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Nandini Swarna

@nandinidavid96

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow...this is amazing. You wrote so beautifully...wish we get to see something like this in the show

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vaishali

@vaishali667

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow awesome plz do cont soon if possible plz it lovely

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hamshaa

@hamshaa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

bul 3 its nice but it would have been better if u have written all in enlish bcos there are some who can't understand hindi, sry for this comment

wish to see more os by you but full in english, u've got a fantastic writing skill, i like ur way of writing, hope u would consider ma small wish
thanks dr😛

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: hamshaa
bul 3 its nice but it would have been better if u have written all in enlish bcos there are some who can't understand hindi, sry for this comment

wish to see more os by you but full in english, u've got a fantastic writing skill, i like ur way of writing, hope u would consider ma small wish
thanks dr😛

surely next time dear😃

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hamshaa

@hamshaa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Bul3
surely next time dear😃

thanks dr.😊 wish to read a new os as early as possible😊 thanks

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Priya

@-Serene.Rose-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Wow absolutely beautiful OS! Loved the write up dialogues, everything is superb yar! Write more...
wish dis happens in da show soon *sigh*

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Rita love the emotion flow. I kind of imagine that Sarita would confess her inner thoughts to Virkant.

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Bulbul - very nicely done. You managed to do something the show hadn't been able to till date - get me interested in these characters. I really liked the way you explored Vikrant and Sarita's mental state and then made them actually state it loud and clear for the other to hear. Well done 👏.

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Bulbul

@Bul3

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kdsubs
Bulbul - very nicely done. You managed to do something the show hadn't been able to till date - get me interested in these characters. I really liked the way you explored Vikrant and Sarita's mental state and then made them actually state it loud and clear for the other to hear. Well done 👏.

aw🤗..that is such a generous appreciation. thanks a bunch dear😃