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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: rumela711926

Wah wah kya baat hai v. nice⭐️



i hav finished riting scene 5 dear...do chk it..πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wat nonsense is tis mirchy???? how dare u say tis update was dry??infact i enjoyed it mre than the last2 updates...where were u gal 4 so mny days?????i dnt think im readg tis actually mre of watchg it from ur writeup..i m picturizing each n every scene of urs...my god how wonderfully u hve written...the detail description of each n every charcater up2 the point....i like the songs tat u hve put in. wid the situations...the camera focussing..stuff like tat...im truly watchg PRC NOW!kya kamal ki writer ho tum..u shud hve been in tat sagars filmcity darlg, prc wud hve gained the highest trps ever!
so im listing my favouraites...
'Yeh bas ek Galat femi hey,Sikkandar...M.Ghori apne aadmiyon ke sath Pachim disha mein hey...aur Uthar disha mein wo apne vesh mein kuch aadmiyon ko khada kar rakha hey..taki hum is galat femi mein rahkar Uthar disha mein war karein aur wo seedha mehel ke andar guss jayein!!!'😑😑😑

n evry1 is 😲 2 hear wot tht person jst said...n Prc calls d person's name..n we recognises him as 'Kaha Chauhan'😳😳😳 aka 'Shera' frm Yatra dayz....(Someshwar's Khas Gupt char!!!)....Guyz....i kinda lyk him...so thought fbringin him up in my ff...U might see many mre silly thingz in my ff..U no me na?πŸ˜†
FIRST OF ALL U DIDNT DO ANY SILLIY THNGS COS SHERA WAS MY FAV CHARCATER 2...HE WAS SO WEL IN KOTESHWAR ...I HVE ALWAYS WRITTN N COMMENTED TAT PRC LACKS HIS SECURITY AFTR THE LEAP...PROBALY U BOUGHT BACK THE GOLDEN MEMORIES N IM HAPPY 2 C SHERA BACK IN UR UPDATE
Hum hey 'Ungli baba'!!!πŸ˜‰...Aur yeh Humare Dharam Patni....Kaaa....Kaajal!!!!πŸ˜ƒANDHERAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! Ghor ANDHERRAAAAAπŸ˜‰.......Aap ki beti ki jaan ko khatraa heyyyy!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
UNGLI BABA🀣 FROM WHERE DID U GET TIS NAME????KYA KYA CHALTA HAI TUMHARE DIMAAG MEI...BEILIEVE ME IN SUCH SERIOUS SITUATION ABT THE WAR N STUFF TAT U HVE WRITTEN IM JUS LAUGNG OUT...
Ya to aap apne aan ko bachane keliye swayamwar karadoo..aur apni beti ko kho do....ya phir...swayamwar talke....uspar aanewali vipti ko mitane keliye hawan karado.....aap ki beti...aap ki marziπŸ˜‰( wah!wah baba....aap bhi kamaal ke dialogue marte hey!!!πŸ˜‰
VERY WELL WRITTEN...JC A FOOL WILL NEVER GIVE UP!!BT I LIKE CHANDS DIALOGUE A LOT...HE HAS HIT A BULLEYES WID TIS!
Hooonii koo...Koii nahii..Tal ..saktaaa!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†( aap ke paas iss phrase ke alawa koi dialogue nahi hey kya?πŸ˜‰)..Kya tumne 'Parikshit' Maharaj ke kahani nahi suni?😲...wo Moth se bechne keliye sadra mein ek mehel banaya...Kadi suraksha mein jee rehe they..Pas kya kaein..Moth...Phal( Fruit) ke roop mein unke saamne aagaye!!!..Hooniiii koo..koooi..nahiiii...taall..sakta!!!
MIRCHY UR 2 MUCH...IM LAUGHNG MORE IN UR BRACKET STUFF .. UR THOUGHTS...STOP IT DEAR!🀣 WELL BT I DIDNT KNR\EW TIS STRY ABT PARAKISHIT..THANX 4 MKNG ME KNO TAT SUCH THNG /STRY XSITED
Chand:-....(starein @ Karnataki).....Jii mein Ruk jaaoonga...sirf isiliye kyunki....aapne ne mujhse rukne ko kaha,bhaabhiii😳😳😳

sanyo did notice tht Chand is staring @ karnatakiii n 😊 n goes 2 chand lyk...

Sanyo:- Chanddd...mein wahan nahii.(Pointing @ karnataki).yehan hoon!!
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TIS IS ONE OF THE BEST DIALOGUES OR THE SCENE TAT U HVE WRITTEN...IM IMAGINING SANYOS CONFUSED FACE N CHANDS PUPPY LUK HE MUST HVE 4 KARNATAKI...I WAS IN SPLITS READG TIS...WOW MIRCHY U KNO HOW 2 PULL OFF!
Vaishali:- woo..Kuch bhi nahi...usse umse door rehne ko kaho....Hum bhi kissi se kam nahi hey!!!πŸ˜ƒ
VAISHALI IS FALLNG 4 PUNDER...HOW SWEET...IM WAITG 4 THEIR LUVSTRY 2 STRT
Mujhe wo bahuth yaad aati hey!!😭😭😭.......(recalling all d momentz since childhood......n thn aftr a while, taking a deep breath)...yeh sab bathein hum baad mein karenge!!!...ab humhe kissi bhi haal mein ajmeer ko bachana hey!!!
ACTUALLY IN THE SERIAL PRC WE NEVER GOT 2 C PRC N SAMAR MOMENTS...THEIR CHILDHOOD MOMENTS WER NVR SHOWN.. THE 1ST TIME SAMAR MADE A ENTRY IT WAS PRC N SAMARS HUG...VERY COLD WID NO FEELINGS...N THY NVR TALKED ABT THEIR FRIENDSHIP, ABT THE KHAX\ZANA KHOJ...EVERYTHG WAS SO SUBDUED...BT FROM UR FF IM ENJOYG TIS BONDING OF THEM...N I WANT 2 SEE THEM RECOLLECTNG THEIR MOMENTS INFRNT OF PRATHA IN 1 OF UR UPDATES!
SO DEAR WHO SAYS U DUUNO HINDI OR UR WEAK...U HVE WRITTEN EVERYTHG IN SO SHUD HINDI TAT IM TRYG 2 UNDERSTND THE MEANG OF IT...UR GUD AT IT...VERY WELL WRITTEN!!N IM WAITG 4 MRE....MUAH
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: mirchy




Hav upd8ted scene 5 dear...do chk it!!!!😳

i hav checked the update, its really amazing, keep it up!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: mehraan

wat nonsense is tis mirchy???? how dare u say tis update was dry??...Ohh God...dii u realli scared me!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†infact i enjoyed it mre than the last2 updates...where were u gal 4 so mny days?????i dnt think im readg tis actually mre of watchg it from ur writeup..i m picturizing each n every scene of urs...my god how wonderfully u hve written...the detail description of each n every charcater up2 the point....i like the songs tat u hve put in. wid the situations...the camera focussing..stuff like tat...im truly watchg PRC NOW!kya kamal ki writer ho tum..u shud hve been in tat sagars filmcity darlg, prc wud hve gained the highest trps ever!...Thankz a lott diiii😳...Nxt tym, i'll definitely be wid Sagar's n will com up wid PRC -part 2...It will b happening aftr d death f evry charcterzz...i mean it'll b happening in heaven!!!πŸ˜‰...N...wotz an Idea sirjii!!!πŸ˜‰

so im listing my favouraites....
'Yeh bas ek Galat femi hey,Sikkandar...M.Ghori apne aadmiyon ke sath Pachim disha mein hey...aur Uthar disha mein wo apne vesh mein kuch aadmiyon ko khada kar rakha hey..taki hum is galat femi mein rahkar Uthar disha mein war karein aur wo seedha mehel ke andar guss jayein!!!'😑😑😑

n evry1 is 😲 2 hear wot tht person jst said...n Prc calls d person's name..n we recognises him as 'Kaha Chauhan'😳😳😳 aka 'Shera' frm Yatra dayz....(Someshwar's Khas Gupt char!!!)....Guyz....i kinda lyk him...so thought fbringin him up in my ff...U might see many mre silly thingz in my ff..U no me na?πŸ˜†
FIRST OF ALL U DIDNT DO ANY SILLIY THNGS COS SHERA WAS MY FAV CHARCATER 2...HE WAS SO WEL IN KOTESHWAR ...I HVE ALWAYS WRITTN N COMMENTED TAT PRC LACKS HIS SECURITY AFTR THE LEAP...PROBALY U BOUGHT BACK THE GOLDEN MEMORIES N IM HAPPY 2 C SHERA BACK IN UR UPDATE.....Itz kk diii...evn i loved Shera...it would hav been nice if Shera was wid PRC ebn aftr d leap..kam se kam...hw wld hav in4med PRC abt Ghori's ideaz n all tht!!πŸ˜‰
Hum hey 'Ungli baba'!!!πŸ˜‰...Aur yeh Humare Dharam Patni....Kaaa....Kaajal!!!!πŸ˜ƒANDHERAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! Ghor ANDHERRAAAAAπŸ˜‰.......Aap ki beti ki jaan ko khatraa heyyyy!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
UNGLI BABA🀣 FROM WHERE DID U GET TIS NAME????KYA KYA CHALTA HAI TUMHARE DIMAAG MEI...BEILIEVE ME IN SUCH SERIOUS SITUATION ABT THE WAR N STUFF TAT U HVE WRITTEN IM JUS LAUGNG OUT...lol..Thankq diiiii.....Wen i thot f a title...it jst came 2 my mind....Heard this somwer..so thot f brinin it up...u'nglii'Chand' Baba!!πŸ˜†
Ya to aap apne aan ko bachane keliye swayamwar karadoo..aur apni beti ko kho do....ya phir...swayamwar talke....uspar aanewali vipti ko mitane keliye hawan karado.....aap ki beti...aap ki marziπŸ˜‰( wah!wah baba....aap bhi kamaal ke dialogue marte hey!!!πŸ˜‰
VERY WELL WRITTEN...JC A FOOL WILL NEVER GIVE UP!!BT I LIKE CHANDS DIALOGUE A LOT...HE HAS HIT A BULLEYES WID TIS! hihi...I hav made a tune 4 tht Dialogue,diii....Thtz y i hav put dwn som Dotz in btwn wordz!!!πŸ˜‰
Hooonii koo...Koii nahii..Tal ..saktaaa!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†( aap ke paas iss phrase ke alawa koi dialogue nahi hey kya?πŸ˜‰)..Kya tumne 'Parikshit' Maharaj ke kahani nahi suni?😲...wo Moth se bechne keliye sadra mein ek mehel banaya...Kadi suraksha mein jee rehe they..Pas kya kaein..Moth...Phal( Fruit) ke roop mein unke saamne aagaye!!!..Hooniiii koo..koooi..nahiiii...taall..sakta!!!
MIRCHY UR 2 MUCH...IM LAUGHNG MORE IN UR BRACKET STUFF .. UR THOUGHTS...STOP IT DEAR!🀣 WELL BT I DIDNT KNR\EW TIS STRY ABT PARAKISHIT..THANX 4 MKNG ME KNO TAT SUCH THNG /STRY XSITED...well..Tht story is quite famouzz....Itz lyk Parikshit maharaj getz a shaap frm a baba.. tht he'll b bitten by King f snakez( 4gt d actual name!!😭).within 7 dayzz.....N so wot he doez is...he makez a big mehel in d middle f sea n lives thr ...But on d 7th day.....King of snakes ..he turnz in2(u No Godz..they can change themselves in2 anythin n any1 na?) a small worm n Hides himself in a Banana....n wen Parilshit maharaj eatz d banana, King f snakez bitz em ..n he diezz.....😭..Thtz d story...welll..since i was typin so fast, i hav amde soo many spellin mistakez!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..Plzz xcuse thoz diiiiπŸ˜›...Jst put thiz story dwn 2 make My 'Chand's Master dialogue mre credible...Hooooniiii ko...Koooiiii..nahiiii Taal saktaaaa!!!🀣
Chand:-....(starein @ Karnataki).....Jii mein Ruk jaaoonga...sirf isiliye kyunki....aapne ne mujhse rukne ko kaha,bhaabhiii😳😳😳

sanyo did notice tht Chand is staring @ karnatakiii n 😊 n goes 2 chand lyk...

Sanyo:- Chanddd...mein wahan nahii.(Pointing @ karnataki).yehan hoon!!
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TIS IS ONE OF THE BEST DIALOGUES OR THE SCENE TAT U HVE WRITTEN...IM IMAGINING SANYOS CONFUSED FACE N CHANDS PUPPY LUK HE MUST HVE 4 KARNATAKI...I WAS IN SPLITS READG TIS...WOW MIRCHY U KNO HOW 2 PULL OFF!....awww..Diiii.....lve ya lodzzzzzzzzzzzzzπŸ€—mwah!
Vaishali:- woo..Kuch bhi nahi...usse umse door rehne ko kaho....Hum bhi kissi se kam nahi hey!!!πŸ˜ƒ
VAISHALI IS FALLNG 4 PUNDER...HOW SWEET...IM WAITG 4 THEIR LUVSTRY 2 STRT...well..I'm thinkin f Nok-jhok scenes 4 Pundir n Vaishali!!!πŸ˜‰..thn eventualy letz make em fall in lve!!!πŸ˜‰
Mujhe wo bahuth yaad aati hey!!😭😭😭.......(recalling all d momentz since childhood......n thn aftr a while, taking a deep breath)...yeh sab bathein hum baad mein karenge!!!...ab humhe kissi bhi haal mein ajmeer ko bachana hey!!!
ACTUALLY IN THE SERIAL PRC WE NEVER GOT 2 C PRC N SAMAR MOMENTS...THEIR CHILDHOOD MOMENTS WER NVR SHOWN.. THE 1ST TIME SAMAR MADE A ENTRY IT WAS PRC N SAMARS HUG...VERY COLD WID NO FEELINGS...N THY NVR TALKED ABT THEIR FRIENDSHIP, ABT THE KHAX\ZANA KHOJ...EVERYTHG WAS SO SUBDUED...BT FROM UR FF IM ENJOYG TIS BONDING OF THEM...N I WANT 2 SEE THEM RECOLLECTNG THEIR MOMENTS INFRNT OF PRATHA IN 1 OF UR UPDATES!
SO DEAR WHO SAYS U DUUNO HINDI OR UR WEAK...U HVE WRITTEN EVERYTHG IN SO SHUD HINDI TAT IM TRYG 2 UNDERSTND THE MEANG OF IT...UR GUD AT IT...VERY WELL WRITTEN!!N IM WAITG 4 MRE....MUAH



Diiiii...scroll up ..u'll find d Parikshit story..I hav ritten thr in English!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³...I loved ur suggestion.....so I will com up wid som Chit-chat or dream sequence..wer Samar n Prithvi recall thr olden dayzz...i wanna Bring up 'Bhimdev aswelll!!😳...I realli loved him n his 'Mahamantrii' n d eng accent he used wen callin..'Mahhaa-Mantri'πŸ˜†..I jst want u 2 tell me...hw it soundzz?πŸ˜›I mean...PRC didnt kill Bhimdev in tht war coz his son Vanraj begged 2 leav em....(THT cutie- cute -Intelligent Vanraj)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰Old 1!!πŸ˜ƒ....& Tht Indravati tooo..it will b funny ....wen Sanyo getz pissed off seeing Indravati ...wotz ur opinion dii?😳😳😳

I neva felt tht i no Hindi properly....😭😭😭....anywayzz...thankz alott 4 ur appreciation dii..I jst lve ya sooooooooooooooo much!!!😳😳😳...will upd8 soon!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Edited by mirchy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

i hav checked the update, its really amazing, keep it up!



Thankq sweety 4 ur support!!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
Wow.πŸ‘ wonder updateπŸ‘.Keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Wow.πŸ‘ wonder updateπŸ‘.Keep it up.



Thankq sweety!!!😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow mirchy...........it was a superb updateπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...........wow I really liked the way Ungli babaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† ne swayamvar ko tal diyaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..........n when chand talks to sanyo n staring at karnatakiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰.............haila I bursted out laughing yaarπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...........n that word is alak niranjan dear.........not halat niranjanπŸ˜‰............but I m very tensed that now what PRC n Samar will do😭😲............waiting 4 the next part.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

Wow mirchy...........it was a superb updateπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...........wow I really liked the way Ungli babaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† ne swayamvar ko tal diyaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..........n when chand talks to sanyo n staring at karnatakiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰.............haila I bursted out laughing yaarπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...........n that word is alak niranjan dear.........not halat niranjanπŸ˜‰............but I m very tensed that now what PRC n Samar will do😭😲............waiting 4 the next part.πŸ˜ƒ



awww..Thankz a lottt dear😳😳😳...oh yaaa....Ungli baba is jst scary|!!!!πŸ˜†..Btw..Thankz sweety..i was wondering as 2 word xactly tht word was...thtz y i put 'Halak niranjan' oopzz sory!πŸ˜›...xcuse me 4 tht!😳...I'll update d next part soon!😳Stay tuned!!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Scene 6 :- Kannauj mein Phool aur Ajmeer mein Khoon se...Maha-aarti!!!

Recap:- Pritha is worried as Samar is gng 4 Yudh!!😭...But Samar Manofyes herπŸ˜‰......Ethar in Ajmeer, Kana Chauhan in4mz Prithvi tht Ghori is trying 2 create a Galat fami tht him n his men r in Uthar disha...😑..N with d help f evry1 n Prithvi's Idea, They finishez off 4/5 tukdiez f GhoriπŸ˜ƒ....In Kannauj Chand createz a plot 2 pstpon d Swayamwar!πŸ˜‰..Him wid the help f Karnataki, Vaishali n fcouse Sanyo, Makez a fool outa Jaichand...aur Swayamwar talne ko usse majboor kar deta hey!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Sainik:-
Par Rajmata tho is waqt Vyapariyon se Zewar aur Kapde dekh rahi hey!!😊

PRC:- KYA?😲 Matlab.....Ghori aur unke aadmii........
Samar:-..............Mehel ke andar pahunch gaye!!!
PRC:- Samar...Humhe jaldi hi kuch karna hoga.....Maa ki jaan ko khatra hey!!!😭...Tum ek kaam karo....Kissi bhi tharah andar jao...aur..Ghori aur uske aadmiyon par nazar rakho.....πŸ˜ƒ..........(Hugz Samar B4 he leaves n sayz).....Apne khyal Rakhna!😊
Samar:- Tum chinta mat karo Prithvi....😊...Mere hote hue Rajmata ko kuch bhi nahi hoga!😊
PRC:- (2 Kana n Sikkandar)...Sikkandar aur Kana....aap donon Samar ke sath jao....Usse aap logon ka madad ki zaroorat hogi!😳...Jaayiye!😊
Kana:- Par Maharajjjj....(Stopz in d middle as PRC Showed a 'STOP' pluckcard wid his handzz!!)πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰...[Yeh Maharaj Bhi na?....R u tryin 2 make Kana Faint by showing ur 'Galy typ Fingerz'?😲..Hey galzz...hav u eva noticed?...PRC(talkin abt A) has Got nice fingerzz....I mean really long 1zz!!!😳☺️..ahem!ahem! 😳Khabardar.....if som1 stares @ Sanyo's PRC....😳....well..I'm not gonna do nathin wid ppl who stares @ him...I'll definitely make em eat 'Teeki Mirchiezz'....'Hw dare he luk soo smokin Hott n sexy'?πŸ˜†)
PRC:- Jao Kana.....Meri Fikar mat karo..Arjun aur Pundir mere sath hey😳
Sikkandar n Kana:- Jii Maharaj😳(leaves frm thr😊)
PRC:- Arjun....Ab meri bath Dhyan se suno.....😳.....Ghori ke Dhaa-he- ne hath (Right hand i meantπŸ˜›)..Hey...Thadar Kan (is it Thadar khan or Dadar Khan?πŸ˜•)..........Tum usse Ghori se Door rakhnaπŸ˜‰...
Arjun:- πŸ˜‰.....Samach gaya, MaharaaajjjjπŸ˜‰....Kash Kaa...ki...Mera matlab hey..Karnataki'Bhabhi' ethar hota..Tho mujhe ithna mehnat karne ka koi zaroorat nahi hota!πŸ˜‰
PRC:- πŸ˜†
Pundir:- Chup ho jao ,Arjun.....😑...Tumhe us ladki ki padi hey?😑
PRC:- Ladki nahii...Bhabhi bolo,Pundir!πŸ˜‰....Wo ab sirf ek Narthki nahi heyyy..Tumhare..nahi...'Humare' honewali Bhabhi hey'πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³.......Arjun..Tum Jao...Mein aur Pundir,abhi aaya!!πŸ˜‰

The scene shiftz 2 Kannauj....Sanyo's KamraπŸ˜ƒ


Chand:- Bhabhi....aap aaraam keejiye...ab Ungli baba ko Maharaj se milne ka samayh hogaya!πŸ˜‰
Sanyo:- .....mm....Chand......wo......Prithvi ki koi khabar aayi hey?😭..Mujhe uski bahuth chinta ho rahi hey!!😭😭😭
Chand:- Abhi tak tho koi khabar nhi aayaa😭..Jaise hi mujhe koi khabar mil jaye, mein aap ko zaroor batadoonga, BhabhiπŸ˜ƒ...aap nishchint rahiye!!😳( 2 Vaishali)...aap Darwaza kholiye!πŸ˜ƒ

Nayantara, JC, Rajmata Roopsundari(Sanyo's dadi,rie?πŸ˜•)...evry1z outside d Room w8in 4 Ungli baba πŸ˜†

JC:- (on seeing baba)..Baba...ab meri beti kaisi hey?😳😭
Baba:- Khatre se baahar hey..Parrrrrr.....Agar Tum Hawan Nahi kiya na?........Thoo...Honiii koo..koooiii nahiii...Taal sakttaaa!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
JC:- Ji baba...hum Hawan ki thayyaari karwayeinge...aap Humare liye Hawan mein shaamil ho jayiye!!!

Chand getz a 😲 hearing thizπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Chand 2 himself

Chand:- Heeyy Bhagwan...Mein tho gaye kaam se!!😭😭😭..Ab mein kya karoon?😲..Mujhe tho koi Mantra nahi aata...sivayi kavitaayein!!!😭😭..Meri madat karo ,Mahadev!!😭😭😭.....Warna apne baaki ke zindgi iss Jaichand ke khedkhane mein jeena padega!!😭😭😭......Agar mujhe khed-khane mein daala gaya..tho Karnataki kissi aur ke sath shadi karegi!!!πŸ˜†(Ohh God.....Kaviraaj...aap bhi na?......U wer concerned abt bein in khedkhana na? nw..beech mein wer did Karnataki's shadi com frmπŸ˜†..U r Impossible,love!!πŸ˜›)....(n Chand startz imagining Karnataki's Shadi wid som Random guy!!!!....N jst 4getz tht hez baba n Burstz out in 😑) " Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii"🀒

Evry1 is 😲ed..seein thiz

JC:- Kyaa Hua , baba?😲...aap ithne gusse mein kyun ho?😲...mein ne kuch galat kaha?😲

Chand then realises n goez lyk

Chand:-
(in his mind) Bhagwan ki lakh lakh shukar hey...yeh bas ek sapna tha"πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ....(n 2 JC)....Wooooo...woo hum......(seeing him Struggling, his "wifeyy" comz 4ward 2 his rescue!!!)
Karnataki:- woo..Maharaj...Baba ko apne sathiyon ke sath Koteshwar Mandir ke yatra mein jaana hey!πŸ˜ƒ...issiliyee....wo yeh hawan nahi kar sakte!😊
BABA:- Hah, Maharaj...(He stopz n startz 2 think..n jst smilez n continues!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ.....somthing is cukin up in his mind..πŸ˜‰...Again i'm telling u..I'm d SCRIPT-RITER buddy!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†)...Maharaj.....aap yehan Hawan keejiye..Hum apne Khas Shishyon ko Hawan keliye bhijwadenge....aur Rajkumariji ko....Humare sath aane deejiye!!!πŸ˜‰
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JC:- KYA? KYUN?😲
BABA:- Ungli baba se Kissi swal poochee..yeh Unglii baba bilkul bardaashth nahi kar sakta!!!😑...Honiii..Kooo..Kooiii nahii taal saktaa!!!πŸ˜‰ ( Kaviraaaj...aap ko tho Actor banna chahiye thaa...Kya acting hey,bhai?πŸ˜‰)
JC:- Kshama keejiye ,baba....Par Rajkumari ji kooo....hum
Baba:- Humara matlab hey....Agle pooranmasi ke din...Koteshwar Mandir ke yatra shuri hota hey...aur Rajkumari ji par aanewali vipti ko..talne keliye...usse Koteshwar mandir akele jaana zaroori heyyyπŸ˜‰.....Aap chahte tho....uss ki doston ko bhi uski sath bhej sakte hooπŸ˜ƒ.....Aap mehel mein Hawan karwa deejiye!😳...Shadi se pehle usse wahan jaakar Shiv-Parvati mandir mei Pooja karna hi padegi!!! warnaaaaa....Honii koo..Koooi nahii Taal saktaaa!!!πŸ˜‰
JC:- Jaise aap ki aagya,baba!πŸ˜ƒ
Baba:- Ab hum jaa rehe hey....aap Hawan bhi agle pooran mazi ke din shuru keejiye!!!πŸ˜ƒ

(Chand leves wid Karnataki n sneekes in2 his room along wid Karnataki)

Karnataki:-
Kaviraaaj.....Kya hum aapse kuch pooch sakti hoon?πŸ˜•
Chand:- hah...Poochoo..Poohooo( STOP being xcited yaar, she will get scared!!!πŸ˜‰)
Karnataki:- aapne maharaj se Rajkumariji ko Koteshwar Mandir bhejne ko kyun kaha?😲
Chand:- (Goes near Karnataki ....places his handz on her shoulderz n lukz straight in2 her eyez n tellzzz)....Karnatakii,Prithvi aur Sanyogita ki Prem kahani issi Yatra se shuru hogaya tha...Aur mein chahta hoon ki un donon..Shadi se pehle ek aur baar...Koteshwar Mandir ke Yatra mein Shamil hojaye....Log kehte hey.....agar Pyar karnewalon iss yatra mein Shadi se pehle 3 baar jaaye tho....unke janam janam ka Rishta Pakki hojata hey....Shadi ke 7 phere se 7 janam ka rishta juda jata heyy...Par...Koteshwar Mandir mein 3 baar shadi se pehle jaaoge tho har ek janam mein wo donon ek dusre keliye janam lenge!!!😳..Mein apne saare doston keliye ithna tho kar sakta hoon na?😳...Kyunki Prithvi ki khushiyaan,Sanyogita ke sath rehne se heyy aur Hum doston ki Khushiyan Prithvi ki Khushi mein hey!😳....(Ohh My God....Chand.....U r such chweet heart...hw sweet!!!😳😳😳...How can u b soooo sweeet Chand?😲)...Karnatakiii, Tum bas ek bath ka Dhyan rakhna..Bhabhi ko yeh sab nahi pata chalna chahiye.....na hi Prithvi ko..Kyunki mein yeh ab Mandir pahunchne ke baad unse Batana chahta hoonπŸ˜ƒ, Kya tum mera sath doge?
😳( How can she say No, Chand?..No1 in diz world can b as sweet as U...shez so lucky tht u love her!!!😳😳😳)
Karnataki:- Kaviraaj...Hum.....hum bhii aap ke sath is yatra mein aana chahti hoon😳....aap..aap ko koi aytraaz nahi na?😳

Hearing thiz, Chand jst stares @ her......Completly FIDA ovr er inocnse!!😳😳😳....n they play d tune 'Ninini sasa in d BG...n d scene shiftz 2 Ajmeer n we seee Kana n Sikkander killin off Ghori's Aadmi 1 by 1 ...n Tadar Khan is Fida over a 'Narthki'

Tadar Khan:-
Tum Hindusthani Narthakiyan bhi na? Kamal ke nachte ho!!!πŸ˜‰
Narthki:- Hum nachne ke sath sath..Nachathe bhi hey Mallikkk!!πŸ˜‰waise bhii...Hum ne tho aap ko pehle kabhi nahi dekhaaa....aap yahan par naye ho kya?😳😳😳
Tadar Khan:- ha!ha! Hum aaj hi ethar aaya hey...Apne Sultan ke sath!!!😳😳😳
Narthki:- Yeh Sultan kya cheez hey?πŸ˜†
Tadar Khan:- Heyyy Sundari....wo Koi Cheez nahi.....Humare Malik ke naam hey, Sultan..Sultan Mohammad Ghori!!!😳😳😳
Narthki:- ....Achaa...aap ke Sultan Yahan Ajmeer mein kya kar rehe hey?😳
Tadar Khan:- yehh tho hum aap se nahi keh sakte!!!😭😭😭
Narthki:- aap bhi na?😭😭😭.....Aap humse zara sa bhi Pyar nahi Karte hey na?😭.....Mein ne koi raaz tho nahi poocha na?😭...Bas ek seetha sadha sawal..aur aap uska bhi jawab nahi dey sakte?😭Chal hat...Hum jaa rehe hey!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

N starz 2 walk off....But Tadar khan stops 'HER' n sayzz...


Tadar Khan:- Aap humse naraz mat hojayiye..Hum batate hey!!!😳😳😳.....n tellz 'HER ' Sultan's plan!!!πŸ˜‰
Narthki:- Achaaa...Aap ke Sultan 'Shetan' ka dusra naam hey kya? Sheythani chale koi usse seekhen!!!😳😳😳.....😳Hum abhi aate heyy...aap ethar Rukiyee!!!😳😳😳.....Hum aap keliye Khana lekar aate hey!!!😳😳😳

'SHE ' goez frm thr n straight away goez 2 Prithvi...n takez off 'HER' ghoonghat n we see 'HER ' face'..itz Non other than Mr.Funny Arjun!!!πŸ˜†Seeing Arjun in a Narthki's Choli n all tht Pundir Burstz out laughing!!πŸ˜†

Pundir:- Arjun......Tum bahuth Khubsoorat lag rehe ho!!
Arjun:- Mujhe pata hey..Tumhe kehne ki Koi zaroorat nahi hey!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Pundir:-πŸ˜†
PRC:- Yeh Kya hey,Arjun?😲
Arjun:-
Yeh kya hey..Kya nahi heyyy...yeh sab tho mein thumhe baad mein samchaoonga...ab suno...Sultan ethar 2 maksad se aaye hey.....ek..Jaise us Sandesh mein likha tha..waise usse Ajmeer ke taj aur Shahi mor chahiye!!!😑 Dusra....Usse lagta hey ki Tumhare Sab se badi kamzori..Rajmata hey..aur wo Rajmata ko Bandi banakar Tumhe....Unke saamne tumhe maarna chahte hey!!!😭😭😭
PRC:- tumhe yeh sab kisne bataya??😲
Arjun:- Tadar Khan ne!!!😑😑😑
Pundir:- Mein Usse Maar daaloonga!!! USKA ITHNA HIMMAT..KI WO...WO RAJMATA KE SATH BARTAMEEZI KARNE KO SOCH RAHA HEY?😑😑😑
PRC:- Shanth ho jao Pundir...Humhe soch samachkar apna kadam aage badana hoga!

Samar kinda bumpz on2 him sayin...

Samar:- Prithviiiiii...Rajmata ko Ghori ne bandi bana diya!!!😭...aur wahan par Ghori ke Dus aadmi pehra dete heyyy.....wo Apni kamre mein hey....Aur Ghori bhi wahan hey😭😭😭...Ab humhe jo kuch bhi karna hey..soch samchkar karna heyy😭😭😭...warnaa........😭😭😭

PRC getz 😑😑😑....n shoutzzz(Dire na Dire na dira din din din..in d BG)πŸ˜‰

PRC:- BAS!!!...ab yeh Chhoohe-billi ka khel mujhse bardasht nahi hotaa....Uss Ghori ko mein maar daaloonga..Maa ko mein aazad karwahi doonga!!!😑
Kana:- Shanth Hojayiye maharaj...mein aur Sikkandar....Ghori ke saare aadmiyon ko maar dala...ab bus baarah bache hey...Dus sainik aur Ghori aur unke wo Thadar Khan!!!😑😑😑
Sikkandar:- Hah maharaj....aur Is waqt Ghori Rajmata ke kamre mein nahi hey...wo us Tadar khan ko doondne gaya hey....Mujhe lagta hey,,,yehi sahi waqt hey...
Kana:- Sikkandar theek keh rehe hey...Ghori ke aadmiyon ko maarkar hum unke jagah le lete hey!!!😳😳😳
Sikkandar:- Har Har Mahadev!
Evry1...Har Har Mahadev!😳😳😳

Evry1 chup chap enterz Rajmataz room n Rajmata...( itz d old 1 ..i mean d lady who played Rajat'z mum...I prefer her over d new 1..New1 luked mre lyk d 'Vamp'😭😭😭..D old1 was lvely so..shez ma Rani Kamlavati!!😳😳😳)...sees Prithvi n he sees her


Prithvi:- Shhhh....(Tellz her by eshara tht no1 shd findout tht hez in d room!!!😳)
Kamlavati:- 😊

PRc's frndz killz evry soldier 1 by 1 n 'Dhamak Dhamak' Jai Jai PRC playz in d BG!!😳😳😳
Evry1 disguisz themselves as Ghori's aadmi n w8z 4 Ghori!!!....n Ghori enterz wid Tadar Khan.....Lukz lyk Tadar Khan is still w8in 4 hiz 'Dream gal'Narthki' 2 com up wid his Khana!!πŸ˜†


Ghori:-
Tadar Khaaan.....Tum kisse doond rahe ho?😑
Tadar Khan:- jii sultan...mein wooooo.....Kissi ko bhi nahi!!πŸ˜†(Bichara.....Sultan ke Right hand ban kar Phas gaya yaar!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...Theek se Sapna bhi nahi dekhne dete yeh sultan,hey na..Taddduuuuu?πŸ˜‰)

Ghori :-
(Goez 2 Kamlavati n is lyk ).....Rajmata ko Ghori ka Salam....aaj ...Hum aapke beta Uss Prithviraaj Chauhan ko aapke saamne maut denewale hey!!( n Ghori's scary music frm PRC playz in d BG)..n he startz laughing his master piece laugh..tht 'kikikikkikikikiki'.....yaa..yaa...da same 1 wer he laughzz by using his whole body!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†)

Kamlavati:
- Hmm....Is mein Hasne ki kya bath hey,Luteree....Tum mere bete ke saamna bhi nahi kar paoge!!😑Kyunki mera beta..ek sacche Rajput hey...wo ek Chauhan hey...aur Wo Tum jaise KAYAR Nahi!!😑😑😑...aur Rahi bath mere bete ko maarne ki.....Kon kisse maarta hey..yeh tho tumhe waqt hi batayega,Ghoriii!!!😑
Ghori:- wah!wah!wah!..kya Tum sabhi Hindusthani log ek jaise hey?😲...Maut saamne khade heyy..phir bhi zubaan kuch zyada hii chalate hey!!!...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†(kikikikikikiikki again).....Hum bhi dekhte hey...aap ke beta is waqt humhe kaise maarenge!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

The scene shiftz 2 Chittor Mehel n we see Pritha dng Talwar Bazi...n her Mahamantri enterzz

Rajaram:- Maharani ki Jai ho...😊
Pritha:- Rajaramjii Batayiye....Ajmeer se koi khabar aaya?😲
Rajaram:- Ajmeer mein Yudh shuru bhi nahi hua Maharanijiii😲
Pritha:- KYA?😲😲....Par yeh kaise ho sakta hey?😲😲😲...Lagta hey humhe khud Ajmeer jaaana padega!!😭
Rajaram:- Nahi Maharanijii...Hum jaayenge....Hum aapse yeh kehne aaya ..ki aap se milne Ujjein se Rajmkumari INDRAVARTI aayi hey!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Pritha:- Rajkumari INDRAVATI?...ab..yeh yehan kyun aayi hey?😲😲😲...aap jaayiye..hum abhi aate hey!!
πŸ˜²πŸ˜•

Pritha goes 2 MEHMAAN KAKSH n meetz Rajkumari Indravati!!πŸ˜‰

Pritha:-
Namaste Rajkumariji....aap yehan kaise?πŸ˜•...aap theek tho hey na?

Indravati:- Hum thek hey...Hum apni honewali 'Bahan- sasural' se uhi milne chali aayi!!😳😳😳
Pritha:-
😲KYA?😲

D epi endz on Pritha's Shocked face n Indravati's 😈 face!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

PRECAP:-

Pundir:-
Arjun......ek aur baar naachonaaa😳😳😳...aaj se tum hi Dilli ke Khas Narthak..mera matlab heyy..Narthki!!!πŸ˜‰,Kyun Prithvi?πŸ˜‰

PRC:
- Pundir.......Agar mein Sanyogita se Pyar karne se pehle issse mila hota..Tho shayad....ab tak....yeh Dilli ke Maharani hoti!!!πŸ˜‰

soo Thtz it 4 2day my sweetie piezz..plzz xcuse any mistakezzz....Btw...I'm not bein Racist ( evn i'm an Indian😳) or anythin wid d use f d word ( Hindusthani) in my ff..itz jst my Character demandz 2 say thoz wordz!!😭..n do gimme ur review..lve ya all lodzzz😳

- PRC's Sanyo!πŸ˜‰

Edited by mirchy - 16 years ago

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