ViSa FF Tu hi mera only mine ch 1 & precap pg 3

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Vikrant Suryavanshi


He is ruggedly attractive, with black hair and shrewd dark eyes, and the navy silk and mohair suit he wears is a testament to the expertise of his tailor. Not a man anyone could overlook, though the fierce frown marring his bold features would scare all but the bravest into glancing the other way. Orphaned at the age of 10 under severe circumstances was raised up by his Dadi &bua Vandana who instilled there values and thinking in him. Following, the footprints of his ancestral legacy he is the most celebrated Fashion Tycoon and heir of the biggest Fashion Houses in the country where he Dresses the high and elites. Hidden inside him is a volcano of forgotten times that he always keeps in check. His Emotions get the best of him his biggest weakness is his love , for his family and his near and dear his which sometimes turns in to obsession& possessiveness. But there is one being who always pierces through his contemporary composure.


Sarita Vikrant Suryavanshi
She was a self-made person, the ever so righteous and courageous Sarita. Born and brought up in Bhopal's upper middle class family, she followed her heart and achieved her ambition from hard work and dedication. Today India's femme fatale and the life of runways, she is the leading International Super model of the country. Very close to her big bro Yash and bhabhi Aarti .She always gave and wanted affection from life but what she got made her even loathe her existence.


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Love a four letter word that means much more what is love exactly' Some say its sacrifice ,friendship, or even Junoon 'the saying goes is everything is fair in Love and War is it really fair? Till what limit is it morally right'.. what happens when young love becomes much more to a point where it becomes obsession and over protectiveness .. when loves reaches such a leave when gets a point to be dangerous and suffocating for the other person what does one do .. this exactly howSarita feels and what she goes through'it was as if she was under his love spell she couldn't see how unhealthy the relationship had become 'she was starting to get a uneasy feeling in her as if something is terribly wrong..but was in total denial until that horrible incident her life had become a worst nightmare which she couldn't wake from.


He sat there in the Hospital he had his head buried in his hands Trying to hide his tears .How could he this cant be happening not again why cant he control himself he thought'he loved her was this his love? No it couldn't be if you love someone then because of you they wouldn't end up in a ICU at a hospital.

Outside ICU

Doctor comes out

Vikrant: How is Sarita now?

Yash Don't even dare to say my sisters name from your mouth i'm there for her 'there is no need for you to care of her Dr. how is Sarita

Dr. Prem: please yeh hospital hai this not the time for this both of please calm down ' Yash Sarita is fine don't worry there was a lot of loss of blood but she is stable now.but

Yash: But What ?

Vikrant:Dr what is it ?

Aarti: Wait what about the baby?

Vikrant : doctor how is my baby its fine right?

please say something

Dr Prem: I'm so sorry we couldn't save the baby she fell straight on her stomatch we tried are best but ' she had a miscarriage. we will have to keep her under observation for a few days she is still very weak .. you all may see her now .. but please no stress

Yash: Mis...Miscarriage (he put his hand on his head )

Aarti: omg (hand on her mouth )

Sheela : kya di ki saath aisa kyun?

Vikrant is about to walk in the room

Yash : no don't you dare stay away from her after what you did I will not allow you near her '(looking at karan and not even your brother karan he too better stay away from sheela understood.

Vikrant: yash I know you are upset at me and you have every right to be but please let me meet her please she is my wife , and for my fault why are you making karan stay from Sheela I need to meet her please

Yash : no vikrant you've only seen my good side don't make me show you my ugly side i'm warning you stay away from my family all of you .

karan walks near Sheela

Aarti comes in front: didn't you hear my husband stay away from us got it

(walks to vikrant slaps him) this is just a small trailer if you or you bro come near chutki ,or Sheela there will much more then that.. I cant believe I trusted you more then yash he was right you aren't what you show to be .

Yash (moves Aarti behind him): jaan don't be near him we cant lose our child either says yash

They all go in side except for vikrant n karan

vikrant walks in karan follows

yash is caressing her forehead while Aarti is holding her hand

Sarita :Bhai , aarti My Baby please give me my baby and she bawls

he enters

sarita see him

sarita (yelling top of her lungs): you stay away from me bhai get this killer away from me he killed my baby get out leave just gooo

Vikrant : what the killer Sarita what that was my baby to i didn't mean

Yash : Didn't Itell you not to come in leave now

Sarita: bhai you were right he is a monster he killed my babyyy Vikrant Suryavanshi we're done bhai I don't ever want see this murderer again

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wow dear mindblowing start awesome one plz do pm me when u update next part plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz do update soon
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Originally posted by: vaishali667

wow dear mindblowing start awesome one plz do pm me when u update next part plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz do update soon

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super awsomeee start..!!!!!
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Awesome. Nice starting.

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nice start
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Hey fiza... m sooo happpyyy dat finally kisi ne toh VISA pe FF shuru ki.. Aaanhh mae kr deti per m totally fattu.. 😆 cntinue soon babe... nice prologue... Waiting for d update... n do PM me.. tc
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Hey fiza... m sooo happpyyy dat finally kisi ne toh VISA pe FF shuru ki.. Aaanhh mae kr deti per m totally fattu.. 😆 cntinue soon babe... nice prologue... Waiting for d update... n do PM me.. tc

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Originally posted by: awesome-raji

nice start

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thank u dear yup ill pm u when I do
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Originally posted by: alee001

super awsomeee start..!!!!!

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thank u sweetie 😃 will update soon ...yup luv rathore n arjun

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