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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
praty the update was mindblowing sweetheart
jaldi se next update kar do
thanks huni
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
wow ..........maaza agya read kar kay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: pRaTiBhA.1990

part-3

She goes 2 prithvi's room cryng'
Tabhi prithvi aata h..
Prithvi-maa'ma..
Dad..ma kyu ro rhe h..
Somesh-dekho prithvi'ham tumhare dad h..hamne hamesha tumhare liye rite decisions liye h..
Aisa h ek decision hamne aj bhi liya h..
Hame bharosa h k tumhe use koi problem nhi hogi..
Prithvi-haa dad..bt'kya socha h aapne..
Somesh-jau..n apni maa se puchu..vo batayege tumhe'.m going outside wid my business frenz..u take care son..
Prithvi-kya hua hoga..maa kyu ro reh h..

In prithvi's room..
Ketaki-I cant do dis..ye sab..ye nhi ho sakta'
Prithvi-kya nhi ho sakta ma..
Ketaki-prithvi..mere bacche
Prithvi-maa..y r u cryng'.
Kya kaha dad ne..
Tell me plz..
Ketaki-prithvi'tumhare dad..tumhe''''''.
Prithvi-haa ma..
Kaho na..
Ketaki-beta..tumhare dad tumhe London bhej rhe h''''hostel me''padhne k liye
Prithvi-wat
Wat r u saying..
Dad aisa soch bhi kaise sakte h'''
Me kahi nhi jauga'
Ketaki-prithvi..beta..u knw naa..
Tumhare dad k samne kisi k nhi chalti..
Unhone tumhare London jane ka sara intzaam kar diya h..
U hav 2 go beta'
U hav 2 go prithvi..hah..
Prithvi-no ma..i will nt go..
Me nhi jauga'
Ketaki-beta..mene bht try kiya..bt tumhare dad nhi maan rhe..ab..me kuch nhi kar sakti.,..
Prithvi-maa..me nhi jana chahta..
Me yaha..me kaise ja sakta hu..
Me chala gya to'
Nhi ma..
Ketaki-prithvi..bacche..ab tumhe jana hoga'
Tumhare dad kisi kin hi maanege..u hav 2 go..
1 week baad'''..

(suddenly'glaas tutne k awaz aati h'

Ketaki n prithvi mud ke dekhte h..to peeche sanyogita khadi hoti h'
Prithvi k hostel jane ke khabar sunkar uske haath se biryani ka bowl gir jata h''.)

Ketaki-arrey..sanyogita..tum theek ho na..hato vaha se..glass lag jayga.,.
Ruko.me servant ko bhejti hu'saaf karne k liye'.

Prithvi-sanyogita'
Sanyogita..r u ok..
Yaha betho..
Sanyogita
Sanyogita was shocked..vo chup[chap khadi rehte h..
Prithvi-sanyogita..damn..kuch bolo'
Sanyogita was so shocked..vo vaha se chali jati h'
Prithvi-sanyogita..ruko plzz..sanyogita..
Ohh..
Ab kya karu me..
Muje dad se baat karni hogi..
Me sanyogita ko chodke nhi ja sakta'
I cant go..

In singh's house..
Sanyogita apne room me jati h'
Sanyogita-sob..sob..kyu prithvi'kyu jar he ho'
Tum chale gye to mera kya hoga'.
Plz mat jao na..
Haw..
Tumhi to ho jisse me apne problems share kar sakti hu..
Jiske samne me ro sakti hu'
Mat jao na..
Plz mat jao'
Tumhare bina..me nhi ji paugi..
Tumhare alawa mera kon h prithvi..mat jao'rote rote vo so gye.......
Nxt morning'

Shreya-sanyogita..sanyogita..utho'
Omg..ise to fever h'
Jai uncle..jai uncle..

Jai-wat happen
Shreya-uncle..dekhiye na..sanyogita ko high fever h..
Plz call d doctor..
Jai-ohh..abhi bulata hu
Damini-huhh..is ladki k natak khatam nhi hote..
Pata h na k aj mere kitty party h..
To nautanki kar rhe h..

Doctor aata h..
Doctor-omg..ise kaafi fever h'
Jai-bt..kal to ye bilkul theek thi..
Achanak ise kya hua
Doc-pata nhi..shayad ise kisi baat se bht chot pahuchi h..
See..her eyes..kaafi swelling h..
Aisa lagta h jaise raat bhar ye roti rhe..
Jai-wat..
Sanyogita..my child..plzz aankhe kholo'
Doc-mene injection laga diya h..
Ise rest karne dijiye'
Jai-theek h..
Shreya..beta tum sanyogita k saath h rehna..
Shreya-ji uncle..u dnt worry..

Sanyogita behgoshi k halat me..prithvi..prithvi..
Shreya-omg..ye prithvi ko yaad kar reh h..
Ab me ise kaise batau ki'

Tabhi jai aata h..
Jai-shreya..beta..tum skool jau..me sanyogita k sath bethta hu..
Shreya-ji uncle..

Jai-sanyogita..bete hosh me au..
Me janta hu ki tumhare mom k death k baad se hi mene tumhe time nhi diya..me business me itna busy ho gya k tume ek baap ka pyaar nhi de paya..m sorry sweety..
I promise..ab se aisa nhi hoga..
Hosh me aau bte'''

Poora din beet jata h..
Bt sanyogita ka fever theek nhi hota'

Nxt morning..
Sanyogita-ahh..
Ahh..mera head'uff..

Jai-sanyogita-araam se'.araam se utho..
Sanyogita-papa..aap'ap office nhi gye..
Jai-apni bte ko akela chodkar me kaise kahi ja sakta hu'
Sanyogita-pap'
Jai-kya hua bacche..
Sanyogita-kuch nhi papa'
Jai-tum ab araam karo..
Me paani lata hu..dawaiya lene h na'
Sanyogita-ji..papa'
Papa..muje fever tha..to..koi aya tha kya muje dekhne..
Jai-haa..shreya ayi thi..
Sanyogita-aur.😭😭.aur koi..
Jai-nhi beta..
Koi nhi aya..
Chalo..ab u atke rest..
Me paani lata hu
Sanyogita-hmm'
Prithvi ko mere thodi sib hi fikar nhi h''shayad mene hi uski dosti ko'😳''.

Dosti ko kya''''

Sanyogita dekhi h..
Shreya'!!
T,,..tum..
Shreya-haa..sanyogita..me..
Tum ruk kyu gye..
Bolo..tumne prithvi k dosti ko..kya samjha..
Sanyogita-kuch nhi..me to bas aise h..
Shreya-sanyogita..i m ur frend baby..
Mujse mat chupa..
Tu kal behoshi k halat me prithvi ko bula rhe the..kya me jaan sakti hu kyu??
Aakhir..tune apni aur prithvi k dosti ko kya samajh liya..
Bol sanyogita..
Chup mat reh'
Sanyogita-me kya bolu shreya./.muje khud kuch samajh nhi arha,'
Shreya-me samjhati hu'
U r in lov😃 sweety..
Sanyogita-wat rubbish'
Itz nt possible
prithvi is only my best frend..
Dats it'
Shreya-fine..tumhe sach nhi sunna to mat suno..
Bt itz truth sweety'
U accept it or nt'
Sanyogita-nhi re..
Ye sab..nhi..
Shreya-theek h..mat maan..
Vaise me kal subh tuje prithvi ke bare me kuch batane ayi thi
Sanyogita-kya..bolna'''
Kya..
Shreya-well..
Kal subh prithvi k mom ka phn aya tha..
Unhone kaha k prithvi delhi chala gya h..vaha se seedha London chala jayga'''..
Sanyogita shocked😲'
Chala gya'''''.muje chod kar..
Bye bhi nhi ki..
Kaise ja sakta h..
Kyu gya'
Achanak..ehh''haaaaaaaa''
She started cryng..
Shreya-sanyogita..plzz baby..chup ho jau..use jana tha..vo gya..agar use tere parwah hoti..to aise chodkar nhi jata..
Use bhul ja'
Sanyogita-kaise..kaise bhul jau shreya..vo mera bst frend tha

Shreya-kya ab bhi tu yhi kahege k vo sirf tera best frend tha..
Bol sanyogita..
Sanyogita-hmm..me nhi janti..vo kon tha..kya tha..
Bt mere vo sab kuch tha shreya'
Shreya-bas sanyogita..
Ab prithvi ak chapter close kar.,.bhul ja..vo gya..kabhi nhi ayga'''..
Sanyogita-kabhi nhi ayga..
Hmm..
Haah..sachme..ab vo kabhi nhi ayga''''''
Hmm'''.sanyogita lost in her thoughts'''.

wow dear..
long ud..gud..
well..prithvi kyu chla agya..sanyo ko chodke.😭...naughty...
n sanyo is in love...wow😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Wonderful update.

Oh no, prithvi chala gaya oh bhi sanyo se mile bina.Upar se shreya , ne sanyo ko prithvi ke against kar rehi hain, aapna work kyuon nahi karti oh shreya, ek damini kam thi upar se iye shreya. pyaar ke dusmaan.
anyway loved it dear. u brilliantly described the pain of mother.
U beautifully described the emotion of sanyo and her fight with herself if she loves prithvi or not.
Great part. post long part and thanks for this long and lovely part.

m happy dat u like d part....yaa..damini to h pyar k dushman..
bt shreya nhi..she is only concerned abt her frend😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: maria_awan

nice praty dear its really good 😉good going huni 👏but prithvi ik dafa to mil jata to sanyogita sebechari sanyogita😭

thanxx maria............ya..poor sanyogita😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
thanxx rumi darling😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: sweetshera

. its nice Pratibha dear. Keep it up. Feeling so sad for sanyo poor girl. but yeh prithvi achanak kyun chala gaya. so mean of him.

ya..prithvi ko aise nhi jana chhaye tha....😭😭😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
thanxx sweety😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

praty the update was mindblowing sweetheart

jaldi se next update kar do
thanks huni

anytime jaani............😳😳😳m happy dat u like the ud...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: niyaati

wow dear..
long ud..gud..
well..prithvi kyu chla agya..sanyo ko chodke.😭...naughty...
n sanyo is in love...wow😳

thanxx sweety.........
yep..sanyogita is in love....👏👏

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