe hain ki nahin... (and glares angrily

at Vikrant...)

Vikrant looks at Sarita and then at the receptionist angrily and follows

Sarita...

The room is dusty- dimly lit- the paint on the walls keep falling apart..

Sarita sits on the bed and the bed creeks...

Sa: Chi.. yeh kaisi hotel hai... kitni gandi jagah hai...

Vikrant doesn't know whether to be angry or laugh at Sarita... She did not

even realise what happened at the reception...

Suddenly- Sarita started screaming and jumps up the bed...

Sa: Chuha... (she shouted...)

Vi: Sarita-- neeche utro--- koi chuha nahi hai yahan...

Sa: hai-- maine dhekha.. woh wahan pe...

vikrant moves to the direction she pointed-- it was just a screen moving

because of the breeze outside... He points that out to Sarita and she calms

down...

Vikrant smiles at Sarita shaking his head...

Sa: Aap muskura kyun rahe hain?

Vi: Woh.. tum bahar...

Sa: Aap ko hasi aa rahi hai... meri haalat pe?

Vi: Arre main tumhare haalat pe nahin has rahan hun.. main toh woh...

Sa: Kya?

Vi: Woh...

Vikrant doesn't know how to tell that to Sarita...

Suddenly-- there is a strange noise coming the room next to them... it was

a woman moaning... and the sound of bed creaking... The sound of the

moan grew louder and louder and the bed began to ccreek faster and

faster and the sound was as though the bed was banging against the wall...

Sa: Vikrant ji... woh kya hai.. lagta hai woh aurat kuch mushkil mein hai..

humein chal ke dekhna chahiye...

Sarita stood up and began to move towards the door...

Vi: Sarita rukho.. yeh kya kar rahi ho...

Sa: Kya Vikrant ji-- aap ko sunai nahin de raha... woh aurat zaroor koi

museebat mein hai.. dekhiye kaise cheek rahi hai.. lagta hai koi usey maar

raha hai...

Vi: Arre.. usey koi nahin maar raha..

Sa: Aap ko kaise pata..

Vi: Bas mujhe pata hai...

the sound gre even more louder...

Sa: jake dekhne dijiye mujhe... kuch toh problem hai...

Vi: Sarita... tum...

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Posted: 11 years ago

At that minute... Someone bangs at the door and shouts police...

Sa: Dekha- maine kaha na... kuch toh gadbad hai...

Vi: Dekho.. chup chaap chalo yahan se..

Sa: Arre-- aise kaise-- humein rukh ke- police ko batana hoga ki humne

kya suna...

Vi: (on the verge of laughing...) Sarita-- dekho-- pehle yahan se chalte

hain-- phir main khud police station le jaunga... theek hai.. ab chalo...

He drags her along and runs out...

Many people- some half dressed- some dressing as they run-- are running

along. with them...

Sa: Itne saare log.. aise kyun...

Vi: Sarita- yahan raid padi hai police ki...

Sa: Kya...?!

Then it occured to her...

Sa: Kya?! aap ne pehle kyun nahi bataya-- aap ne mujhe yahaan rukhne

kaise diya...

Vi: tum sunti ho meri kuch...? Ab chalo yahan se...

vikrant had called his friends and had arranged for a car.. Sarita was

resting her head on his shoulders... She was fast asleep... She didn't seem to

realise that she had her head on his shoulder.. She looked so peaceful... and

so beautiful...

Vikrant smiled thinking about the events that happened that night...

Vandana was shocked- seeing Vikrant carry Sarita to their room upstairs..

she could not understand how all that had happened...

vikrant placed the still sleeping Sarita gently on the bed nad covered her

with a blanket. Looking at Sarita, lovingly, he thought that some day, he

would help Sarita understand that the woman in the next room, at the

"Hotel Cozy Nest" was not is any kind of problem at all...

THE END

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chinuchinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome one dear ⭐️

continue if possible 😳

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raja.rani

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Posted: 11 years ago

reminded me of jab we met... nice...very nice...plz continue..

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Asmaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome so happy to read more FF keep it up =) you are doing a great job

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Bulbul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#10

you have the best ideas you know⭐️!!..it was amazing👍🏼..please continue real soon😳

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