Farewell My Jungliee Billie - A Poem from Prithvi

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SandstarQueen

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi All, Like many others i have been really depressed since sundays episode and have been thinking about Prithvi and Sanyo non stop, anyway i ended up writing a poem - its in english sorry - which is like a goodby from Prithvi to his Sanyo.

Please have a look and let me have your comments - good and bad😉

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mehraan

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Posted: 16 years ago

wow saima...i normally im not ol at tis time...i was abt 2 wind up...bt i thought of jus glancng it 1ce...n i went on readg it thrice now....its so beautifully written...the last few lines where u have described prcs begging 4 forgiveness n his heart yearning 2 b wid her...basically the last 9 lines ....thy r beautiful...i dunno how 2 say it.. ...u have put the heart n soul in those lines.....i can jus imagine prcs state wen he was leavng sanyo...his feelings 4 her...his unconditional luv 4 her...2gud!keep it up dear!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehraan
wow saima...i normally im not ol at tis time...i was abt 2 wind up...bt i thought of jus glancng it 1ce...n i went on readg it thrice now....its so beautifully written...the last few lines where u have described prcs begging 4 forgiveness n his heart yearning 2 b wid her...basically the last 9 lines ....thy r beautiful...i dunno how 2 say it.. ...u have put the heart n soul in those lines.....i can jus imagine prcs state wen he was leavng sanyo...his feelings 4 her...his unconditional luv 4 her...2gud!keep it up dear!

Thanks so much for your comments Mehr, i'm glad you liked it. I had all these feelings inside so thought i would get them out. I think i will try and make a VM using the poem and some scenes aswell😊😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow sandy ..I never knew u such a good writer sweetie...Very well written.... I just luved the way u potrayed PRC's feelings in the poem..hats off to u dear! & Yup mehr I agree with u sweetie we cannot even imagine what PRC felt when he was leaving Sanyo!😉😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti
Wow sandy ..I never knew u such a good writer sweetie...Very well written.... I just luved the way u potrayed PRC's feelings in the poem..hats off to u dear! & Yup mehr I agree with u sweetie we cannot even imagine what PRC felt when he was leaving Sanyo!😉😊

Thanks Megha I'm really glad that you liked it and that i managed to convey what PRC might have been feeling when he was leaving behind his junglie bille😭😭

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kalyani

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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow Saima di.............I have no words yaar...............beautiful thats all I can say...........I was nearly crying when I read ur poem😭😭............very nice.👏

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

Yes Sandy u surely did manage to convey PRC' feelings! & Your Welcome buddy!😉😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan
Wow Saima di.............I have no words yaar...............beautiful thats all I can say...........I was nearly crying when I read ur poem😭😭............very nice.👏

Sorry for making you cry Choti Bena but so glad that you liked it, i will try and make it into a VM and put it together with some pictures or videos😊

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kalyani

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen

Sorry for making you cry Choti Bena but so glad that you liked it, i will try and make it into a VM and put it together with some pictures or videos😊

yes its a gud idea............no di u need not say sorry............while reading ur poem I just remembered the scenes of PRC n Sanyo n got emotional.😭