EK THI RAJKUMARI(part 6 updated on pg 8) - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

its nice part i loved rajkumari braveness and affection toward his braja 😉

Thank u soooooooooooooooooo much Maria dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely update buddy!... continue soon
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Originally posted by: aandhanika

Lovely update buddy!... continue soon

Soooooooooooo sweet of u dear Rashmi.I'll ud soon. Till then plz wait.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yes nandini
awesome as always
i like ananya's character ...so sweet
well written and wonderful
plzz post the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

yes nandini

awesome as always
i like ananya's character ...so sweet
well written and wonderful
plzz post the next part

Thanks sooooooooooooo much Shona. So happy to know that u like Ananya's character. I made her a mixture of both Sanyogeeta and Shera, as I luv the naughtiness of Sanyo and the bravery of Shera. Anyways thanks again. i'll post the ud soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow nandini.. amazing ud.. ananya is so daring.....claps claps clap.... she is so caring..........so sweet.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks a lot Pratibha.It's gr8 2 no that u like her character.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 5

Worrying that probably her action bothered her beloved and caring brother so much that it brought tear in his eyes, the brave girl, for the first time in her life became nervous and, cursing herself for becoming the cause of her brother's distress, she advanced towards her brother Aryan. Ananya first couldn't think of what to say and looked into the ground below, as if she had committed a hideous offence, bcoz to the loving sister, who loved her brother a lot, even more than her own life, becoming the cause of her brother's distress meant to be the greatest and most abominable crime of this world. At first she hesitated and then she slowly and gently wiped off the tear rolling down from her brother's eyes and then she with a much worried and sad look in her beautiful face, began in an apologetic tone : " Bhaiya, aaj sirf humari wajah se aapke aankhon mein ansu hain.Hum bahut boore hain na, humne us bhai ko rula diya jisne maa aur pitaji ke swargwas ke baad hume maa aur pita dono ka pyar diya,humko aapni palko mein bita kar rakha aur hum hain ki '''.. .(Folding her hands and lowering her head) Bhaiya, hume maaf kar dijiye humne jo bhi galti ki hain uske liye. Hum toh bas''.. (her voice choked and tear roll down the beautiful cheeks of the brave princess).

Aryan, seeing the tear in the eyes of her beloved sister, gently wiped out the tear and then taking her hands in his own hands said with a sweet smile in a very polite tone : " Humari pyari behna bhi na bilkul pagal hain pagal . Are humari laado yeh toh khushi ki ansu hain,janti hain kyun?Kyunki aaj humein lag raha hain ki humari behen, humari naqnhi pari sach mein bari ho chuki hain.Aapne humara sar garv se ucha kiya hain,Ananya,sharm se jhukaya nehin hain . Aaj humein yeh ehsaas ho gaya hain ki humari behen na sirf aapni raksha kar sakti hain balki duro ki suraksha ki jimmedari bhi utha sakti hain. Ananya aaj humko ehsaas ho gaya hain ki humesha shararat karne wali humari behen jimmedariyon ko samajhne laagi hain.Aur shayad yehi woh sahi waqt hain ki aapko rajya aur rajkarya ke bare mein poori jankari ho taaki humari gair hajri mein aap acche se rajya sambhal sake. Waise ab humko lagta hain ki ab humari pyari si,shararti aur jiddi behen aar mein chupi ek jimmedar rajkumari dheere dheere bahar aa rahi hain, kyun hain na?"

Now these loving and polite words spoken by her brother succeeded in bringing about a very sweet smile in the beautiful face of the most beautiful girl of contemporary India, a smile which is the cause of envy of all girls and cause of madness of a lover and the inspiration of a poet.

She sighs in relief and then replied : "Bhaiya hum chahe kitne hi bare kyun na ho jaye, aapke liye humesha aapki nanhi pari hi rahenge.Aur haan aapki jankari ke liye bata dena chahte hain ki aapki jiddi si, sharati si behen,aaj bhi utni hi jiddi aur sharati hain aur aapko uske har jid manna bhi parega aur uski har shararat ko bhi sahna parega."

Aryan replies with a fake sigh of frustration : " Hey Bhagwan,hum pagal hain jo humne yeh soch liya ki ye jungle billi ab kaboo mein aa gayi,koi bachaye humein iski shararton se."

Listening to these funny words of the prince each and every1 present there started to laugh in which both the brother and sister also joined in.

When they just got just tired of laughing, they stopped but still their was smile in their faces.

Now Aryan said: " Ab agar humari pyari behna ke karname khatam ho gaye ho toh mahal jaute,sirf agar aapki hokum ho toh Rajkumariji." All began to laugh again.

Ananya replied with a shy smile spread over her face: " Bhaiya aap bhi na,chaliye."

With this sweet and shy smile spread over her beautiful face she looked so pretty that it is indescribable in words. Then she takes her brother's arm and pulls him towards the castle, Aryan with a hearty laugh was saying: " Are Pari kya kar rahi hain (Aryan used 2 call her pari and well that had a good basis as she was no less beautiful than a fairy)."

To this rajkumar Aryan's pari replied : "Ab aur koi baat nehin,aap bas humare saath chaliye."

With this both of them headed towards the castle followed by Amrita and Nilima. The Stable keeper was standing alone watching those four people going far and far, talking and laughing within themselves, and then slowly a smile spread over his face and he said to himself : " Aisi hi hain humari rajkumari,madat bhi karti hain par kabhi jatati bhi nehin, aaj ke duniya mein aisa insaan bahut mushkil se milte hain aur bahut hi kam hote hain.Aho bhagya humari ki humko in jaisi rajkumari mili hain ." Then he thanked God

And then he also departed and got back to his work.

However, at the very moment from behind a large and bushy tree a face appeared, an unknown face, a very cruel looking face. That cruel looking man was continuously staring at the direction in which still the silhouette of those four people walking towards the castle was visible. Then he said to himself : "yaani ke maine jo suna tha is rajkumari Ananya ke bare mein woh sab bilkul sach tha.Sach mein yeh ladki toh kamal hain.Usne us bekaboo ghore ko aise kaboo mein kar liya jaise koi khilone se maano khel rahi hain. Hmmm ab toh mujhe aur bhi sabdhani se aapna kaam nikalna hoga,aur woh bhi is rajkumari ke najron se bachte hue."

Edited by sweetshera - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Another big ud for u guys,hope u enjoy.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Veri nice part.Bonding between Annaya and her brother very nice.Psot next part soon dear.

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