A Raj & Sarita OS : Let Go Of Your Love By Ammy

Posted: 12 years ago
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After a long time, I am writing an One Shot. However it happens to be quite a crappy return.😕 Anyways, just wanted to post it. I will write more perfect ones as i think, as to be honest, this one I just sit on my bed and just start typing didn't even know how it would ended, but i did got to an end😆.

But, that doesn't stop me from posting it, so that you guys can read.
Hope you like it.

XOAmmy.






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Posted: 12 years ago
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Let Go Of Your love
By Ammy

Loving him was probably a mistake or probably a sin. No! Sarita quickly try to get that thought out of her head as she packs her bags. She was doing the hardest thing ever, leaving Raj's house, leaving Raj, but what could she have done? She thought sadly.

She loved him more than anything in this world, more than life itself and in all these 10 years of marriage, not once have Raj ever looked at her as his wife not even as a friend. It have always been as if she is not there, no matter how much she try to demand her right Raj still is the same.

Sarita Ji! Raj said making Sarita quickly snap out of her thought and ask Raj " Do you need something".

Are you ready? Raj asked

Sarita zip the zipper up on her bag and nod her head then Raj took the bag and leave saying to her I will drop you to the train station.

Sarita heart start pounding and tears swell up in her eyes as she said to herself I am leaving forever, I shall never be back and little do you know you are the one taking me to began this journey. I do hope what I am doing, you will be benefit from. I have no place in your life, but you have taken away my heart silently. Sarita then walk out the room, down the stair and straight to Raj's van without even looking back as she will feel sad.

As Raj drop her off, the only 2 words he said to her was "Take Care". That was exactly what she would do, but she manages to hide her tears behind her smile and replied to him, I would, you should take care also. As he walks away from her, she stand as look at him go. She was letting her love go, she will be moving on. Atleast moving on is better than to live with Raj knowing that he isn't happy with her, he will be happy now and that is all she wanted as she would always love him. She said to herself as she wipe the tears that fell down her cheek knowing her love would be happy without her, then she began walking to began her new journey. Where she was going? She had no idea, but she walked to the train as she wonders if she will ever reach Raj again in life?

10 YEARS Later

Raj bent his head into the palm of his head as he wonder where would he find her? Where would he look?

Looking for Sarita over the past 10 years had made him go crazy. There wasn't a place he didn't checked but she was no where to be found. Ten years has gone by there was no sight of Sarita. Where is Sarita, Raj thinks to himself as he looked up into the sky. Where are you? How would I tell you how much I need you, How much I love you, tears fell from Raj's eyes as looked at a photo of Sarita when his mom yell from downstairs.

Today is also the day that Raj mom insisted on meeting a girl for his Punar Vivah. This sadden Raj even more, letting Sarita leave was a mistake but he didn't know she wouldn't have return.

Raj & his mom arrive at the girl's home, the girl's best friend happens to come out before the girl to serve tea. As she began walking toward Raj who backed her, he becomes restlessness, wondering if she would have meet Sarita once, then he would never let her go. As she comes directly behind Raj, Raj's mom became shocked to see its no other than Sarita. Sarita immediately stop as she sees Raj's mom, realizing Raj is in front her, just that his back is towards her. She immediately turns to find her friend coming down the stairs. The friend's dad point behind Raj saying that's my daughter. Raj then got up and turn to see the girl and also saw one with her back towards him. The girl then say Sarita, please come.

Raj immediately becomes alert as the girl walking is no other than Sarita. His face immediately lights up as he goes in front her. Sarita eyes swell up with tears after seeing Raj after 10 years.

Raj then take his hand in his and said I promise I will speak my heart out the day I see you, and that's exactly what I would do but before I do. I would like to say I am sorry, I let to go, I shouldn't have let you go alone, but while you were away I realized I need you & I want you in my life. I love you Sarita.

Sarita immediately began crying and hug Raj as she apologizes for leaving. But she only wanted to get his love one day, and today she got it after 10 years.

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The moral of the story is simply learn to let go of the things you love, so that when it comes back to you no matter how long it takes, it will always be yours to keep like Raj & Sarita love in this one shot.

Edited by -Amanda- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow that was amazing u should really write more 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow never thought that anyone will write an os on sara in this forum! Fantastic..
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crystalmoon

wow that was amazing u should really write more 👏


Thanks..😃
I will ..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Momrin

Wow never thought that anyone will write an os on sara in this forum! Fantastic..


there are a lot of sara fans in this forum i think they are just silent readers
my reasons are whenever there is a poll about best jodi and stuff its always sara who is on the lead 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: crystalmoon

wow that was amazing u should really write more 👏


Thanks..
Will do...😃
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Momrin

Wow never thought that anyone will write an os on sara in this forum! Fantastic..


Thanks...😆
Well, I actually really think Sarita and Raj's love kind of different and unique...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Amanda-



Thanks...😆
Well, I actually really think Sarita and Raj's love kind of different and unique...


yeah they are unique..thats why i love them..
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Momrin


yeah they are unique..thats why i love them..


I love Divya & Raj, but Sarita & Raj have such a bond. Wow..

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